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At the afer noon zoya came down to see mr khan is working laptop.

She came down and start watching tv and eating popcorn and

He turned to tvand look at the same idotic hero fighting with azainht man half more height then him still he is kicking and othesee givin g flying kiss to the heroine where the heroine of his eyes enjoying eyes wide open

Dammit tha salman khan again...

His eyes are in anger

Miss farouque what are u doing why areu watching that idoitc movie and ur talking while eating u badmanners...why u act like a a child...why u will be like this ur grown up individual bu t exactly opposite and u behave like a10 old kid no manners and at all.what is this

This is how ur parents ...hestopped...

As he seezoya got up form the sofa cleaned th e mess created and turn off the tv and went to her room...

Tehn he realized his mistake...before he turn the girl left the roomand enterand locked form inside...

She went to bed...and open the drawera dn drawed something...

And she slept

It is 4 hours dilshaad and girls came and nazma looked for zoya and she find her sleeping

Sleeping how can u do this dome zoya

I thought atleast u will see themovie and u will give me the details of hm

Ofcourse ammi today is jaiho premere and u know me and zoya are soexicited and .we are intend to watch this movie but y ou call for dargaa so ia ssured that zoya watch the movie.u know she likes salamkhan...

They chatted and aftersometime...htey are into sleep...

Next day...the door open with a packet...

Asad just craned to look at eh door but it si not opened

What happened bhai jaan looking for something...

Yes...miss farouquee

Oh bahijaan don't u know...this is the reason we left her in the house.

What reason he got confused

Bhai jaa n there is a trip for zoya around 5 days ...sheand her companya re into./so only Sunday left for rest so wee thought of her rest and she said there is lot of work and alos travelling and she said she want to enjoy the Sunday like she use d t o in newyork...a,,,na d but none of the words reach his head...

Then nazma open the apacket .and some chip inside it...

They took it and played in the laptop it is all zoya birthday pics...

The day I go t to know that zoya parents are died in accident...she islike a lost child...

We just want to make her happy

Zeenat always worried of...making her desclipling and matured but I don't know I feel if we make her like then she cannot enjoy he r childhood so I start spoling her and away from the strictness and stubbornness...on that day know ther is some thing more I just want to feel that if time permits I want to remain her like this the child like innocence.and I always wished that the person whom I want to marry to my zoya ...should be enough kind to treat her like a child ...

But later I discovered may be this is a,problem to other s so dilsahd bi if she does mistakes in her childishness then please blame menot her it is not her fault...

The letter is a slap for him

Why evetytime he hurt her and why everytime...

He is like a mad man...

But don't know what she is going to do this time...

With that thought he stayed for the 5 days come

Then the sixth day ashecame to the room dilshaad hugged and her nazma and nikhat hugged...her and even ayaan cheerfully make her smile

But something is missing in her she is not chirpy.then she realized that the chirpy is not her this time

But in 5 days something else also happened

His mother is quite disturbed on seeing zoya s photo

He asked ammi but tears are flowing fromher eyes

Because the girl remind her someone who is close to her heart.

She close her eyes and broke down...

Asad came there and hugged her ammi what happened why are u crying what happened it is like her broken dam...

The same helpness the same girl the same best friend of mine

Im 1o yr old ur nanu was one of the riches t peron and we are born and brought up like that

Being the only girl im very much pampered

And on e day im playing in my garde n I saw a girl of ,my age.and sitting alone in the garden iknow she is crying when I come near to her she said don't touch me im a bad omen if u touch me my badomen touches u

Isaid ur the sweet girl I know if bad omen touches me no problem I will face that for u

She told what is ur anme and why are u here

My name is dilshaad and I came to be friend with y

Im shireen I lost my parents a week agoevertone sayignon my birthday they gone to get me my gft I insisted to they left me alone and they went to god...

After that sometime I saw a boy if 15 yrs cane and said to that girl to no t tomtalk with me...

