Smitar's: Finding Khushi #12 Last Part Pg32 (11/7)

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sujata5

@sujata5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Wonderful update Smita!! Sorry for the late reply but had gone to visit my grandson again!!!! (Part 45 Sec 3)

What a lovely update ... The peace and happiness of both the couples shine through your writing...

I love the naughty Arnav who is finally at peace with himself and the world... He has got more happiness than he ever dreamed of...

I loved Khushi 's realization of the true meaning of "suhaag raat"... Her blushes and sighs...

Loved the fact that Anamika finally realized her true love in Ganesh... His patience with her and their relationship which has finally reached a point of no return.. but is on it's way to eternal happiness...

Thanks for such beautiful writing Smita!!!!

Thanks for the PM Rashmi...

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Nice end to a lovely story, Smita.

Requests for you.

1. you never included baiyan na dharo 😭

2. in your new story, can khushi please eat some healthy food at least. jab dekho she is eating aloo puri. zero nutrition and yet she is a size zero. please spare a thought for us poor souls in real life who struggle to eat normally and with our weights.

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

😭

such a lovely ending

👏

I can't wait for the next story

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drashtimeetu

@drashtimeetu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

awsome update and superb ending

will miss it

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Pari

@ammavedu80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

The sweet journey ended
Looking forward for new story
All the best

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sujata5

@sujata5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

What a super analysis for part 45 sec 3 Rashmi...

I am "enunciating " that you are a master at what you do... explain the story with more depth and understanding... BRAVO!!!!

Love the quote:

"Love is a partnership of two unique people who bring out the very best in each other, and who know that even though they are wonderful as individuals, they are even better together"

~ Barbara Cage

Thanks for the update and sorry for the delay...

Edited by sujata5 - 12 years ago

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

It was an awesome os smita. Thanks.

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

o smita really it was the last part...loved the journey a lot...each and every update of it...hats off to u for writing such an amazing fun loving story...thanks a lot rulama for the pms ,looking forward to read ur new one...waiting for monday now :)...love

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

hey will miss this story.. but lovely ending to lovely story.. loved ARSHI and their love for each other.. thanks for story.. 😃

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sujata5

@sujata5

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Sorry to see such beautiful story come to an end but we had a wonderful ride Smita...

I am so grateful that I have found such a great community online and also that I have learned so much from both you and Rashmi... Thank you for everything...

Looking forward for the journey to continue... Read you soon..Have a great weekend...

Thanks for the PM Rashmi... Waiting for the wonderful analysis...