Tarey new os..last partupdated on pg 10updt on 19/7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hyy guys after so long time main kuch likhne jaa rahi ho m very upset for tarey pata nahi unka kya hoga so main sirf apna mind divert karne ke liye yeh os likha rahi hoo pata nahi yeh main complete kar paungi ki nahi so pls forgive me for this...

Toh guys here u go rey accident hone ka naatak karta hai joh tani ko pata chalta hai aur woh rey ko bhala bura keh kke jodhpur wapas jati hai lekin unfoortunitly rey ka sach main accident ho jata hai usme woh apni memory loss karta hai usse kuch yaad nahi sirf apni family ke aalawa k yeh intro hai pls agar apko acha laga toh main part one update karogi hain jaldi batana...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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xciting intro...plz do continue😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1
5 years latter
in shekhawat house
tani:bhai bhai kaha ho aap...
Swayam:kya hua tani...
Tani:bhai kaha ho aap pata hai na aaj apki shadi hai aur aap kaha pe gayab ho jate ho ...
Swayam:main kahi nahi gayab hua tani woh toh main sirf apne coll ke din yaaad kar raha tha...swayam hold whole gang pic in his hand...
Tani:bhai aaj sab aarahe hai apki shadi main...
Swayam:pata hai aarahe hai sab...par...
Tani:par kya bhai...
Swayam:woh...
Suddenly swayam cell ring...
Sharon:swayam kaha ho tum maine tuhme aaja ghar bulaya tha na...
Swayam:chill sharron aaj hamari shadi hai waise bhi tum mere ghar hamesha ke liye aarahi ho toh chup chup ke milne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...
Sharon:blush pata hai lekin akhri bar main chahti hoon ki tum mere ghar window se aajao aaogena plzzz.
Swayam:kyu nahi zaroor aaunga...wait karna mera...
Tani:bhai aap nahi jaa sakte bhabhi se milne...shadi se pehle dulha dulhan ekdosre ko nahi dekhte...
Swayam:chill tani unhe kon batayega ki main sharon se milne gayahoo kya tum bataogi...
Tani:bhai aap k nahi bataoungi lekin jaldi aajana...ha...
Swayam:haa meri ma...
N swayam goes...
Tani:mujhe pata hai bhai aap kyu pareshan the woh aap rey ko miss kar rahe the na...

In usa
rey ek famous bussiness taycoon and totally change jo woh coll life main tha usse ooposite..n woh sab kuch bhool chuka hai usse uske frnds ke bare main kuch pata nahi sirf woh bussiness ke bare main janta hai...
In reys company there was a beautifull secretary of rey name riya...
In reys office..
Riya:may i come in sir...
Rey:yes come riya toh aaj ka kya plan hai...
Riya:kya sir ohhi mean aaj hamari meeting hain...par woh..
Rey:par kya...
Riya:par sir woh clients ne na meeting cancle karke kal india main rakhi hai...
Rey::india main par kaha...
Riya:sir oh jodhpur main i gus...
Rey:jodhpur naam kahi suna sa lag raha hai...
Riya:sach main ssir kya aap waha gaye the pehle...
Rey:nahi toh ...haan par ab jana padega pata hai na yeh deal hamare liye kitni khas hai...
Riya:haan sir toh aaj ki ticket book karu ...

Rey::ann ham aaj hi jayenge...

Woh riya funny tipes hai...

Aftersome hours
rey n riya jodhpur main aajate hai...

In jodhpur
swayam house...
Tauji:tani woh tuhmari frnds aagaye kya...
Tani:abhi tak nahi tauji...
Woh dekho aagaye...
All gangs enter..all coupls are married..
Vicky::hey tani swayam kaha hai...
Nil:haan kaha hai woh...
Bharat:haan mujhe kabse dout tha indoono ke beech mainkuch locha hai par yehvicky sune toh na...unhke beech main chemesrtyyy dikhti thi...
Neha:issi liye tum sab woh haath upper karte teh...
Nil:haan...
Tani:yeh dekho bhai aagaye...
Swayam:hi guys kaise ho tum sab...
Nil:haan thick hai shadi kar ke barbad ho gaye hai aur ab tuhmari baari hai...
Bharat:haan yeh toh sahi baat hai...
Simmi:woh main na ab sharon ke paas jati hooo...
Tani:haan aao na main leke jati hoon apko bhabhi ke paas..
Simmi rinni ntani goes...
Aashi:kash yaha pe...
Nil:haan main bhi usse bohot miss karta hoon par nahi usne kabhi call kiya aur nahi kabhi milne aaya...
Swayam:maine bhi rey ko bohot try kiya par...
Vicky:sab haamari galti usse din agar hamne rey ko roka hota toh aaj rey hamare sath hota...
Tauji:aare tum sab yahi ho chalo bbhai shadi ka mujhrat kuch waqt baat hai jadii chalo aur swayam tayyar nahi hona hai kya...
Swayam:haan papa ...

Scene shfted to rey n riya...
Woh gadi main aajare hote hain achanak unki car stop ho jatii hai aur woh bhi swayam ke ghar ke paas...
Rey:ohh shit iss car ko bhi abhi kharab hona tha kya...
Riya:ab kya kare sir ...
Rey:kuch toh karna hoga...ham aage koi help milti hai toh dekhte hai...
Riya:par sir itni raat ko..
Rey:koi toh hoga na riyaatum sirf chalo mere sath...
Kuch der chalne ke baad unhe swayam ka house dikhayi deta hai...

Riya:sir waha dekhiye...
Rey:kya...
Riya:sir waha shadi hai ham waha chalte hai koi toh hame waha pe zarror help karega...
Rey:par bin bulaye...
Rya:sir ham waha khana khane nahi jaa rahe hai sirf help mangne ja rahe hai...
Rey:tum thick ke rahi ho chalo wahi jate hai...
N they goes...

So guys hows it...i know bohot drametic hai ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res...m first...ye...

awesome...5 year leap...

rey in jodhpur and gang too...lovely...
Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
Can't wait got taarey meet
Plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum update...dramatic h bt i luv drama...😳
plz do continue soon n plz do pm me wen u update
😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice First Part... Wow after 5 years !! Waiting for the next part !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome part dear...
Waiting for next one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: iheartd3

<font color="#FF0066"><font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="3">awesum update...dramatic h bt i luv drama...😳
plz do continue soon n plz do pm me wen u update</font>
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thanx for likin my story..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting start
try to cont. soon.

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