ARIYA- has our love failed??????part 11 PG 60,61 - Page 2

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Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Very unique and awesome concept.
Amazing CS and prologue.
Loved it.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
nice cs n prologue dear.. Continue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
waiting for the update..

interesting prologue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Omg me get new Ariya story

Continue and awesome amazing concept update soon

<3. ❤️ ❤️ <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
nice concept
eagerly waiting for first part
thanks for cs n prologue
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
nice concept & cs

prologue is interesting & quite scary

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

hey friends thank u for the lovely response...




here is part 1///its short coz next one is a bigger part..




Part 1..




It was a normal evening at rawte house..





riya is just back from office, freshened up and nw discussing with her





mother-in-law wat to cook for dinner..




Riya:aaai raat ko khane mein kya banau sooj hi nahi raha hai..





Savita: ha beta yeh raat ka khana sach mein tension deta hai..waise arjun




aaj bhi dair se ane wala hai ya..





Riya: pata nahi aai kam nahi hoga toh aa jayenge..





Suryakant: riya beta aaj na paneer makhni khane ka mann kar raha hai..





tumhare haath ki banai makhani ki toh baat hi kuch aur hai..





Riya: thik hai baba bas aaj toh aap khush ho jayenge waise makhani




banage..





Ria and savita went to kitchen for preparing dinner…





it was almost 9 so aai and baba had dinner..






they even asked riya bt they knew she would always eat with arjun no





matter wat time arjun come home…






Riya went to their room..her room had lot of pics of her and arjun..





their marriage, their honeymoon… hangouts..she had come to take her




phone. she started preparing for dinner..bt her heart was somewhere




else..




Her heart wandered back to the beautiful time they had passed..





Flashback:





It was evening riya was just back from the work and went to freshen up





in the room..





She entered the room and was mesmerised to the see the beauty of the




room..she couldn't stop but smile showing her perfect dimples…





Riya: arjun bhi na.. surprises bhi itni pyare dete hai..





Par hai kahan yeh..arjun arjun kahan ho appp?




She got a small card on the bed…




Arjun: I m always in your heart dear….bt for nw search me at your fav





place..





Riya: hoon my fav place…….terrrace….





She ran to the terrace…





arjun had beautifully decorated the whole place with flowers and sented




candles…





She ran and hug arjun tightly..





Riya: arjun its beautiful…





Arjun: ya.. par meri wifey se zyada nahi… u r the most beautiful in this





whole world..





Riya: par achanak yeh sab.. I mean office..





Arjun: are baba case jaldi solve ho gaya toh ayaga tumhare paas..






Riya: hoon …achcha kiya… I was missing u..





There was soft music playing …





they had their dinner..





remembered their past memories…





Arjun picked her up and led her to their room..





for their night full of love and romance..





Present:






Aai: riya beta dhhoood..





Ria's trance broken….bringing her back to the reality





Riya: sorry aai wooh dhyan nahi raha..





Aai: koi baat nahi beta..riya 9 baj chuke hai.. tum bhi khana kha hi lo..





Riya: mein arjun ke saath kha lungi.. unhe akele khana pasand nahi hai





na..





Aai: thik hai.. aao bahar toh baitho..




Riya sat with her in laws…waiting for arjun…..



hope u al like it...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
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nice update
arjun had not come to home
riya is missing him and their old times
loved the way arjun surprised riya in past
superb start
continue soon dear
will be waiting
thanks for pm!!
Edited by Chocolate_barun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
awesom update.

continue soon.

and thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
nice update
cont soon
thanks for a pm

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