Butwe are friends andbest friends and we became everything

We enter I nto the college some opeooplestart making fun of sherin on that I met him.he saved sherin from that boys

He is Rashid ahmed khan...

He smiled at me after that we became friends...

We used to go around ...we use dti enjoiy

On his birthday he proposed me saying heloves me.i too loved him...but in my house my brother came to ...know aobut this andhe secretly want to marry for some toher person for our property

But me and Rashid ran and got married...

It happened 8 yrs...

After tah we stayed away in Mumbai where asad was born...and at the same time

We are happy...because I became mother again

Namzma were born...

Asad close hs eyes...

After sometime...i got a letter this is from shireen saying that she is in danger...and she need to save herself...

I went to shireen s place I sawgaffur her brother trying to kill hre and I shocked to hear that she is married and at tehs ame tiem she is having 2 kids one boyand one girl which is one 2 yrs old then nazma...

But shocked to ehar tthat Rashid is husband

Ui felt betrayed and felt...i found shireen is in hospital...

Anjd she is pregnant and this is complicated

I felt cheated I felt first time my husband and my best friend cheated me I left evewrything for me and

Afte r that I came to know that after my marriage when asadwas born Rashid went to some work to Bhopal at that time shireen is running from hom,e as gaffur marryiig hre to some evil local gunda for money...

Rashid saved her and kept her in the hose

Later on gafur created a scene like ...mixing some alchol in the drink of shireen and Rashid and make things worse hbetwwen them...

By that time time flewed out and shireen is pregnant and indeed he married shireen.foer the sake of the child...

After that Rashid and shireen get together and they start living each other ...

After sometime shireen got to know about me where Rashid told that he is love in with me and he will alwaysa loved me.and he felt guiltier tha t hebetrayed me ...

Tehn when shireen sais why u choose over me he said he wlawys proud of his dilshad as she always strongand adamant and fighter of the life not like shireeen...who is week andpale and cannot fight for odds in life

This struck shireenand she contacted me and said everything apoligine me for coming between me and rahsid and she also said that she knows that I will take care of her kids

No need to proof as she knows im a good mother

She broke down

At ath asad ahmed khan ashamed of himself

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After all this happened ...

I took care of shireen and try to acknowledge her to play the role of ammi to their kids...

But she is adamant...

She said im here to take care o f them and I will always be there

At the time her days are near and she started neglecting.at lasthe dread full day when her water brokedown and I wheeled her to the hospital

Rashid is not there he is feeling guilty and not able to meet my eyes everytime but always confessing that he loves me he always remained asprotector for shireen but he always want to go back but guilter to face me he always misses asad and nazma ...

Even ayaan reminds him of asad...

And he knows gaffur anything he will do for money if he leaves shireen and go then...he will kill shireen and also kids for money

Sothis is all twisted...

The day I lost shireen and kid is saved I shocked to heart form the doctor that shireen knows that there is a complications in the delivery but she want to have this kid because this is first time not to circumstance sbut dueto relation they got the child...because she begged one day from Rashid that she will not come between Rashid and me but she want to enjoy the relation of her first love she confessed that she loved Rashid from the beginning of the college

He too given the word.

And there after everything happened...

So she lo ved nuzzur and dishaad always keep with me as shireen s love...

The dayu shireen left .and following days I got to know that...rashid met with accident and he said he loves me and died...

That day I lostmy best friend

When after so many years I saw zoya but everytime zoya becomes dull she will rememb er me the 10yr old ...shireen who is my best freeing

The helplessness and the smile.but shireen is not activeas my zoya//.

She is one in the million...

Asad ahmed khan.leave his mother

He drove to some plac

Where shireen s grave and his fathers place

He remembered his mother used to say that his father isnot at fault

And that gaffur and his wife startred playing his life and his brother stoo/////////////

Sorry abbu.

