SwaRon OS - An Unpredictable Date

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys...me(Shrutika) and Kshitija(KS_SWARON) have written a Swaron OS...we all are enjoying the rainy season and so we both thought of a writing a rainy special os on SwaRon

We would like to dedicate it to Tania(tanzz...its your welcome back gift)...our sweetheart Veronica...our cute dii Juili tai...and our partner in crime...our Ria...luv u all



Swayam and Sharon were the official couple now. They were SwaRon now. SwaRon they always have longed for each other's love. But finally they accepted it, there was no longing for each other now. Their hearts belonged to each other long before but now even their heartbeats said it out loud and clear "Its SWARON".

These two souls were not the only ones who were lost in the magic of love, but even nature was celebrating their love, their unison . It was raining heavily,as if god was trying to spread love and make get everyone painted in the colour of love.

Swayam and Sharon had just confessed it yesterday to each other and today they were restless, they wanted to be with each other, wanted to be in each other embrace.

Tick Tick,Sharon was so irritated hearing the sound that brought her back from her dreamworld.She blushed seeing the message on her phone. It was his, HER Swayam's message.

"Sharon, I wanna meet you." She read the message. "How can we , its raining heavily" she replied. Although she too wanted to meet him but thought of irrtitating him.

"Swayam I too want to meet you. Its raining out, you and me together, it would be so romantic." Saying this to herself she tries to hide her face in a pillow.

Tick Tick, again the message brings her back from her dream world "How unromantic of you Miss Sharon Rai Prakash?" I will be there in half an hour. You be ready. It will be our first date together. A rainy date.

Sharon was already pink reading the message, and she messaged him back, not a rainy date, a ROMANTIC RAINY DATE.

Swayam was jumping in joy to see this romantic side of Sharon.He was excited to meet her. So he got ready and rushed to sharon's house.

Sharon was waiting outside her house. She was waiting eagerly for Swayam. A smile crept through her face when she saw Swayam coming riding his cycle.

"Swayam , Tums ach mein unpredictable ho, jab tumne date kaha toh I thought Tum car mein aaoge mujhe lene, par nahi tum toh toh aapni cycle pe aagaye!!"

Swayam smiles at Sharon and says"akhir tumne mann hi liya mein unpredictable hun ,par iske saath aur ek sach hai that I know you so well, mein toh aadat se majboor kya karoo par meine driver se kehkar car mangwai hai, who dekho" and he points towards his car.

Sharon "Toh chalo chalet hai." Swayam "Haan chalo" and he tries to get down from his cycle. Sharon stops hims, I want to go on a date with you on your cycle. Yeh bhi humare pyaar ki witness rahi hai, toh aaj kyun iska saath chode?" She looks at Swayam and the both burst out laughing.

Swayam leans towards her, and she could feel his breath on her nape which makes her heart beat faster and she clutches the handle of her cycle. He whispers"YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND" and her hands strikes the bell and its sound bring her back to reality.

She gets on the cycle and they start their new journey of towards love riding on the path of love.

Two love birds riding on their love vehicle.They were enjoying each other's company. There was no need for any external joy, a world existed which was SwaRon World beautiful than Heaven.

They were happy to be together, away from all jealousy, confusions. Sharon was enjoying this soft drizzles that were kissing her face and Swayam was so elated seeing Sharon so excited and happy.

The feeling of being in love , belonging to each other was a bliss and they were enjoying it. Nature was symbolizing the blossoming romance between them .

They stopped at a nearby place to take shelter as it started raining heavily. Swayam parked his cycle and they both rushes towards that place. Both of them lost in each other. Suddenly Sharon moved towards a car which was nearby and started drawing a heart out of the rain drops accumulated on the glass. Swayam came near her and completed the other half of the heart.

The moment he completed the heart,she whispered ''I love u swayam''...This words he could hear till eternity...he was so lost in her words that he could nt address that she moved close to him it was when she touched his cheek he came back to reality...the beautiful present...And in this present the most important thing was they were on their 1st date and completely drenched...''i wish hum gaadi me aate'' he said a bit sadly''nahi swayam,agar gaadi me aate toh ye beautiful moment miss kar dete'' she said blushing lightly...For a moment he could nt believe that shes the same Sharon standing in front of him saying this...''Ur changed Sharon''he said softly touching her cheekshe rested herself on his palm...''u have changed this diva into ur Laila''she blushed hard...He smiled at her n again lost himself in herjust when he heard her say ''humari date ka kya hoga''he thought for a moment when his attention was caught by something...he took her hand and started moving in that direction...when they both reached the place she said ''swayam ur...before she could complete her sentence he said ''very unpredictable''...And Sharon vaise bhi predictable is so boring...they both laughed as some memories were refreshed... She looked at him when he said ''so miss Sharon Rai Prakash kya aap mere saath apni pehli tea date njoy karegi'' and saying this he extended his hands towards her... She willingly took his hand and they both got into a tea stall and sat on the bench...''Bhaiya 2 special chai'' he said

Ji the person replied...''swayam mene kabhi nhi socha tha ki humari 1st date yaha aise tea stall pe hogi'' she said with full excitement which was visible in her voice... ''Sharon tum Sharon Rai Prakash ho tumhare liye sab kuch alag n unique n special'' he said with same excitement...

