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Wow!! It was simply superbb goli dear..the way u have described her beauty hayee bichara suyash..sirf dur se hi aahe bhar raha hai.. 😉
Hope soon she realise her love for him..
Aww ashu is so sweet..keep going everyone 😆
Cont soon nd thank u soo much for pm.. 🤗

Thank you so much for the pm.

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Wow!! It was simply superbb goli dear..the way u have described her beauty hayee bichara suyash..sirf dur se hi aahe bhar raha hai.. 😉
Hope soon she realise her love for him..
Aww ashu is so sweet..keep going everyone 😆
Cont soon nd thank u soo much for pm.. 🤗

Originally posted by: bishop22

Thank you so much for the pm.

I loved your continuation. Waiting for the next part. Continue soon

Originally posted by: ..Lesha..

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I am glad you liked it.. Yes she is indeed very beautiful.. I hope I can do justice to your expectations di..</font>

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Goli dear..i m sure u will..u re an amazing writer.. 🤗

They looked at Ashu.. Tears welled Parvathi's eyes.. Suyash couldn't even think of taking Om's place.. Yes he loved her.. He always would.. He turned..

Suyash: Mujhe yeh manzoor nahi hai..

Kamal walked to him with his hands folded.. Mr. Mehra.. Om bhaiyya.. Sach aur aadarshon ke misaal the.. Aap unse bhi acche hai.. Yeh Om bhaiyya ki faisla samajlijiye..

Suyash shut his eyes.. There was so much hurt.. She would always be Om's Parvathi.. How..

His thoughts were interrupted by Narayini ji..

Suyash.. Meine pehele bhi kaha.. Tum Parvathi se nahi.. Janki se shaadi karrahe ho.. Ashu tapped his father's shoulder.. And signaled to the thaali.. Janki looked at him with tears..

Suyash: Parvathi ji.. Kya aapko manzoor hai.. ? He was concerned for her.. For him..

She gave a hesitant nod.. Ashu was all smiles.. Thanks mumma.. Shruthi walked in.. Suyash papa.. kya sochrahe hai..?

They all looked at her.. Papa.. Aapne mumma keliye itna kuch kiya hai.. Aur aapke wajah se mujhe Ashu jaisa pyaara bhai mila hai..

Narayini smiled through her tears.. At Shruthi..

Ashu: Shruthi di.. Mein mumma ka haath papa ke liye maangtha hu..

Shruthi goes and stand behind Jaanki.. And puts a red veil on top of her head..

Suyash picks up the mangal sutr..

Mangalam Bhagwaan Vishum..

He tied the mangal sutr.. Tears trickled down her eyes.. As she clenched her fist.. In hurt.. Everyone had tears of joy..

Mangalam Garudhadwajah..

She looked at Suyash.. He tried to reassure her.. With a slight smile..

Mangalam pundari kakshay..

The wind knocked the top of the sindoor.. Everyone took it as a sign of Om's permission.. Suyash took the sindoor.. And filled her maang.. She was his now..

Mangalaye tanohari..

They took Narayini's blessing.. They were too choked to say anything..

Narayini: Ab tum dono ko Agarwal house jaana hoga.. She comes to Janki and taked the ghoonghat off.. jao beta..

Janki hugs her.. And lets of a small tear.. They walk out..

There is so much pain.. They don't find themselves anymore.. They sat in the car.. Both of them gave empty smiles to each other.. They had nothing to say at what fate had bestowed upon them.. Suyash drove into the darkness of the streets..

Meanwhile..

In Narayini Devi's manshion..

Narayini: Kamal aur Shruthi.. Tum dono ko unse pehele pohunchna hai.. Parvathi ka grihapravesh ka zimmedaari tum dono ka hai.. Yeh shaadi toh halaathon ki wajah se hua hai.. par zindagi mein aage.. Yehi rishtha dono parivaaron ko jodke rakhega.. Ashu.. Tumhe kya karna hai.. yeh mein bataaungi..

Kamal and Shruthi quickly leave..

The cold winds of the night made them numb.. Suyash looked at Jaanki.. He gritted his teeth for hurting her..

She looked at him.. She choked on her breath.. She felt like her breath was taken away.. She knew this was difficult even for him.. She knew he was hurting.. His heart bled.. She silently hummed.. She looked down thinking of how much she had wronged him..

Tum ho ghum ko chupaaye..

He looked at her.. His eyes red..

Mein hu cir ko jhukaaye..

She looked away..

Tum bhi chup ho..
Mein bhi chup hu..
Kaun kise samjhaaye..

