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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS
Thank you so very much for your wonderful response to this story!

Chapter Nine (Part One ) is now up on Thread Four.

Part Two will be posted after an hour.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88174348�

thank u so much for writing such a wonderful story juhi

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Judt read part 7 &8.

What an utterly gripping and raw story this is. Now that past and present have come together and all is revealed, I had to applaud how cleverly the prologue was used as the meeting of the past and present.

The story in the end was not what I envisioned from the prologue but so much more. You truly took the tag line of the show and made something out of it...much more than the actual show ever did.

Loved how they both react to every action of the other as if it is truly a law of nature. One takes action And the other one experiences an equal or a greater reaction as if they are joined invisibly.

Loved the brutal honesty in the last confrontation where he bares his soul and then expects her too also.

Nani's perspective on life was inspiring in all its honesty about who was culpable in the events of that night...one individual or one family or society at large. What a great subject you chose here.

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago

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Sangs49

@Sangs49

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Hi your updates are good as always!

I would like to understand how the familiarity between two developed in past leading to her knowledge about him- as it seems she knows what he did in US, he is diabetic, calling him Arnav when I distress in adventure chapter etc...

They met once in garden then one phone call then on the d day when he started hating her. Are there some more flash backs coming to fill in the blanks .

One more thing reminded me as I read these last chapters where they they know something is there, understands that other also know that some thing is there yet no one spoke of it. Beautifully written emotions. The thing I rememerd is the song from movie Anumapa, "Kuch aisle Bhi batein hoti hai, much dil ne kaha , Kuch Bhi nahin"

Here is the link http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=u0bfDPsWxQY&feature=plpp

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Sangs49

@Sangs49

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#794

One more thing I would like to add

AAJ JUMA HAI... Aaj ka Canada tha

We are waiting

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#795

I don't know what I am supposed to feel about this chapter. Or maybe I shouldn't feel anything at all.

Jealousy seeps through Arnav, and he comes rushing to see Khushi. He tried so hard, so hard, to get her off his mind. Heck, he used another innocent victim to get revenge with Khushi, yet when the word of her alliance came, he ran to her. Arnav finally fought his ego and told her what he feels. His anger, his hatred, his revenge all take a step back when Khushi is concerned.

However, will he ever be able to forget the pain? Will he ever be able to forgive Khushi? How is he expecting this relationship to work? They can tip toe around the issue concerning his past, but how long can they avoid it?