Rudra and shambhavi (A Moharika FF) update pg 145 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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jyoti wonderful update👏cant wait for them to grow up😳Rudra's last words are giving me a doubt that he is mentioning about Sambhavi..well hope he will not be rude towards her
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww jyo i though left if but ur story compelled me to comment i am visualizing this plz introduce grown up them soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh wow that is a very interesting update. Loving your enemy is even better. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Fabulous update Jyoti. 😃
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Jyoti awesome update. Pleased see you get back to it. 😛
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Rudra and Shambhavi I am excited to read what happens next. Lovely update. 😛
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Jyoti very exciting and please make Rudra and Shambhavi's love story very passionate. 😳😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jyoti ekdum sooper update.😉
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I have added some more characters.😃

Raunak: shambhavi's younger brother

Sameeksha: shrijana's daughter

It's been 16 years since the war. Both rudra and shamabhavi forget about their first meeting with the growing age.

Videha's palace:

Vikramaditya, padmavati and raunak their 10 year old son were watching a sword fight which was happening in videha's battleground but shambhavi was not there. A sword fight was going on between a prince and an ordinary but powerful warrior whose face was covered with a black cloth. The fight seems very severe as if both of them are trying to kill each other. Though the prince was a good warrior but the other one was more powerful than him. The prince was trying his best to attack the warrior but everytime the warrior defends himself. Vikramaditya, padmavati. raunak and the audience all were watching this fight and enjoying it very much. After sometime warrior defeated prince. The prince was lying on the ground, everyone clapped for the warrior. Vikramaditya was very impressed with the warrior and happy too. The prince gets up, vikramaditya goes towards him and said:

Vikramaditya: you fight bravely prince but its sad that you lost.

That prince was fuming in anger

Vikramaditya: now that you have lost you can't marry my daughter.

Actually the fight was a competition and the condition was that whosoever defeats the masked warrior will marry shambhavi, princess of videha.

Prince: huhh! I won't accept this defeat, I have been cheated. This warrior defeated me by crook.

Masked warrior: very well, then tell everybody how I deceived you?

The prince becomes speechless.

Masked warrior: everyone is waiting for your answer prince.

The prince doesn't say anything.

Masked warrior: your silence is your answer.

The masked warrior removed his mask and he turns out to be a girl. The masked warrior was a girl. Everyone except vikramaditya, padmavati and the boy become stunned especially the prince. He couldn't believe that a girl defeated him.

Prince: what is this king? It's a girl. You make me fight with a girl. You insulted me.

Vikramaditya: She is not an ordinary girl prince. She is the one whom you came here to marry. She is our daughter, she is princess shambhavi.

Vikramaditya says proudly.

The prince becomes more stunned and shocked when he get to know that the girl is none other than the princess herself. Shambhavi was smiling. Everyone in the battlefield claps for her and praises her. The prince becomes furious.

Prince: king vikramaditya this is not done, you have cheated me by making me fight with your daughter. You have to pay for this.

Shambhavi: you came here to marry me, am I right?

Prince looked at her stangely

Shambhavi: how can you even think of marrying me if you can't even defeat me?. How can I marry you if you can't even protect me. Prince go back and search some other girl for you because I am not marrying you. I defeated you in the fight and according to the condition you can't marry me. how can you protect me if you can't even defeat me.

Prince was fuming in anger. He said

prince: I won't take this insult lightly. I will avenge my insult. I will return and marry princess shambhavi.

Vikramaditya and all were disappointed hearing this but his words doesn't affect shambhavi. She paid no attention towards him.

Prince left the battleground furiously.

Shambhavi: don't worry pitaji, I know he'll do nothing. He won't be able and if he do so then you know your daughter

Vikramaditya(smiles): I know my daughter is very brave.

Raunak: My didi is very brave. She can defeat anyone

Shambhavi hugged him. Vikramaditya and padmavati smiles.

