You make me feel alive..*Kriyaansh*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guys...its me pooja on alisha's a/c n here is an os on kriyaansh written by alisha...as she is still less active so i m updating on her behalf...here is the intro..enjoy..hope u guys like it n do leave ur feedback...








Baby u make me cry...
u r the reason i lie...
bt u hv made me fly whenever u r around.i feel i m alive...
baby u r the reason i smile...
i luv u more thn i can...
u r mine n only mine...
no1 can separate us not evn fate can...
no matter if distance btw us is miles...
u ll always b mine...
u r the reason i smile...
i wanna luv u more...if i can...
bcoz You make me feel alive...

guys this os contains 3-4 parts depending upon the length of chappy n first part will b up soon...do leave ur feedback...



Edited by kriyansh_Alisha - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res :-D . .
Unres :-D . .
Hmm. . . . . . . .
Nice start. . . . . .
Update soon. .:-D
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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my god alsiha di
os
yipeee
thnku pooja di for pming it
wow
interesting intro
sounds nice
di
plzzz update soon\
plzzz
and
alisha di take care and i m isss u so much and pooja di aapko bhi miss karti hun

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc start...
eagerly waiting for d update...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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concept is good ... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Separation is it able to destroy true luv or the true luv is so strong to withstand the separation 'lets see wht happened when 2 souls who loved each other like hell r separated n their lives were turned into hell'.

Part 1''

6 years..6 yrs frm tht dreadful day which ruined 2 lives completely.. tht day when smriti came to knw abt kria's dance n rey n she took kria away frm her dil dosti n dance'. 2 souls who were meant 2 b 1 were separated heartlessly n where left 2 live without eachother'.

'well tym spent 6 yrs passed..everything changed every1 moved on in their life with kria's memories in their heart'swaron n viha r married n r blessed with a girl n boy respectively..rimar r soon gonna b 1 while nil n sim r together n bh n vish r still trying to understand their feeling while the gang already treats them as couple'well every1 move on except 1 who moved on in his life bt never in his heart..i.e "Reyaansh Singhania" 2day he is a leading business man,an youth icon n ideal "bachelor" yep single bcoz the only girl he loved truly is not with him but does he hv any grudge r hard feelings for her?? HELL NO bcoz he knew what he is feeling is just a penny of hurt which his luv will b going thru'.ya he knew everything.all the reasons y kria left him as well as what she felt for him..

Never in his life he hv felt so helpless n so weak'.no doubt he was happy tht their was a person who loved him so much tht she evn didn't bother 2 think abt herself b4 sacrificing her whole self,her life, for him bt on the same tym he was feeling ashamed he was guilty as he couldn't do anything for her'but wht could he do.he hd tried all ways of reaching for her ,finding her bt outcome was always nil..bt still he hd a hope.hope tht was reason for his life.yep he was living on a hope of meeting kria otherwise how is it possible for a body 2 live without his soul'he was just living for her'the thought of meeting her was the only reason for his breathe'

He still remember tht day when he got 2 knw abt the reason behind kria's departure ..the day when he got 2 knw abt kria's leaving the college he hd visited her home to get any clue about her whereabouts well he didn't got any clue but wht he got gave a new definition to the luv they share….years hv passed but the memories of tht day was as fresh as just happened yesterday……

Flashback……..

Phone call btw sw n rey…

Sw: rey tu kaha hai? Aur tu theek tho hai na?

Rey: sw main theek hu n kria ke ghar ja raha hu !!

Sw: dude..tu pagal ho gaya hai..sir ne kaha hai na she hd left Mumbai tho phir uske ghar ja kar karega kya?

Rey: main jantha hu ki sir ne kya kaha hai bt main kria ke bagair nahi reh saktha..uska iss tarah bina bathaye ya mile chale janna I m sure there is something & I wanna know it plz sw….sw tu nahi janna chaha hain kya?

Sw:janna hai dude…bohot se sawal hain jinka jawab chahiya par milenge kaise? She hd left us..

Rey: sw.calm down n I promise main un sawalo ka jawab jan kar rahunga…

Sw: I so wish rey….btw tu akele kaise karega? Main aa javu kya?

Rey: no dude…plz let me do this.main ye akele karna chah tha hu…..bt I promise I will call u if needed….

Sw: jaise teri marzi….do take care n inform me if needed anytime..

Rey: ya bye…….

Saying so rey cutted the call & went to kria's home thru his normal life line pipe line…whole house was empty n tht emptiness was killing him..bt still he ignore it n searched whole house bt got nothing..when he was about to leave something caught his sight with change his life upside down..

so guys here is the end of 1st part...

plz do leave ur reveiws...


Edited by kriyansh_Alisha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update
update next part soon
Edited by anjali22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start !!

Waiting !!

Update Soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start
wanna read more
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago

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