He gulped.. Yes.. She was right.. The pain was overwhelming..

Nazdeekhiya.. Itni hai kyu..

Jiska nishaan kal ho na ho..

She shut her eyes.. tears endlessly trickling down her cheeks..

He sighed.. Jis rishthe ko naam diya tha.. uss rishthe ki umr toh sirf kuch mahinon kit hi.. Lekin jitni geheri padaau pe iss rishthe ko leekar chalrahe the.. Dil thamgayi thi..

He humned consoling both their hearts..

Sach hai ke dil toh dukha hai..

She looked at him.. both of them trying to look alright..

Humne magar socha hai..

She looked down..

Dil ko hai ghum kyu..
Aankh hai namn kyu..
Hona hi tha joh hua hai..

She smiled.. They giggled looking at each other.. Trying to lighten the awkwardness.. And reduce their pain..

Uss baath ko..Jaane bhi do..

Jiska nishaan.. kal ho na ho..

Something didn't feel right.. Iss rishthe ko na samjautha ka naam desakthe the.. na maan sakthe the..

They stopped at the traffic light.. He looked at her.. Mangal sutr dangling down her neck.. Sindoor filled freshly in her maang..

He smiled..Thinking to himself.. Suhaagan ke roop mein aap aur bhi khoobsoorath lagthe hai Jaanki ji..

As if she had heard him.. She slowly touched her maang.. And smiled.. Her eyes twinkled with a sense of content.. She thought as she looked at him.. They smiled emptily.. Aaj meri maang mein aapki naam ki sindoor hai.. Aur iss rishthey se jude hue har rishthe ko nibhaaungi..
Haan naam ka hi sahi.. Lekin aapki ehsaano ke badle.. Yeh meri farz bhi hai..

Suyash: Parvathi ji.. Hum dono iss rishthe ki sacchai jaanthe hai..

Janki: Ji Mr. Mehra.. Humaare bohoth saari zimmedaariyaan hai.. Dono parivaaron ko sambhaalna hai.. Sahi raah pe chalna sikhaana hai..

Suyash smiled.. Now there was a mission to accomplish.. They were determined to correct all the wrongs.. And Rajeshwari had to be put in her place.. They knew that this wouldn.t be easy.. but it was the right thing..

They reached Agarwal house.. They were surprised to see the decorations.. They nodded in negative as they got out of the car.. And walked towards the door..Rajeswari smirked..

Rajeshwari thinking: Tum logon ne kya socha tha..? Yeh naatak kitne din chalthi hai.. Yeh tho mein zaroor dekhungi.. Then she looks at Parvathi wearing sindoor.. She is shocked.. Parvathi aur sindoor.. Tum itni badi naatak karogi yeh meine kabhi socha nahi tha.. Not bad Parvathi.. Not bad..

Suyash and Jaanki walk to the entrance.. They are shocked to see that the preparations for grihapravesh is ready.. And maaji is standing with the aarthi ke thaali in her hands..

Rajeshwari: Mr. aur MRS. Mehra.. Ab yeh ghar toh aaphi ka hai.. Grihapavesh kijiye.. Being as sarcastic as she could.. Meine SAARI arrangements kardi hai..

Janki looks at Suyash.. He reassures her.. The agarwals seem rather happy about her decision.. Janki looks at Shruthi who winks and smiles..

Maaji does aarthi and Janki lifts her pleats and knocks the kalash with rice.. She steps into a plate with kumkum water.. And places her footsteps into this house.. Suyash smiles as her beautiful feet leave their mark.. Adi smiles genuinely.. At Ashutosh.. Everybody congratulates them..

Rajeshwari: Reception keliye tayaar hojao Parvathi bohoth raath hochuki hai.. Ab..

Ashutosh interrupts.. Not wanting Rajeshwari to spew any disgust.. Mumma chaliye.. He takes her to the room.. As they climb the stairs.. Mumma.. Rajeshwari ne aapke karma bilkul apne kamre ke bagal sajaaya hai.. Thaaki who aap par nazar rakhsake..

Janki: Toh yeh baat hai.. Yeh tumne papa ko bataaya..?

Ashu smiles at her referring to Suyash as his papa.. He thinks.. Kahi na kahi mumma.. Aapne iss rishthe ko apnaana shru kiya hai.. He nods and points at Suyash and shruthi talking down.. And points at his room.. Mumma aap waha tayyar hojaayiye.. yaha Reception ke baad..

He looks away teasing her by ruffling his hair..

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Reception.. Suhaagraath..

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awesome update

very nyc update... finally they r married😛