vrushan OS : JUST GIVE A REASON .last part updated - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

81

Views

15.2k

Users

30

Likes

161

Frequent Posters

Sanskruti_tanha thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Vishaka45

i read ur both updates ek saath...and i love it u have nicely written...
And whats this itermission!!! I want to next part soon...
Ye meri dhamki samaj and update asap..
I m waiting...

Luv ur write up baby...
šŸ¤—



awww di thnk you šŸ¤—
Summer_Rain thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#62
omg those lines u wrote for VRUSHAN.. they r so so beautiful..
please do continue fast...
Sanskruti_tanha thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#63

haye meri gunji jaldi unres karna ,waiting ...😳
Sanskruti_tanha thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ..Suhana..

omg those lines u wrote for VRUSHAN.. they r so so beautiful..

please do continue fast...


thank you 😃
prakriti4u thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#65
just read the 2nd part and it was just awesome!!
but why did you stop there 🤢
I am damn excited to read further.. update sooonnn..
thanks for the PM šŸ¤—
Sanskruti_tanha thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: prakriti4u

just read the 2nd part and it was just awesome!!
but why did you stop there 🤢
I am damn excited to read further.. update sooonnn..
thanks for the PM šŸ¤—


thanks dear jaldi dalti hun šŸ˜‰
ExpectoPatronus thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#67
sorry i m late to cmnt... just read d 2nd part... awsmmm
jaldi post kr nxt part... 😊
Sanskruti_tanha thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: AMAAMI

sorry i m late to cmnt... just read d 2nd part... awsmmm

jaldi post kr nxt part... 😊


yup di karti hun šŸ˜†
Sanskruti_tanha thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Part three

Shantanu catches up to the rehearsals n surprises everyone ,soon vrushika also joins them .

Sam : vrushika u noe wat !!!!

Vru : that shantanu is here .

Sam : tumhe kaise pata chala

Vru : I met him at the beach yaha pe aane se pehle soo .

Sha : so guyz lets start 5 6 7 … go .

They start wid the rehearsals for the event .vrushika was all over experiencing that weird feeling . she was goofing up wid the steps ,lost at him she would stare at him in the breaks ,n she had tycoons going up n down her body when she did those close steps according to the choreography . the step would end n she would be in the same posture as if wanna get stuck at that moment wid him forever .

Rehearsals get over ,n vrushika sits down banging her head again on her bhagwan ji .

Vru in mind : aab jab sab track pe aaraha that oh fir yeh sab mai firse kyu feel kar rahi hun ,gosh why m I again loosing it all ,kyuuu .yeh mujhe ho kya raha hai .

Pri : kisko kya ho raha hai ,kisse baatein kar rahi ho .come on we have to go down for dinner ,din bhaar bohot practice karli , chalo everyone is waiting .

They all move down to the dining hall .

nil : wo ho ho now this is wat I call food .

bha : bhailog daba ke khao muft ka khana hai .

arc : haan mai bhi bohot khane wala hun .

ali : itna khaoge toh mote ho jaoge .

hearing this the whole team bursts out in laughter .on the other hand shantanu finds vrushika sitiing all alone in a corner .he goes upto her .

sha : hey yaha akeli kyu baithi ho ,koi problem hai ?

vru whispering to herself : tum hi toh ho problem .

sha : kya … tumne kuch kaha ???

vru : no …. Nothing ,amm have a seat .

shantanu sits infront of her .

sha : hmm so howz life ….

Vru : teen saalo mein itna formal hone ki zarurat nahi hai , ,plzz come back to normal .

Sha : he he ,but it seems like tum in teen saalo mein badal gayi ho

Vru : kyu !!!!!!!!

Sha : der r some lovely chocolate deserts n cake been kept n u have not attacked them yet ,I don't see any in ur plate .

Vru : I have stoped eating chocs I don't like dem anymore .

Sha : KYA KYA KYA!!!!!!!!! Tumne chocolates khana chod diya hai !!!!!

Vru : I noe ,bitter but truth it was too kiddish of me .

Sha : but I used to love that innocence of yours ,I mean the way u used to fight wid me for chocs sent by fans .

Vru : things have changed shantanu ,like u have changed ,tum bhi kaha aab voh shy n introvert ,bhole bhale types reh gaye ho ..