Kusum van

Now shambhavi was in her princess attire. She was wearing a royal blue lehenga with yellow blouse and blue duppatta with heavy jewelleries and was looking absolutely stunning. She was considered as most beautiful girl among all the kingdoms. Shambhavi and vikramaditya were talking

Vikramaditya: looks like you are not in a mood to marry?

Shambhavi: why are you saying this pitaji? It's not my fault that till now no one is able to defeat me.

Vikramaditya: But shambhavi you have to understand that you have to get married one day.

Shambhavi (smiles): Pitaji, do you belive me?

Vikramaditya nods in yes.

Shambahvi: Then don't worry I will get married but with the one I love. He should be brave and should be kind hearted. I t's not necessary that he should be a prince but he should be a better person whom I can respect.

Vikramaditya: ok my dear it's impossible to win with you.

Shambhavi (mischievously): But if you ask me I don't think that anyone can defeat me.

"THERE IS NO PERSON IN THIS WORLD WHO CAN DEFEAT ME'

Mahisha's palace

A man was practicing with his sword. His body was all sweaty. His eyes were filled with fury. He seems very furious and serious. Although he looks like a serious man but he was very handsome. He was a man of every girl's dreams. But he was of very reserve nature. He was exhausted practicing sword but still continues to practice as if venting out his anger A girl came towards him and said.

"RUDRA"

That man was none other than prince rudra.

Rudra saw her but doesn't react. She was rudra's daimaa's daughter sameeksha. She came with water.

Sameeksha: Rudra, you have practiced enough. Here have some water you look exhausted.

Rudra(with no expression): I am fine, you don't have to worry about me.

Sameeksha: why are you saying like this? I am your friend; I should be worried about you.

Rudra: I said I am fine, leave me alone.

Sameeksha (in a sad tone): That means you don't consider me your friend. Alright I'll go from here.

Rudra: wait

He goes towards her and took glass of water. He didn't said anything but drinks water and left, leaving sameeksha heart broken. Shrijana came there and watches sameeksha, she goes towards her.

Shrijana: sameeksha

Sameeksha(with teary eyes): maa, what is my mistake? did I do something wrong?

Shrijana: No dear, why are you saying like this?

Sameeksha: then why can't he see my feelings for him? Why can't he see how much I love him?

Shrijana makes her understand.

Shrijana: I know your feelings for him. I know you love him but he doesn't love you. He only consider you as a friend nothing more than that and besides his mission is to avenge his queen's death. You should respect your friendship. Its sad that he doesn't think of you in that way but its true.

Sameeksha hugs her and cries.

Vajramitra and rudra were talking.

Vajramitra: Look at yourself son, what have you done to you self? This is not my rudra, my rudra was fun loving and a caring person. Its been years since I saw you smiling.

Rudra: pitaji I am not the same rudra that rudra died a long back.

Vajramitra: how did you become so ruthless? You were not like that.

Rudra: circumstances made me ruthless. Whenever I close my eyes I see my mother lying in front of me and dying in your arms. I can't forget how brutally she was killed and I will not rest until I'll take revenge of my mother's death from vikramaditya.

Rudra left the palace in anger leaving vajramitra worried.

Rudra was in a remote place far away from palace. He was standing near a cliff and thinking about all the past incidents. He cried out loud but no one was here to hear him. He stayed there for few hours and then returns back to palace.

When he came to palace vajramitra and baldev were talking to each other.

Rudra: whats going on in here what are you talking about?

Vajramitra: nothing son, we were just talking nothing serious

Rudra: pitaji, I am your son, I have the right to know.

Baldev looks at vajramitra as if he was asking and vajramitra nods his head in yes.

Baldev: Our informers informed us that vikramaditya's daughter princess shambhavi is going for their kuldevi's pooja which is very far away from their kingdom and is located in a very remote place. I heard that vikramaditya loves his daughter very much and she is his life.

Rudra didn't say anything.

Rudra: Is she going alone?

Baldev: yes, she is going alone.

Rudra smirks.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Wow please make the two meet soon.

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