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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

thnx dear.😃..
well she hv written the next part n i ll b posting it soon😳...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

Nice..
Kriya kaa letter was Awesome..
Full of Emotions..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
ise kab update karoge ???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
hey guys extremely sorry for the delay..it was all my fault.😭.firsly bcoz of my lazyness aur parso jab finally type kia tho my pc crashed 😡n hv to undergo whole formatting again n in this process updated got deleted🤢 bt nw i m typing n i guess it would b up till ni8.😃.."hopefully"... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😉Recap...

the man asked if he could see it.rey felt little weird but still gave him n may b tht was the best thing he did

Man: aap inhe kaise jante hai?

Rey: ye meriwait a sec aap inhe jante hai?do u knw where is she?

Man:

Part 4

Man:ha...yehi manali main hai..she owns an famous dance academy over there..main unse ek bar mil chukka hu...

Hearing this rey was on cloud 9..he felt he was breathing after ages...his happiness knew no bonds..his eyes were speaking his happiness which was clearly visible n tht man was shocked plz confused to see him like this...

Rey: really...kya plz aap mujhe waha ka address de sakte hai...plz plz,..it will be a great favor...

Rey was just going on without evn giving the man a chance to speak...while tht man stood amazed seeing rey like this...but atlast the man spoke...

Man: Mr.Singhania I m sorry main apko address nahi de sakta...

Hearing this rey was broken as well as anger n y? was the insant reply from rey...

Man: kyuki I don't have it now...hearing this rey's face come down but I the next sec he was smiling like an idiot...but I m sure mere PA ke pass zaroor hoga..i will ask her to pass it over to u...is tht ok...

Rey:ya sure...tht's absolutely fine n thnx a lot...😃

Man:tht's k...so may I leave..rey nodded n tht man hardly had reached the door when rey called him n asked to msg him asap to which the man just smiled with an assuring look n left...where as rey he was just dancing like a manic n was sending thank u kisses to universeji...his happiness was unexplainable...he felt that he is alive...every pain,hurt he had went through have just disappeared...everything felt too small infront of the feeling he was feeling now...without wasting a second he booked a ticket for manali n was just waiting for the address,,,to get his life back...😳

It was evening n rey was getting restless...his ticket for next morning is confirmed n also packing is done...only thing left is the address atlast his wait was finished n at ni8 he got the address...he was so happy ,excited,nervous...many feeling were going thru his mind n sleep was far away from his eyes...he was just waiting for the morning to start his mission of getting back HIS LOVE,HIS LIFE BACK...mission B3" BRING BACK BAATCUTTER"😉

The next morning he left for manali leaving a msg @ the office that he had some work...he hadn't informed any1 about kria not even sw...there wre 2 reasons 1st he wasn't sure n don't wanted to give false hope n secondly n importantly if he would have informed every1 would hv been with him ri8 nw but he wanted to sortout everything with her personally first tht's y he kept is secret n went to reach his destination...on his way all the memories he have spent with her came to his mind from their first meeting to their numerous fights,those cute momentsspent with her...their LLHH,HER CONFESSION & LASTLY THEIR LAST DANCE...he was so lost tht he was unaware of the tears those were flowing thru his eyes.he came in his present by the announcement made in flight tht they hv reached manali & It brought a wide smile on his face as well as he was feeling a little restless a weird feeling the cant be explained it about 6yrs he had seen her & the thought of meeting her again was making him restless as well as excited with all these thoughts he had reached the place told by his client & stood in front of a beautiful building & with every step towards the house was making his heartbeat to raise to a new level with every1 step his feeling were taking new turn...he was about go towards the door of the house when a small girl came towards him & hided herself behind that girl was his girl..HIS LUV & more of all HIS LIFE,the REASON FOR HIS BREATHE...he was just stunned to see her...she was looking gorgeous as always n was calling tht girl..it all happened so sudden tht b4 he could react his eyes met her & he went numb...

Kria: Ani wait baba..ani. kria was just finding that girl when her eyes met the person's eyes.who she was waiting for like eternity...she was shocked was an understatement she went numb...jis insaan se milne ki hope hi chod di thi wo uske samne tha...tht person was standing infront of her..she was so happy tht she didn't realized when her eyes filled up with tears as she was lost in the eyes who were calling her with immense love for her...which were expressing his pain of leaving without her & happiness of seeing her but these 2 luv birds were brought back to earth by the naught kid who was hiding behind rey n nw due to lack of attention she called kria...but wht rey heard made the earth below his foot slip...he stood there shocked shattered n broken...

Girl:mom main yaha hu... 😕

This brought kria back to present she just asked ani to go n play as ahe hv to alk with him n ani getting the opportunity of escaping from drinking milk for which kria was running behind her she happily left for playing...kria was about to say something but stopped hearing rey's words which broke her while pain n hurt was clearly visible in his voice...

Kria:rey i.😲

Rey: wow kria..naam yaad hai I thought ki mujhe tumhare samne apne aapko introduce karna padega as u see people forget easily n MOVE ON😡...stressing on the word move on...

Kria:rey let me...

Rey: no kria aaj main bolunga aur tum sunoge...bahot aasani se aage badgaye na tum n phir PYAAAR BHI HOGAYA...u knw tumhara who letter us main tho tumne bahot kuch likha than a like "U CAN NEVER LUV SOME! ELSE N WILL ALWAYS LUV ME" (with sarcasm) yehi likha tha na... tum mujhse kitna PYAAR KARTE HO who tho dikhe raha hai!!!!how could u kria??💔

Precap

Rey: kria kya humara pyaar itna kamzor that ht u gave up so easily on our love..😡

Kria:rey halat ne majboor kardia tha...😭

Rey: waise ani apke dad kaha hai?

Ani:unke bare main mujhe koi baat nahi karni ...I hate him...who bahot bure hai...maa ko data the hai n marte hai...mujhe who bilkul nahi pasad...who maa ko bahot hurt karte hai..i hate him... 😡

phew!!

katam...

guys here ends the part...

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guys i m sorry for small update actually aly ne mujhe lamba wala hi dia tha😳 n i typed all of it but patha nahi kyu its not getting posted infact ye part bhi maine 5-6 post kia tab ja kar post huva hai.😡..really sorry...😭 my pc is giving me a hard time😡...sorry..next part on 10 sept...

Edited by kriyansh_Alisha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
kriya ki shadi hogai😲
amazing update
update next part soon
Edited by anjali22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Nahii!!!!!!!!!!
kr ke bich misunderstanding
ohhh god
kria has daughter
iski wajah se kria n rey ko safar na karna pade
n in precap
ani say she hate her dad
want to know more about It
Edited by kriapatel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
its superb update
kria has daughter
iski wajah se kria n rey ko safar na karna pade
kriya ko koi marta hai
how dare he 😡

nxt part jaldi
thnks 4 pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Ek toh after lot of time you updt
Dat too a small one
Kriyaansh mile bt wth a mu
Updt was bt nxt time a big one with lot of kriyaansh moments
N cnt sn

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
hayye kr ke bich misunderstanding

kriya has daughter

update soon

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