He said first time

Im so sorry abbu I used to hate u because I thought u left ammi for another woman

I don't know tha t the lady is ammi's best friend and ur good friend too

Ibecame stone and hard...even I start the venom words to that angel also

Im sosorry

I promis e iwillbe good bhai for all my sibling s

And good son to ammi

And good friend, and good lover to miss faroque.

I will never hurt her in the process

Im sorry choti ammi

I used to hate...u also

Im sorry choti ammi

He said and came back to the house

He saw ayaaan and humeria was talking

First he got angry as humeria is gaffur daughterbut she is good...but what if she supports her parents and use ayaan as a key board...

He willnot let this happen...

He then look back nikhat and nazma and nuzur.

They are ll sleeping

Im sorry my sister I will be ever to look after u what ever happens...

And finally comes to the last room.

He want to see the face...

pne karam ki kar adaayein
Yaara, Yaaraa... yaara!

Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de
Naye bahaane de
Khaabon ki baarishon ko
Mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)

Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si iltejaa
Ye meri zamanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai haan...

Apne karam ki kar adayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein
Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main

Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise koi duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)

Yaaraa...


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Zoya came out ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,she is avoiding him completely she hersekf busied in her work,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

But one thing is straight. She will remain like that ...

She knows it hurt sher a lot.butshe will remain chirpy .but this is stranger s house right...

Can I comein beta...

Dilshaa dat her door step...

Phoopi aap kab aye hoo...

Beta I didn't come to explain asaad behavior and not going toask to forgive him, but...it is rude and insensitive behavior...

He is like that

When Rashid is the person very much close to him

Rashid used to feel proud he want s agirl but I used to figh t for boy bacuse boy alwaysbe first priority not that women had a corner for boys or atrocat or something but the thing is boys remind the love of the person...

But when asad born Rashid ismore then happy...

He used to pamper him a lot...hesued to play with himteach him walk etc...

U know his first word is not ammi but abbu.but when Rashid keave us I find the emptiness ...in hs eyes he is atough boy for me he neverusede to share anything to me it is like he lost his friend his support...but took the responsibility of nazma and me...he filled the role of father to nazma he used to do everything to nazma where rashid used to do for him.,.

He made her walk and everything and took the resp of the family in his small shoulder

After he became 12 yurs whe n truth hits out I was devasted and be with shrireen and suddenly shireen had became important for me

And In midist I had also lost my son

I don't kmow he has some hopes that one day his father will comebacj to him his father will be support for him,,,,,,,,,,

Bu t tat day he lost his hope and new thing came hatred ness.m

I triede my level best to make himbelieve that this is all destiny but I couldn't think of his point of angle by that time I realized he already becamerock...he cannot enjoyhis childhood cannot be mischevious and cannot be straight thinking...betrayal los s of supportr an d practicality had made my son a rock now he is behavinglike this.but heloves this family.please don't tak his words other wise but not likeif he hurts u next time I make sure u leave this place...but betawhereever u r and how ever ur u willb e always in my heart.

Oph god phoopi ikno w that he has a dredful past but what ever is done it is destiny I followed the destiny I lost my parent s and appi and jeeju tookmme and give me new life I did n't rude with people hurting them and showing in bitterness and all...im fullempathy with me.and last thing...

Do u really think I will get upset with that sadu akhudu emotionally challenged asad ahmed khan.,...then ur wrong im sad because of not he shouts hedone s every meantime but I missedmy jaaneman salman khans movie...premiere...jai jo oh Ithought Sunday hay masti hay mausam hay...lekin that overreacitve ultimately arrogant AAK ,..nemere saari plans par itna bada swimming pool giradiya...

Are wah isse baat pe ek share arrz hay

Itna pyar hay muje salman ji ke latest jai ho ke pictute

] Itna pyar hay muje salman ji ke latest jai ho ke pictute

Untna hi gussa hay muje emotionally challenged AAK ke lecture...

Dilshaa d laughed...

Where as ayaan clapped and followed by nazma and nuzzor joined.