Sha : wat do u mean !!

Vru : hmm I mean ki maine tumhe uss angrez ke saath flirting karte hue dekha tha .

Sha : mai toh bas use baat kar raha tha .

Vru : yaa yaa I noe kit um use ye baat kar rahe the ki uske baalo ka texture tumhe bohot pasand hai ,rite !!!!

Sha : aab tumhe toh patakar impress nahi kar paya ,koi angrezz hi sahi .

Silence filled between them , not knowing wat to answer she was all the way looking at her plate , then she tried to do the thing she was best at , leaving a conversation incomplete ,n some where leaving them incomplete too .

Vru : amm I think m done wid my food ,I need to sleep now ,bohot neend aa rahi hai ,kal ke pehle rest ki zarurat hai , good nite . n she left saying that .

Amar : oye sab ka khake hogaya tuhi bacha hai , hum sab jaa rahe hai ,tu chal raha hai .

Sha : nahi tu jaa ,mujhe aabhi chocolate dessert bhi enjoy karna hai .

After enjoying the deserts remembering her , he left the dining hall n went towards the garden .walking in he saw a familiar face adoring the beauty of flowers ,touching them wid her soothing hands .he walked up to her n silently whispered from back .

Sha : tumhe neend nahi aarahi .

She turned back in amazement ,as she knew it was him .

Vru : han voh I saw this garden n I relly wanted to come n enjoy the blissfulness of this nature ,I mean just look at it its blessed wid these flawless flowers, wid a starry over shed n a the spot light of moon, n see the moon is getting covered by clouds .

Sha : yaa I see my moon .

Vru : this spell bounding atmosphere its soo… soo amazing , n kal firse hum busy rahenge wid the event n packing , shayad ye mauka phir kabhi naa mile , jaise ki bass aaj ki raat hai zindagi kal hum kaha tum kaha . look the swing come …

Shantanu just silently listened wat she uttered coz this chirpiness of hers was something he was craving for since he had come ,he followed her towards the swing .n sat wid her .

Vru : kitna aacha lag raha hai naa .

Sha : han aab sab kuch aacha lag raha hai .

Vru : amm so howz life …

Shantung gave a short smile n replied : well m gud ,busy ,but I miss being swayam somewhere .swayam made my life , .so start mein thodi taklif hui ,but I overcame it but ek aadat si padh gayi thi majnu banne ki ,voh team fun ki ,n suddenly it vanished from my life ,so I still miss being swayam .

Sharon : I m too incomplete widout being Sharon , those dayz were so magical wid the team n above all u ,I had engraved Sharon widin me ,like….. like i relly fell in love but ……

Back to square one ,she couldn't control herself n started loosing it all over again , there was something in him that she always fell for . the space between them was filled wid sort of nasha ,jo vrushika ko chad raha tha , n the moment would be best described wid these phrases " kyu naa ayese hota .jo milte tum ho jate gum saath mere ,hote hote hoga samjhaye hum thamjaye tum ooh dil mere ,tuta zyada zyada tara jab gira ,zara zyada zyad mangu dil tera kabhi zyada zyada mane naa dil ye sir phira ,ishqwala love…(LLHH) suddenly it started raining which made her come out of that gaze .

As soon as she managed to come back to her senses , she got up from the swing n tried cover it all wid reasons .

Vru : ammm i….. I think i shud leave coz mai iss baarish mein aur nahi reh sakti .

She briskly takes some steps when a voice stopes her .

Sha : tum aabhi bhi mujhse utna hi pyar karti ho naa …..

Kyu mere ayese hi kuch kehte tum tham jaati

Kyu apni aankho se kuch aur ,aur juban se kuch aur kehti ho

Kyu mere pass aate hi tumhari saansen tez ho jati hai vrushika kyu ,

Bolo vrushika aaj chup rehne ki galti mat karna coz I m not ready to listen to ur silence ……

Kis baarish mein tum naa rehne ki baat kar rahi ho , jisne pehle se hi tumhe bheega diya hai .