She could only look at him lovingly...they wished this moment to stop here...THEY SAY NA ''WHEN CUPID STRIKES EVERYTHING SEEMS TO BE PERFECT'' and they were no exception...bt then to disturb the moment the chai arrived...they took the tea n started drinking it...ofcourse stealing glances at each other...

Just when their attention was grabbed by the radio at the tea stall...''this is my favourite song'' both said together n laughed...

He stood up and extended his hand towards her ''may I'' he requested through his eyes... She gave her hand in his with joy n excitement...and then they both started moving to the rhythm of their (n our)fav song...

~Udhta hi phiru in hawao me kahi...

Ya mai jhul jaun inn ghataon me kahi~ and he brought her close to him...

~ek kar doo aasmaan aur zameeen kaho yaaro kya karu kya nhi~ both dancing to their song that song which was made for them...to define their love...

~pehla nasha pehla khumar naya pyaar hai naya intejaar~ he placed a kiss on her forehead...

She blushed and hid herself in his chest...and the rest of the song they both embraced each other...They moved away only when the song was over...''swayam our 1st date'' she said with all love ''yes Sharon'' he smiled with all love...This were the only words they could say...they were out of words,their heart full of joy n happiness Happiness of being together...embracing each other as there was no tomorrow...Being in love was such a feeling which on can feel only when in love...and they were nt only in love bt madly in love...Their 1st date was witnessed by the whole universe...the rain was njoying this moment with them...

And they were fully contented with their Togetherness...

Love is the only feeling that can be felt when someone makes you feel that



Luv

Kshitija and Shrutika


P.S: Criticisms and suggestions are welcomed

Edited by ShrutikaSwaRon - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os
beautifully written
loved it
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res 😉

oye superrr adorable ,very cute wala n swaron in rains is always treat to imagine .os bhi special chai ki tarha sweet tha .😆 aare u r marathi naa ,khup maja aali ,😉
Edited by Sanskruti_tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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**officially reserved under the name of Aisha Kapoor. **
dare ny1 tries to put their foot in here.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I knw mera res hai.. this is just for bookmarking😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mine😳

Awww dat was so beautiful...di i must say wenever u post something its like a gift to all swaronians...😳
Ek toh Swaron, upar se rain,And then first date,cycle ride, chai and dance on pehla nasha...😳😳cant get enough of it di it couldnt have been better...its too gud...perfect OS...
Thw Swaron World ...
Edited by -Chaitra- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shrutika, this was so ummm pretty is what i will say about this.
new lovebirds----and new romance---it was a write up as refreshing as the rain falling in it.

the cycle part was too good...and swayam is obviously not bothered by petrol prices😆...i actually thought he was because he rode his cycle everywhere, but here toh cycle, driver aur car teeno hi laya hai!! for our diva. but sharon is...bothered, apne lover boy ka pocket halka nahi karegi syani ladki.🤣isse kehte hai pyaar.

no re---i really loved how you said sharon wanted to go on his cycle because it was a witness to their love----and its romantic---a cycle ride in rain.

also driver kaka ko baarish mein khichdi khaane ki chutti mil gayi. this gal is gonna be a very good future mistress of shekhawat mansion.😎

teri writing bari pyari hai re...and kshitija ki bhi...loved it guys.---palki ma'am padh le toh shayad ye scene dekhne ko mil jaye.

love--medha


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Posted: 12 years ago
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dat was so cute and romantic... loved laila and majnu... 😃
u have described it really well...Swaron totally in love... 😳
first date...rainy season...totally romantic... 😳
awesome dear... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shrutu n kshti 🤗
u know wat dis was my dream date for swaron. . I was tellin my friends in at dat my dream date for swaron is cycle ride in d nite halki halki baarish slow dance n chai 😉 😉
i also wanted some1 to write an os on it but sab mujhe hee bol rahe the ki tu hee likh de. .
U guys actually wrote wat my dream date was for dem 😊 😊
i still cant believe i read dis. . Am lost in my dream date u have so brilliantly written it 👏
it was short simple n cute n full on romantic 😊 😊
as yeh mera dream date hai for them it obviously is close to my heart 😳 😳
thank u guys for writing dis am so so happy reading it. .
I love it 😉 😉
lost in swaron land
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ shrutika n kshitija- thank you kiddos...😳 that is so sweet of you both for giving this wonderful surprise...i was pleasantly shocked by this...so thank u so muchhh


it's an awesome os..simple yet splendidly beautiful...personally i like watching n reading simple n cute love-story/romance ...n hi OS exactly tashich ahe...superb one..plz do write more on swaron...thanks for making me smile with this one...😳 Will wait for such more surprises...

With Love,

Jui Tai.


p.s. sorry i saw my res later 😲 so replying here..


1 question- tumhi doghi manage kasa karta , i mean writing together?
Edited by juili_p - 12 years ago

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