If only I could you....Love/Hate.- chapter 7
I am stumped, so say the least!How do you do this?
Did God show some partiality towards you??
I love his anguish, his justification to himself, his confusion and dilemma,
there was nothing between them, no words, no promises, no relationship. then why did he feel the need to do what he did with Sheetal and hurt like like he had just do obviously done and why did he not feel content and happy, this is what he wanted...he had done this knowingly...
Maybe there were nothing between them that words had accepted but in his mind he did feel he had more, they were emotionally involved and in his mind he always was in a relationship with her...or so his choice words indicate, infidelity...!!!
NK and her...I loved how his timing was perfect, he knew his sister needed him it seemed...love his concern and how he was willing to be there immediately for her...
Sheetal...she surprised me, but then you always do, so I should not be ...she has probably redeemed herself in a lot of our eyes...loved her...her perceptiveness, her being able to speak out her mind, despite what she feels for him...I loved that he heard if from her ...each word she spoke...fitting and true...Kudos to her and you for creating her..I am glad she resigned...
By gala, she means the farewell dinner where she meets Khushi the first time? So she read it then, well the way he was wanting her to join him by goading her would have been a clear indication that for reasons best known to him, he wanted her with him...
I loved nani's perceptiveness too, she is right, Khushi was just a convenient punching bag, she was the recipient for the anger he felt, but for the way she affected him...not for what happened, he knew it was not her fault...he knew she was not to blame but something about her that made him react towards her the way he did, thinking it would be easier...than to face reality.
I love Khushi, going back to face him with full dignity, her indifference towards him eating him and angering him, he wanted her to react, to scream and shout, to show some emotion...but her calmness angering him more than what he had just done...her indifference affecting him more than ever, displaying no signs of a man who had just succeeding in his plan...
Loved his pain...you have described it so so beautifully...it was a visual delight! His SUV, the rain, the photograph and his pain! if only he could, if only his heart did not betray him...
Payal now replacing her in the office, but Khushi from his mind and thoughts were him impossible to remove...the feelings she brought out in him making him feel alive, the thrill, the enthusiasm and zest for life, he was desperately yearning for her...but she was the cause of his destruction...and this conflict causing him anguish...wishing he could feel what he was for her for anyone but her...
Khushi, going back to her family, trying to regain her life, pretending every was okay, but failing too...thinking about him and what could be, realising she needed to move on...him she had to forget...he was destructive for her and everything she had worked for, she owed it to her and her family. Looking at the picture that meant so much to her, it was not just a photograph but so much more...but if only she could ...
Loved how you wrote the family bonding, Namaz and Arti in the same household...beautiful...the solace they provided her, her comfort zone, remembering her mother's belief of something powerful that controlled fate and destiny...
And to him she has left hers, with her resolve to move on, taking the biggest step of her life...with another man!
Cannot wait to see what happens next, what combustion the next update will bring...either ways they are caught in almost like a vortex..
With or without you
With or without you
I can't live
With or without you
I loved how you have taken the promo and built the story so dramatically and aptly around them, the promo seems perfect for your story...like it was made for it...
Arjun
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