Kab tak aapne aap se yeh aankh micholi khelogi vrushika kab tak ,kabhi na kabhi iss sach ko bahar aana hi hoga ,aur yahi saach tum bhale hi naa bol pao ,par har baar tumhari aankhe mujhe keh deti hai ,tum jaanti ho ki tum Sharon banna itna kyu miss karti ho ,kyuki tum swayam ke bina nahi reh sakti ,aur voh swayam mai hun vrushika . kuch kaho vrushika . yaa abhi apne aap ko misunderstand karna hi tumhe aacha lagta , iss feeling ko galat samajna accha lagta hai ,yaa fir mai galta bol raha hun. Koi toh answer hoga tumhare pass ,just give me a reason damit !!!

Tough she was successful in covering her tears in rain , but still she was not able to break her silence , his words were striking her ,sa if hurting her .he catched her wrist tightly n twisted it to pull her towards him banging her on him .

Sha : ok ,I get it ,tumhari khamoshi ne mujhe sab bata diya hai ,par ek baat sunlo vrushika , ki teen saal pehle tumne hume adhura choda tha ,lekin aaj mai hame adhura chod raha hun . saying dat he releases her hand wid force , leaves her all alone in the bashy n painful rains n walks off . kal tak jo badal pyar se baraste the aaj vohi garaj ke barse the .like the rains every word of his was drenched into her heart .

shayad voh ek aakhri baar tha jab sab kuch khatam ho chuka tha ,

voh sab kuch bolgaya , par mai khamosh khadi thi ,

mai kuch karu usske pehle hi usne baazi palat di thi .

uss chand ne bhi apne aap ko chupa diya ,aur mere chand ne bhi mujhse muh fer liya

nahi bol payi apne dil ki baat aur vahi khatam hogayi voh raat .

was this book ment to be shut …………

dat nite was difficult to pass for both of them , it actually seemed like centuries before the dawn arose .

next morning the whole team was off to outing , to have fun in macau , they were all in fun mood , on the other hand vrushika was quiet astonished on shantanus behavior , seemed like nothing happened last nite ,he was having that smile n fun all through the outing . reaching back they finally got ready for the event n in no tym they all were in the backstage ,cheering up for the performance .

pri : yaar after teen saal ,we all r back , dat to giving a group performance , feels amazing naa.

Sam : I noe yaa d3 back in action .

Amar : aare yaar par mujhe thoda tension bhi ho raha hai ,kitna bada crowd ,itna bada platform .

Bha : han yaar mujhe bhi darr lag raha hai .

Sha : so guyz ready , I noe thodi nervousness toh hogi after all its its long tym we have been doing this ,par hum iss stage ke manje hue khiladi hai , so guyz lets dil dostii dance .

And the team screams it loud ……. DIL DOSTII DANCE !!!!!!!!!!!!! they give a group hug n move up to the stage . fir kya tha stage ko fad diya tod diya , teen saal ka hisab barabar kar diya , they proved themselves they prove team d3 again .coming back they all screamed n cheered as usual .

Bha : bhailog maja aagaya

Arc : haan yaar itna accha performance den eke baad ek party toh banti hai

Kunwar : guyz I have heard they have arranged the after event party for all soo we have lots more to expect from macau .

Sha : hey guyz I relly need to leave early , I got to catch my bus for airport , so u all enjoy I will catch up wid u all in Mumbai .

Kunwar : aare thodi der ruk jata ,kal subha sab log nikal rahe hai , it's a nite which may be will never come back .

Sha : trust me kunwar I have to leave , so bye peeps Mumbai mai milte hai .

They all give him a last hug n shan leaves the group n her at once .after gathering his luggage he walks off to the bus . while walking he his mind was filled wid the harsh memories of last nite , all those words were almost hammering his head . his head was on the verge of blasting when he thought to cool it donw wid a bar of five star .he removed five star from his pocket to divert his mind . he had reached near the bus so he folded his half eaten bar in the wrapper n kept it back . he got into the bus n searched for his seat , finding his seat he saw a gal wid grey hood pull over jacket siting on his seat ,looking towards the window .

Sha : excuse me ,haloo puri khali bus mein aapko yahi seat mili kya … yeh seat meri hai , I mean this seat belongs to me .

But u belong wid me ,the voice replied turning towards him . she got up from the seat n stood in front of him .

Vru : par tum toh mere hona .

Shantanu was stunned for the moment , he starred at her in astonishment , n suddenly looked up .

