vrushan OS : JUST GIVE A REASON .last part updated - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
edited my comment on pg 1
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey swthrt...🤗
I am the 1st one to read this...i guess...and it was amazing..loved loved loved the way u kept their innocence in the confession..so real...so touching...those weird vibes...that strange attraction ...beautifully done...

Loved the way u wrote their feelings that night... difficult to let go the feelings ...beautifully done...i could see VruShan while reading this..

The confession was an adorable one...how cutely u added all those sweet things ..which binds them together ...be it 5 star ..or her chocolate love...or Swayam's qualities in tannu..the true gentle man ...who never wants to see her uncomfortable ...i revisited SwaRon confession again with the cute hug...

Loved the entire write ..AMAZINGLY WELL WRITTEN😊

Luv
Deep
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: cscs

edited my comment on pg 1


thank you sooo much charu di 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
res
unres
well the last part was superb
it was mind bloeing
really well written 👏
amazing
i loved it thoroughly...
vrush ne chocolates chod di 🤣
that will never happen hum chodne nahi denge use
loved it
very well done 👏
thanks for the PM

do write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
perfect ending loved it... finally they all are together 😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

perfect ending loved it... finally they all are together 😊

thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
oaahhh thankgod i got ur os...
dear 8u scrap me tht i hav to read ur os but u dint send the link i scraped u tht send me link but u dint yr...
chalo koi nai finally puch tach ke i got ur work...
chalo aap bohot bate ho gye nw m bagging to read as i hav already been so late...
so res...
will unres till 1 a.m. aaj ke...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Sans - di aapne mera os perha ab toh comment kero
Me (vrushanland)
Sans (while shaking me) - diii
Me (vrushanland)
Sans - di bola na becoz m not ready to tolerate ur silence
Me (vrushanland)
Sans (acha bachu toh yeh aise nahi bolegi)
Pinches me hard
Me - aaahhh wat yaar sans kyun mujhe tang ker rahi ho 😡
Sans - but di u promised me that u will comment after reading my os 😭
Me - oh han aorry yaad agaya
Chalo let me comment

"Wow yeh kya kerdiya aapne mein toh aapki fan bangayi i truly luved it alooot meine jab pehla chapter perha i thought nyc starting d3 ko starting mein hi khatam kerdiya aur shan ne toh confess bhi kerdiya wah kya speed maari hai shaan ne i luved it and luv him sooo much per vrushi ne jab mana kiya and u made shan cry and u said that the part is over i thought of killing u seriously pehle os ki sad ending pagal lerki phir jab aapka msg perha that (PICTURE ABHI BAAKI HAI MERE DOST) then i sighed that pheww sans u r saved aap bach gayi warna thode dinon mein breaking news hoti that ( a girl named sanskruti is been killed by none other that really gud friend sadaf) huh phir agey dekha that second part bhi hai and u already got 40+ lyks mein socha wah meri behna toh famous horahi hai then i went on pg 5 and when i read those lines of vrushi they really touched my heart sachi bata kahan se copy ki bol bol bol chal chor then sammi ka call wow i luved their choti si convo and when came to that shan is not coming mein toh rone waali thi thank GOD when they met on the beach i was so so so so happie that itni raat ko meri behen uth gayi aur mujhe daantne lag gayi 😒 all becoz of u sans chalo choro hayye kya entry mari mere shaan ne aatey hi vrushi ko apni bahon mein leliya awww vrushi thought that she was dreaming but no he was seriously there phir maare mere hero ne apne philosophical dialogues ab toh mujhe shak ho raha hai sans sachi batao kahan se copy kiye bolo bolo bolo chal rehne doh (AREY KOI USKO BATADO MEIN HI HUN USKA RAJ) aur phir aapne kya kiya interval dediya huh finally i went to pg 11 wow shan ka surprise their rehearsals and after that dinner kya yaar aapne vrushika ko chocolate nahi khilayi (i hate u again for that) than garden meeting haaye really luved it alooot is baar toh mera shan dialogues mein baazi mar gaya muah muah muah shan i luv u sooo much phir next day their perfomance (meine charity event waali group performance imagine ki sneha thi jismein but i tried to imagine vrushi
Than after rhey getting party invitation yeh kya shan ne mana ker diya kya yaar 😭 and jaate jaate he eating 5 star haaye my second fav chocolate and went in the bus and he saw sumone sitting on his seat jab woh lerki vrushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nikli toh shan thought that he is dreaming awww mera shan dreaming kerte huey kitna cute lagta hai and when she jumped on him he was shocked that he was actually not dreaming it was reality WOW ZABARDAST AMAZING SUPERB FANTASTIC MINDBLOWING then after their sweet kiss 5 star i really luved it alooot "
Sans (sadafland)
Me - sans (waving my hand infront of her face
Sans (sadafland)
Me - oye hello sans kuch toh bolo
Sans (sadafland)
Me - acha bachu meri copy
(Pinched her more hardly)
Sans - ouch di kya hai
Me - oye aram se itna bara comment diya hai aur aap mujhse aise baat kero gi
Sans - sorry di
Me - chal theek hai batao mera comment kaisa laga
Sans - ???


P.S : my first biggest comment ever "sans lucky u 😉"
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes yes yes ! indeed i m sooo lucky to have readers n above all didi's like u in my life who pour their heart out n appritiate the work to such an extent that it always leaves me over n over whelmed , how can u appritiate some one soo much , i dont still understand that , mere comments r lke so short one that to i make them bold so they look bigger . wat i can only do in return is thank my universe ji sitting up dere for making my feel special through some angels send by him n just improve n polish my write us to make u proud n happy every tym u read my work . 🤗

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