Isse baat pe ek dance hojaye...

pna kam bantha, bhad mein jaaye jantha
Apna kam bantha, bhad mein jaaye jantha

Guunge bairon ki nagri, kaun kissiki suntha
Apna kaam bantha, bhad mein jaaye jantha
Guunge bairon ki nagri, kaun kissi ki suntha
Apna kam bantha, bhaad mein jaaye jantha

Ye desh tha veer jawanon ka
Ab rah gaya beimanon ka
Yeh desh tha veer jawanon ka
Ab rah gaya beimanon ka
Are baadal gaya itihaas hai
Ravan ki leela pass hai
Ravan ki leela pass hai
Baakhi sab first class hai

Aam aadmi udaass hai
Baaki sab first class hai
Baaki sab first class hai
Baki sab first class hai

Paisa paissa haye re paisa
Paisa paissa haye re paisa
Paisa paissa haye re paisa
Ooper lekhe jaaoone kaissa

Paisse ki aapa dhaapi hai
Bholi surath mein paapi hai
Agar jeb mein rishwat rakh do to
Tumhe her galthi ki mafi hai

Sachhayi ke muh pe thala hai
Jhute ka bol bala hai
Are ithna ghotala karthe hain
Ye kahte nahi darthe hain
Sachhaayi ka kam tumhara hai
Lekin yeh desh tumhara hai

Lekin yeh desh hamara hai
Lekin yeh desh hamara hai
Lekin yeh desh hamara hai

Khethon mein abhi sookha hai
Mango man apna bookha hai
Kahte hai india great hai
Yahan betiyan unsafe hain

Are baadal gaya itihaas hai
Ravan ki leela pass hai
Baki sab first class hai
Baki sab first class hai
Baki sab first class hai

Educaton niyam tight karro
Future generation bright karro
Apna haq kud badkar cheeno
Tum bhrastaachar se fight karro

Hathon mein apney hath to do
Le lenge inkho gere mein
Ab dekhna chahte hain hum bhi
Is desh ko naye savere mein

Sara jahaan hamaara hai
Sara jahaan hamaara hai

Ye aane wali peedi hai
Yahi developent ki seedhi hai
Manzil pani hai to baago
Agar chain se sona hai jaago

Hum badlenge itihaass re
Phir milke kahe jakkas hai
Baki sab first class hai
Phir mil ke kahe jhakkas hai
Baaki sab first class hai
Baki sab first class hai
Baki sab first class hai

They are dancing not noticing tha t a person is seeing them with moist eyes...

AAK himself

Promise katha ho ammi who din kabi nayee ayaage jis din miss faroque yeh ghar chod kar jayege,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Next day morning AAK woke up

He know he need to work hard with zoya...

He got ready and freshen up...and came down bumped with zoya...

He just lost in her eyes .all the papers are in air.

Her hair blocked the face he removed the curls...on seeing the face.

But suddenly her expressions changed with out a word she straightened her self...he also came back.

She didn't utter a word and she leave from there he got disappointed first he need to bring her back.bring back miss nautanki faroque her mischeiveness her chirpyn es s and her flared shayery everything..he don't want this girl who avoid talk with him.

He want her to fight with him...

And with the thought he left for the office...

He had some meeting s and working on laptopns his mind wandering...

His plans.

He enter to the room to scold her.but seeing the room he was shocked...because it is neat...

Then his mother answered that she only told maid to clean the room because she doesn't want him to shout on her bechari zoya...

Oh god.

Then he offered tickets of that idotic salman khan how he hates him...he dislike him not because he hates him he cannot forget the drooling face of miss faroque as if he is the only male exists in the world...

Hay salmanhandsomehay salman s body and all.

But his little sister nazma replied that they already seen the movie as Ayaan bhai had arranged...

Oh ok

Now next the pizza thing...

Where nikhat polietely refused as she already learned the receipe from zoya and they both doinga the house.and no need for ...ordering outside...