Sha : bhagwan ji ek toh ye directly mere sapno se reality mein jump karti hai , yaa toh mai pagal ho gaya hun, itna ki aabhi voh mujhe mere samne nazar aa rahi hai .

Vrushika laughed at once , she took some steps back n suddenly jumped on to him giving him a bone crushing hug , he was still unaware of wat was happening wid him .

Sha : tum sacchi mein ho ???

Vru : kal raat ko meri khamoshi ko samajh gaye te , par mujhe nahi samajh paye , chale aaye bass yuhi mujhe akela chodkar , yaa teen saal pehle ka badla le rahe ho . u relly don't noe wat I have gone through after that refusal , i had changed for some reason ,but why ??? , I guess last nite I got that answer . coz of u shantanu . tumhe naa bolna meri naadani thi , nahi samajh payi apne aap ko , n I have paid for it in last three years .

Hearing all that he was in reality , he was in tears he embraced her back .

Sha : thanks vruhika ….

Vru : for wat

Sha : for finally understanding urself , u don't noe wat it means to me .

Vru : thank u shantanu , for still being dere for me , n I noe ki tum party ke liye meri vajha se nahi ruke so dat I vont feel uncomfortable . ammm sooo . saying dat she broke the hug .

Sha : sooo

Vru : soo I wanted to say dat

Sha : wat

Vru : ammm ami tumake bhalo bhashi .

Sha : awww u learned dat for me .

Vru : so do you love me ?

Sha : aare hun bhi tanne bov pyar karu chu .

Hearing that vrushika couldn't keep calm she again jumped onto him . he too couldn't resist it too he clutched her tight warmly brushing his lips on her neck .aaahhh finaly her heaven was back , that comfort was bacjk n above all he was back in her life . but something stricked her n she slowly came out of it n steped away from him

Vru : par tumhe uss angreez ke baalo ka texture pasand tha naa .. giving him a steep eyed stare .

Shantanu grabed her wait pulling her toward him .

Sha : kyu jail tumhari ..

Vru : meri kyu jalegi

She again tried to step back but he again pulled her wid one hand n placed the finger of other hand on her lips

Sha : sshhh ……. Look into my eyes .saying that he cuped her face bringing it near his , her heart slowed down as he slowly swifted his lips into hers . she could feel his warmth , his love , his passion for her . they pecked out after a while when she squeaked at once .

Vru : chocolate !!!

Sha : wat !!!

Vru : I taste chocolate , voh bhi five star , how could u tumne akele khaya .

Sha : tum kya cheez ho yaar , wait I have some left .

He grabs the half eaten bar from his pocket n gives it to her .she eats it wid a whole satisfactory . he was happy to see her back . the sweet moment brokr when sharons phone rang .

Vru : heyloo

Sam : where the hell r u , hum sab kabse tumhe party mein dhund rahe hai .

Vru : m sorry sam I will be der in a while . bye .

Vru : chalo

Sha : kaha ??

Vru : party mein .

Sha : par maine toh…

Vru : sshhh shut up ,just folloe me .

N she pull him all the way to the party .

Bha : abbey tu yaha ,tune toh bola tha ki ..

Vru : han bola tha ,par aabhi voh yah ape hai , leave it guyz lets enjoy .

Everyone was enjoying in der own world when sneha screamed

Sne : PALKI MAM !!!!!

Vru : wow … mam … u …. Here , soo happy to see u .

PK M : so people I m here to inform u dat …

Sha : dat…

Pkm : we r soon starting wid d3 season 2 .

WAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

n the gang rejoices in the joy of being back as the d3 team ...

………………………. THE END ……………………….

So people kaisa laga , i noe bohot lamba aur heavy types tha , frankly speaking I had no idea of season too par mujhe pehla season khatam karne ke vajhe se bohot galiya aur daat padi so this ones for u people . tho picture paisa vasul yaa flop u decide , plzz comment n let me noe . joote chappal bhi allowed hai . thanks for following n reading it soo far .

Sanskruti_tanha thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 Ā· 11 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1019 page no 29

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ā–¼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 Ā· 3 years ago

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ā¤ļø Index...

Expand ā–¼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington Ā· 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ā–¼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: abavi Ā· 4 years ago

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ā–¼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse Ā· 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ā–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".