Thread#1 Arshi FF:When Life Turns A Bad Game(Rape4Rape)||*COMPLETED*

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#431

I want to read again and again loved it so so much
u r terribly awesome👏👏👏👏

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#432

i hav so many questions left,hope tht u wil give answers to tht ques soon.
A new version of shyam, he is so kindhearted.
Feel really sad 4 him.
It was a balanced updt with all the essence.
The way u shwn akash here was gud. But later he turned into evil. Y is tht so?
Ur story is so mysterious & interesting.
Awesome updt.
Updt sn.
Thx 4 the pm.

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Andi

@ARSHIANDI

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

thnx for pm

nice yaar

cont soon

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

thnx for pm & it's nice 😊

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dis_arshi

@dis_arshi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

oh it is anjali who wants to kill khushi

but why?

is it becoz shyam still has some feelings for khushi in his heart??

is it so?

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Ann

@ipkkndank

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

Nice update :)

Sorry for not commenting on your earlier Updates. But read all of it.

Anyways i'm commenting on your Twilight OS also here k coz i can't post my comment on that thread :( .

Love that too. It's sooo twilight :D :D

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megh.arhi

@megh.arhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#437

What's wrong with Anjali..?!😡

What happened between Payal & Akash?!

Did Akash do something wrong with Payal?!

Eager to know the full revelation of past.

Thanks for pm.😊

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Ankita C

@aNkItA.C

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#438

first of all lemme tell u duffer i HATEYA TOOO!!!!😡😡
now I am not getting that poojali oopss i mean anjali😕😕😕
Anjali loves Shyamu but Creepwa loves Khushi... hailaaa😲😲😲
Chalo at least u have introduced Arnav but as a kidwa that too in flashbacks😲😲😲
yeh ramanchi hai duffer...
i want to read about my Arnie boy soonwa😳😳😳
so u better introduce Arnav soonwa😡😡😡
awww typical Arnav from childhood only HIS GF Khushi😳😳😳😳
NO COMMENTS for Shashi babua part🤣
awww naughty arshi 😳😳😳 they went on a datewa 😳😳😳😳
but caughtwa by Shashi babua
Arnav kisses Khushi😳😳😳 haaye childhood rabba ve😳😳😳😳
what the hellwa😕😕😕
why the hell payal is crying and Aakash tensed😡😡😡😡
Yaar who raped whom????😕😕😕😕
* this is the million dollar question of this FF*🤢🤢🤢
u better tell us soonwa😡😡😡😡
overall what an updatewa Mohit ( vishnu jee)😛😛😛😛
and no thenxxx for resing😡😡😡😡
its my HAQ wa😳😳😳😳
phewww done with my commentwa🤢🤢🤢
now u better update soonwa...
and no thnks as i promoted ur ff😡😡😡😡
its ur HAQ wa😡😡😡
waiting for the next updatewa😈

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@...OceanEyes...

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#439

Ye kya...adhe se jyada flashbacks???
Okay..never mind😊
lets come to the update...
WOHOOO...KHUSHI SAID SORRY?????
I felt slightly angry..wo kya hai,Shyam ko itna masum dkhneka adat ni hai na...!!!😉
nd...WOW...Arnav...shyng???its cute!
Yaar..ye Shashi babua ko kiun vilain bana dia..ha ha ha..😆
Biking..ASR..umm..lovely...😃
but it was recklss,next time...dhyan rakhna..😆
nd..ye PayAsh ko kya ho gya???
WHAT R U TRYING TO DO???
Last part of flashaback...was..what to say..ha ha ha..i liked the phone scene,dnnw y!!!
YE ANJALI MURDERER HAI???
Okay..lets see..what u have in ur mind..
CNTNUE SOON..

Edited by ...OceanEyes... - 12 years ago