SwaRon OS - An Unpredictable Date

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Res for manya

unres

My comment..
It was acute and romantic one...beautifly penned dwn...nd d bst prt ws phala nasha<3<3 song being played( its evn my fav. Song lol)
My fav. Lines : *"Sharon stops hims, I want to go on a date with you on your cycle. Yeh bhi humare pyaar ki witness rahi hai, toh aaj kyun iska saath chode?" She looks at Swayam and the both burst out laughing"*
This ws damm adorable.
P.S. Im srry fr ths lame cmmnt...actualy im nt in right state of mind..credits to precap :P

Edited by ShrutikaSwaRon - 12 years ago

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Un_reserved

Such a sweet and cute one shot..Loved the concept of rain with SwaRon first date..I agree in SwaRon case,everything is unpredictable just like u'r one shot..So moving on,i liked the begining part..Their message chat after the day of their confession..Loved the excitement and joy of both swayam and sharon regarding their first romantic date..Cycle idea was really great yar..Majnu laila with cycle..Beautifull combination..Loving dialouges of swayam was really adorable..Then tea idea was unique..A perfect and unpredictable date for SwaRon..Song was just awesome and yea,its favorite one of all of us..Then description of emotions and feelings of SwaRon in last para is just flawless,That was perfectly beautifull..So i just loved it and i enjoyed very much.

Great work guys,And u'r duo for writing is perfectly wonderfull..Keep write more..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Mommy n kshitija..!!
This was amazing..!!
Luvd it!!❤️

Abhi chotu cmnt se kaam chala lo pls..mera tst h..to studying...baad Me vl try to edit!!:*

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hey swthrts...this was indeed a lovelyyy surprise 😃

res for now...will edit tomo😳😳

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

loved it..
really nice os..
swaron n rain is always treat to read..
n it was beautifully written so double treat👍🏼
thanks for the pm :)

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bharosagupta

@bharosagupta

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awesome os, thanks to medha di, i have read this one

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awsum i really really luved it

All i can do while reading was AWWW

I wish D3 mein bhi swaron ki 1st date aisi hi ho

Thank u sooo much for the pm

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anandita

@blooming_angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Res...😉
Unres...😆
wow didu...its was amazing...!!!🥳

superb Os ...and beautifully penned down..!!!

its like my pari has written a beautiful fairytale...!!!

i was awestruck and i am still speechless...!!!🥱

aur aap logo ki tarif kya karu..!!! aaplog toh ho hi fabulous writers and friends..!!!🥱😆

it was A-W-E-S-O-M-E...

Marvelous, beautiful and what not..!!😳

actually it was perfect...!!!!👏

jaldi jaldi milo mujhse i wanna give u a tight vali hug..!!!🤗

LOVE U LOADS...❤️

ANNY..(aapki princess😉)