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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
excellent update...i really wished if der was part 3 as well... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Arnav's reactions are so extreme and only towards Khushi...😊
Loved the update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Nice update!
Arnav wants to punish Khushi for his feelings! Stupid fellow! Khushi was doing a good job until last moment. What was the past?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Damn interesting part, oh God update soon can't wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

juhi

the update was more and more worth the wait and u nailed it

bohooo

its going hi five and tom and jerry and are on expedition

so one thing is atleast common between the duo, the attraction, and the urge to fight it over

im liking it all the ore

so you have left is in cliff hanger

I don't wana hang for more

Please save us arnav😆

the past oh the past is damn thingy

its haunting me like hell

and when you mention the past I feel like punching in air out of desperation to know it

Edited by clarissajohn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
wow your brilliant...politics to caves ...wow! ...its amazing how you bring out the tension between the two...all the while making the reader wonder what exactly happened 10 yrs back.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
such an interesting update. suddenly dynamics changed from office to adventure... super

wondering when the past mystery is gonna come out
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
That was fabulous Juhi!
Even with all the hatred they are attracted.
Wonder what happened 10 yrs back to break off the wedding!
It must be something really bad to have shattered her to take such a step and something that would shatter him when he comes to know the truth behind her action. I feel it would shatter the very fabric of their family
(Raizada) when the truth comes out whatever be it.
You know I had told you I was apprehensive. Well I just can't stop reading your work! It has a pull that I am not able to overcome. One thing I am happy is your stories always leave with a good feeling in the end however much suspense it has all the way through!
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Luna's heer...

I have read like the first scene wonly and goosebumps are happening!

AND Oh My God. RABBA VEYS ARE BACK.

Jealousy too!!!

The sitting and having dinner together and talking and just talking. If only it was that simple, then luna wouldnt be heer!

I LOVE Going on the What kind of pull was this anyway? journey with ASR

CHALLENGES. have a new name..but they are synonymous to A+K nonetheless.

Oooh M tink miss gupta take the bait or not?

BRB part 2 times

AND she takes the bait!

FINALLLYYY M haf ASR +K adventure sporting together skd heaven reached. But obviously u be da basherz of that, or wait is it the nafrat?

and the literal meaning on inhe raasta dikha is finally coming to me!

The whole adventure sport was SO brilliant. M pheel the adrenaline too deerz

I have no idea what happened in the end there, but awl I know is that A wouldn't leave K, I mean this is the man who couldnt leave her alone in the rain..This is a stranded cave type area.

OMG J. THIS WAS AMAZEBALLS. 5REAL.

So worth the wait!

Goosebumps have still not gone!

time to re-read and dickode!

M lau dis story yaara. bas.
Edited by LooneyLuna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Lovely update!! thanks Juhi... Waiting for the next update now...

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