Rudra and shambhavi (A Moharika FF) update pg 145 - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice intense update. 😊
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first of all i wanna say sorry coz this update sucks.

Shambhavi was stunned to see Rudra.she was watching him in disbelief.rudra was watching her with a slight smile on his face.he approached her slowly.he was getting closer to her.shambhavi was little scared.suddenly raunak comes.

Raunak: didi what are you doing here?everyone is waiting for you inside.

Shambhavi turned towards him.

Shambhavi:i am coming i was just.

She again turned to see Rudra but he was not there.she becomes surprised.

Shambhavi: how is it possible?i just saw him here.was it an illusion?

Raunak:didi what are you thinking? Let's go inside.

Raunak holds shambhavi's hand and took her inside.shambhavi again turned to see Rudra but no one was there.shambhavi comes inside the palace.

Vikramaditya:shambhavi dear.go to your room and rest I'll bring food for you.

Padmavati:your father is right.you go and rest.

Raunak: but i want to talk to didi

Vikramaditya: not now son,your sister is tired and she needs rest.shambhavi go to your room

Shambhavi nods in yes and leaves for her room.shambhavi reaches her room.she looks around and thought about the cottage in which she stayed.she again starts remembering Rudra.she goes in her room's balcony.whole kusum van was visible from her balcony.she remembers the past moments but then becomes stern.

Shambhavi:daasi

Daasi:yes princess

Shambhavi: i wanna bath before eating.go and make arrangements.

Daasi:ok princess.

Shambhavi goes to bath.it was a small pool full of rose petals.shambhavi enters the pool.she pours water on herself.she came out of the pool all wet.she was lost somewhere.suddenly she heard a voice.."princess".she turns and saw Rudra standing.she again becomes shocked seeing him there.

Rudra:you look beautiful princess.are you thinking about me?

Shambhavi(in anger):what are you doing here?go away from here or else I'll call my soldiers.

Rudra didn't say anything but was smiling seeing her.

Shambhavi:i said leave

She goes towards him but he disappeared.she then realises that it was just an illusion.she becomes more angry and frustrated.she leaves in anger.she comes to her room and gets ready.after a while padmavati and vikramaditya comes with food.

Vikramaditya:look dear we have brought your favorite dishes.come I'll feed you with my own hands.

Padmavati was watching them lovingly.vikramaditya makes shambhavi sit and feeds her.padmavati too feeds her and when she finished eating they left telling her to take rest.

In the night

Shambhavi was standing on a cliff.she was in bridal outfit.she was searching for someone.a man was shown on the edge of the cliff.shambhavi approaches him she puts her hand on his shoulder.the man turns,he was none other Tha Rudra.shambhavi becomes shocked seeing him.she steps back.rudra holds her forcefully and filled her maang with sindoor.shambhavi becomes dumbstruck.she was watching him in disbelief.suddenly she wakes up and realises that she was dreaming.she thinks

Shambhavi: why can't i erase him from my mind.what kind of dream was that? I have to forget him.

She goes in balcony and again lost in rudra's thoughts.she then closes her eyes in frustration.she was feeling helpless.she turns and saw rudra standing infront of her.she was watching him helplessly.rudra goes near her.shambhavi was about to say something but rudra stops her by putting his finger on her lips.he then carries her in his arms and lay her down on bed.shambhavi was watching him teary eyes.rudra caresses her head and shambhavi closes her eyes.when she opened her eyes she was in the balcony.it was her imagination.

Shambhavi: why are you doing this to me? Why you keep coming in front of me?

Here in the village Rudra too was unable to sleep.shambhavi's thoughts were bothering him.he gets up and stands near the window looking at the moon.he thinks.

Rudra:i don't know what's happening to me?i never felt so helpless but i do know one thing that i have to forget you and I'll forget you.

He looks at shambhavi's anklet and thinks

Rudra:you and your thoughts can't affect me.rudra will never change for anyone.he will always remain the same.

