ArHi SS:Shattered #3 *Completed*

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Nice update. K agreed to marry someone else?

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sarthshru

@sarthshru

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

loved the pain the anguish portrayed..

u indeed are a wonderful writer i cud feel the pain n anguish clearly..

hpe everythins fine soon..

n khiushi is marrying any random guy !!

hope arnav finds out soon..

n things fall in the correct places !!

update soon !!

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

😃

"You hated me ten years ago...and you hate me even now."

It was good to see Khushi compose herself and take a decision regarding her future ...

Arnav's hatred runs too deep ... though he realises the futility of the hatred ...

Khushi is too deeply ingrained in his sub conscience that whatever he does he just

cannot stop thinking about her ...

Loved the way you have incorporated the promo so effectively ...

Thanks Juhi ... waiting eagerly for the next ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

fantastic update, But poor Khushi... she wants to move on.

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@aapkibandhu_Vas

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Each and every part
i just loved
it and its really so sad abt arshi past
bechaari khushi
she dont know its gona effect thier lifes
w8ting for next

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kajal511

@kajal511

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

lovely update
waiting for arnav to realize his feeling for khushi
khushi ready for marriage,nice twist

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Part 1
superb update
arnav hurted sheetal and she resigned nk come to knw about whole thing and anjali was killed
jst fabulous dear

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

cannot wait till tuesday. Why is Khushi doing this. She waited for him and I guess now she has given up .

Arnav please come soon. your Khushi is ready to move on.

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Part 2
she took leave and arnav was restless...khushi is ready to marry someone
loved it how u portray the story and the single add brought out a different and unique concept
mohabbat dur jane na de nafrat paas aane na de

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sanja_here

@sanja_here

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

fantastic update...!!!i just loved how u included that promo scene in story...i feel bad for both of them...u wrote every thing with an intensity dat makes it sound real.n last part..khushi getting married...!!!!!waiting for update..