Thread#1 Arshi FF:When Life Turns A Bad Game(Rape4Rape)||*COMPLETED*

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ara_000

@ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

i am loving dis khushi...! ❤️
She is sooo bubbly nd chirpy..!
Full of life...
Even aftr spending 4 long years in jail she does not make it cum up as hindrance to her life...
She has d heart to enjoy d life nd i truly adote her spirit...!
Karan,he is such a sweet guy nd i love d bond btwn him nd khushi..
Loved d flashback...
ARSHI part was nice...
Akash,OMG he is a bad guy 😲
hard to imagine it actually 😆
loved d chappy bhaiu ❤️
i am loving it how u r framing d character of khushi ❤️
waiting for d nxt chappy now 😳

Edited by ara_000 - 12 years ago

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mehak

@mehak06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

its getting really interesting
continue soon

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vinothini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

interesting start...loved karan support for kushi..
so kushi to take revenge from raizadas ...curious to know what hpn in d past..
thanks for pm

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Rami

@Rami92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Nice concept mohit..👏 👏 👏

Ur way of writing s gud..⭐️ ⭐️

as i saw the name i thought its gonna be a dark sort of ff

but as soon i read chap 1 i decided its not gonna be..😲

Aww karan is s urely a good fren..😛 😛 😛

poor guy nt lucky enuf to make khushi fall in luv with him😆 😆 😆

khushi drools on Arnav😳 😳

Their school moment was super cute..😳 😳

he is too naughty😊 😊

loved the bonding of khushi n payal😉 😉

Akash is entirely diff here..

Waiing fr chap 2

Pm me mohit when u update😛

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

a dark FF n of course interesting...
loved it...
continue soon...

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Megha

@naughtymallu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Long updatewa CB!..😃

Khushi coming from detention centre...😲

She is 18 years only...😳

Karan coming to pick her...He likes her...😳

Payal's convo with Khushi😆..

Oww my poor baby missed her mom and sister very much...😊

and Karan took her to the party...Raizada's Party..😲

And u introduced my Arnie in the Flash Back☺️...Arnav looked very innocent...

Little cheater😆...Khushi showed him answers ahaa😃..

This Aakash...Hmm something to ponder...😕

Whats Khushi planning?😲...

and him saying "Lesbianss"...

Wanna read more CB!.I love the concept n story😃..Superb starting!!..Do write more okey?..Updatewaa Soon...and when will Arnav make an entry as our ASR?...Waiting for next part...Huggs for the PM😛...

Edited by naughtymallu - 12 years ago

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Pizookie

@Pizookie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Finally read the update BB..

WOW! It was very good..

And interesting..

and the BG music at the starting was like watching a KJo movie😉

So, Khushi and gang did something playfully which ended her in jail..

Was that coz of Akash?

And Arnav seems to be cool n good..

BB write soon.. I'm loving the story..❤️

Hugs..

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Pizookie

@Pizookie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Previous one was my formal review...

LOL! Now are you ready for the informal one?😆

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

wow yaar simply awesome...her life jail didn't change her good...loved karan and khushi's friendship...omg wat was that flashback of arshi kitna awesome par kiya kyun bichad gaye wo😔...thanks for pm bro try to update soonish plz

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: aishu3003
CHARACTER SKETCH

AGE - 18
Khushi , bubbly , cute ,loving , caring , humourous and always ready to fight any odd . Studious kind of student at her age. Spent 4 years of her teenage in jail 😡😭 . Catch up to find WHY ?

She attempted to RAPE AAKASH BITWA?? 🤣 🤣

AGE - 19

Arnav , a good student in school times as far as studies are concerned.
A good friend of Khushi at school time. A full on prankful person in school time. Full character sketch of Arnav will be uplaoded later . Because for now , i too dont k9 what he will be like .😕

LMFAO! Bas YAHI REH GAYA THA! *FACE PALM*
ARNAV IS A MYSTERY TO SOLVE KYA?😆

AGE - 19

Karan , the son of the lady incharge of the jail where Khushi spent her 4 years . There the two became friends . Cool , stylish and also loves Khushi .

SO Karan is finally playing HIMSELF, I wouldn't be wrong if HE has "OUR LOVERBOY"'s elements!1 🤣 🤣

AGE - 21

Aakash , a spoilt guy . May be one of the reason Khushi went to jail.

Spoilt??😉😉
How spoilt?? More than MOHIT, lets find out! 😃

Avantika , The lady incharge , Karan's Mother . A very humble and good person to those who are good . But a devil for bads.

It looks like KARAN and his MUM are of the same age! 🤣 🤣

Payal and Garima same...
Payal and Khushi - Real sisters ...garima is their mother ...dont have father...
Payal ... a simple girl not so stylish ...
Bechare Payal and Garima... har FF me same rahke BORE nahi Hoti??😆😆😆

Rest of the characters will be updated when needed ...