ArHi Collab:Collided Paths- NOTE pg35 (23rd Nov)

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Vishavjeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Amazingly awesome update, it was.

Thanks for the PM buddy!!!

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sushmita ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Well its really seems interesting jourey of our two love birds...prologe is just awesome with nw concept...amused by the line three mistakes i think latter on khushi will written a book my three mistakes of my life in AR haha

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Drama.Queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Nice prologue and very different concept

Arnav will be teaching a lesson to Khushi then & wow amazing introduction between Arshi
They bumped into each other and how dare Khushi scream at him like that heh?
And how dare you talk to me like that (haha a dialogue I use in my daily basis stolen from Arnav only 😆

Amazing prologue start

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Drama.Queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Chapter 1 was awesome

Got a very clear picture of both Arshi family :)

& hey Rohan and Khushi break up sounded good and hope he doesn't hurt her

& it's sad to know Khushi doesn't know who she had bumped into but then if she didn't there will be no Arshi 😆

& Rahul Anjali Jodi nice

Thanks for the pm

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Drama.Queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Chapter 2

Amazing

Aha so you two take turn to writing didn't realise lol

Well then both your parts (chapters to be precise) were amazing

Now chapter 2

Wow Khushi meeting the devil again ... & now she should be careful not to to 3 mistakes

Looks like she has already done two
1 being late
2 cooing during office hours inside AR premises (ya she laughed about Nannav name with NK nah)

& ya

Continue soon & thanks for the pms