Thread#1 Arshi FF:When Life Turns A Bad Game(Rape4Rape)||*COMPLETED* - Page 14

Awsom blossom i read dis update yestrday itslf but was feeling too lazy 2 commnt...so doing it now...itz intrsting story...i wndr y khushi wnt 2 jail...n shez planning som kinda revng 4m Raizadas'...i m too curious bout how arnav khushi relation is...4 1c i hope i don't get 2 c a hate-luv relation btwn arshi not now not in past or in future...infct i wud luv 2 c arnav bn more of support pillar 4 khushi...evn if she wntz 2 take revng on Raizadas' khushi having no issues with arnav pls i'm tired of cing all hate-luv thing btwn arshi at a pt of evry story is too boring 4 a chng i wnt arshi 2 b in gud terms...arnav more of support pillr 4 khushi through out da story rathr den da hurting hr 4 his ego satisfaction or som kinda MU plz Mohit cing such diffrnt concpt i expct dis 4m u atleast shwing a non-hate-luv relation wala arshi rathr bn-each-odr-mature-undrstnding arshi here plz plz i beg u..:( well as i said beginning is intrzting nxt chp sooon & hope u take a notice of my pt plz

ohhh first FF? well this was amazing!
Im a arshi fan deffo but i don't really read their FF's or any others just kriyaansh. But this one looks different and interesting
loved how u described the flashback scenes between khushi and payals memories and then arshi's flashback was so cute. Aakash a bad guy? abit surprising Hope arnav is good and pleaseee give this a happy ending.. i hate sad endings 😛 khushi was in jail for 4 yrs 😲 still bubbly and everyones meant to love her there aswel. after all it's Khushhii 😆 Aw Karan loves her aswel, well he'd be heart broken. well overall i loved the starting of this and the CS was awsome as wel. The ending was pretty funny. precap i kinda know what'll happen in the next update 😆
All in all, I loved it as my first Arshi reading piece
Update soon! and do pm 😊

thnx for pm

nice chapter...
end was very funny
lesbians 🤣

update sooonnn

nice start. waiting to read further

Hey thanks fr the pm.

But i'm confused! !

I guess i'll have to wait untill the story unfolds. . .
N m too eager 😆

Thanks for inviting me….I loved it….It was a nice start…👍🏼

Different story line…why Khushi is in Jail…but I think we will come to know in the next updates…something very different…first when I came to know the name I thought it is going to be a dark FF….when I read the first part and hearing Khushi "rape for rape"….then I understood this is not what it meant to be…Love this Khushi full of life…

Cheers for the PM.😛