Well flowers indeed bad idea...because...he knows no w what to do...

He lost in the thoughts...he looked a t the watch to find...it is 2 oclock

Can he offer her lunch

Its like she will say on mr khan the pleasure is mine and go with u.but he can say another execuse...

Tehn suddenly he saw mrs elezebth at the door.

Soim right indeed the same girl.what s her name the girl tanveeer is that the same girl disturbing our lion...

The name tanveer,,,increased the fury he said in anger it is not tanveer miss elebezabath it is zoya...

And I had hurted her and even trying to do the make up but no one is helping me...

And after that he explained each and every detail

Miss elezebeth smiled

Yes she know s the girlthis is the same girl in hospital who dare to raise her voice against the AAK who m the whole world fears...the most charming and smily girl...the beautiful.dimple.ofcourse no one can flew away fromher charm and mr AAK is not a different one...

The emotiosn the lost...

It is love and the most arrogant not able to understand Wheat the girl said in hospital...

So what is the problem

She is not talking to me I hurted in amost hilarious way...

My family loves her more than me and no one is ready to help me...so

Mrs elezebeth smiled at the boy...

What kind of girl she is

She isangel mrs elezebethe she always think of others that is the reason my family loves her...

She is indeed special

If indeed she is angel then she should forgive u...

Think of it.

First make sure u make the things normal like u both start with fighting make her fight withu

First let her fight makes thethings normal then win the trust and then love...

These are steps very carefully taken if ur family understood the change I n u the n they surelyhelp u they also want ur s and that girl I mean zoya happiness right...

Thank u mrs elezebeth ur thebest...

With that he stromed to the house...

He looked at the house it is empty

Start...

Oh god dammit laptop which is a useless creature I lost my project with this...oh god...I just want to throw

Mr kha n the angered voice

He smirked...and thought welcome tigeress miss faroque I clearly know of ur obsessions regarding gadgets either laptop of tab and anyone insults its technology then u burst out that is ther reason I delibereately destroyed the laptop and crushed it.and startedbashing it so talk,,,

How could u think of lilke this if u cannot repair or cannot work it is ur fault not that poor laptop stop being rude to themn.they will help u at the time of need u can';t discard them with that she took mthe laptop and took her to the room

Where he smiled...and smirked at his plan...

At then firststep she is normal with me...

I start irritating her and our fights will be back...

Lafzon se jo tha pareh
Khaali pann ko jo bhare
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan
Rishte ko kya modh doon
Naata yeh ab todh doon
Ya phir yunhi chodh doon, darmiyaan
Benaam rishta woh
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho na sake jo beyaan, darmiyaan
Darmiyaan... (4)
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan
Darmiyaan... (4)
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

Oh its a special feeling
These moments between us
How will I live without you
Oh its a special feeling
These moments between us
How will I live without you

Aankhon mein tere saaye
Chahoon toh ho na paaye
Yaadon se teri faasla haye
Jaake bhi tu na jaaye
Thehri tu dil mein haye
Hasrat si banke kyun bhala
Kyun yaad karta hoon
Mitt ta hoon banta hoon
Mujhko toh laaye yeh kahan
Benaam rishta woh
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho na sake jo beyaan, darmiyaan
Darmiyaan... (4)
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan
Darmiyaan... (4)
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

Hard for us to see
It was so hard for us to see
Came closer day by day
But then the world got in the way, darmiyaan

Chalte thay jinpe hum tum
Raaste woh saare hai ghum
Ab dhoondhu kaise manzilein
Yeh raatein hain jaise maatam
Aaat hain din bhi gumsum
Roothi hain saari mehfilein
Itna sataayo na, yun yaad aao na
Bann jaaye aansu bhi zubaan
Benaam rishta woh
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho na sake jo beyaan, darmiyaan
Darmiyaan... (4)
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan
Darmiyaan... (4)
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

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