In the morning

Rudra,vajaramitra and baldev were ready to leave.

Vajramitra: thank you for everything.you took care of my son.

Radha maa: my pleasure maharaj.he is like son to me.

Rudra: I'll never forget the love and care which you gave me these days.you are like a mother to me.

Radha maa: always be happy rudra.i'll pray for your well being.you are like a son to me.

Rudra: I promise whenever you'll need me I'll always be there for you.

Radha maa smiles and blesses him.all of them bids final goodbye to radha maa and left.radha maa watches them going with teary eyes.

Here in videha's place

Shambhavi was roaming in kusum van.padmavati and vikramaditya saw her.

Vikramaditya: what is it dear? you seems worried.Is something bothering you?

Shambhavi: no pitaji I am fine

Padmavati: I know you are upset because of all this.but now you don't need to worry at all.we are there for you.

Shambhavi: I know maa.i am just tired.i am going in my room.

Shambhavi left from there leaving vikramaditya and padmavati worried.

Padmavati: swami, she is very tensed and worried.i can cleary see that.there is something which is bothering her and she is unable to tell us.

Vikramaditya: I know padmavati.past fews days were very tough for her.thats why I didn't asked her about the person who attacked her.we should give her some time.she will be fine.

Padmavati: you are right maharaj. We should give her some time. We will try to cheer her.we will try our best to make her happy.

Vikramaidtya nod in yes.shambhavi was in room and she seems very sad.raunak comes to cheer her up.

Raunak: didi I am very angry with you. You didn't even talk to me.

Shambhavi(smile): how can I forget my sweet little brother. i am sorry that I didn't give time to you.

Raunak: then let's go and play it's been so many days since we played any game.

Shambhavi was a little hesitant but she agreed to play with him. shambhavi closes his eyes with a strip.raunak starts searching for her.they were playing happily and shambhavi too becomes happy playing with raunak.

In the night

It was raining heavily.rudra and vajramitra was about to reach mahisha but due to heavy rain they were unable to see anything so they have decided to stop till the rain stops.they were standing under the tree

Baldev: don't know when will this rain stops?

Vajramitra: yes you are right but we have to wait till rain stops.

Rudra was silent.vajramitra and baldev were talking to each other.rudra goes away

Vajramitra: rudra where are you going?

Rudra didn't answer.

Baldev: let him go.he'll come back.

Rudra was thinking about the moment when he and shambhavi were drenching in rain.when shambhavi hugged him.he was walking angrily.here in the videha's palace shambhavi too was drenching in rain.both of them were thinking about each other.

Shambhavi: why I can't stop thinking about you?

Rudra : why I can't stop thinking about you?

Both were going through the same pain,same phase of confusion.struggling with their feelings.unable to decide what to do.

Shambhavi comes back in her room.she was standing in front of the mirror.she saw rudra's reflection in the mirror.she fumes in anger.she throws her jewellery box on the mirror.the mirror broke into pieces.

Shambhavi: leave me alone.go away from here.just leave me alone.

Rudra hits his hand on the rock and his hands starts bleeding.he too was fuming in anger.

Rudra: you don't exist for me. I will not become weak. Rudra will never fall for his enemy's daughter. Never...


Edited by jyoti07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Jyo Update is good then y have u mentioned it sucks..
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Posted: 12 years ago
YAAR ROMI MUJHE KUCH SAMAJH NAHI AA RAHA THA KUCH BHI LIKH DIYA
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haa.. haa.. Lagta hai tumahara real life Rudra Mann ko occupy kiya hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm ho sakta hai.
issshhh
mujhe sharam aa rahi hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayo Rabba...Chalta hain ...So dear enjoying the phase
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Posted: 12 years ago
yes enjoying shopping very much.hehehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
What Jyoti it is actually beautiful. I loved it. My only wish was when she got out of that pool after bath if only Rudra came in front of her for real. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
this update does not sucks, it rocks, perfect description of the pain called love. 🤗

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