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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

You and your cliffhangers- aaargh! I guess some old fart who had fancied himself in a powerful position but got sidetracked into being one of the figureheads in the "committees" that Arnav set up has decided to rebel against the party? Or has some lethal disease spread in Delhi? Please update soon!

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Really really fun filled n adventurous update.

Hmmm seduction at its high, wrong time payal.

I wonder what happened back in India?????

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Sharmila

@spsharmila

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Wow...the story is getting more and more intriguing ...what exactly happened ten years ago...can't wait for the next update 😃

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Yes!! can clearly see that a lot of things has changed between them now!

Juhi ... that was impeccably written ... their expedition in the cave... the moments... the constant pull towards each other!

awesome ... i had totally got immersed into it!

It seemed out and out khushi's update!

The 2nd part was equally good! and why not things were almost there! but damn Payal had to

reach there just on time... trust me ... the description was uber cool... had me there! :)

Okie now whats with the latest development that seemed to have taken them all off guard!? to an extent that they had tp fly down immediately and more so ... he did not retort after the jibe she finally passed to him!

whats happening?

ow! cant wait for sunday to arrive!

Thanks a lot Juhi... This is just too good! :)

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

What a fabulous update J...first of all thank you for the regular updates ..its makes the reading all the more pleasurable!

The whole cave expedition right from Khushi injuring herself till she reaches out safely with Arnav's help was amazing. I am stunned with this sudden turnover of Arnav ...he can see right through her to anticipate even her thougths..thats how tuned they are into each other! ( no thinking about prologue just shoo away ) !!

Wonder what blunder has emerged due to the "honorable minister" but for him to only 'wince" at Khushi's outburst and not retaliate says alot!! Eagerly waitng for the next update !!

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Nemo

@Nszvs-Arshi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

You are certainly a MINDBLOWING WRITER ⭐️

Lol I thought that there were not updates of 3 chapters but 6 ;-)
Thanx for giving such a long Update <3
👏
Ok the story is pretty awesome 😃

ummm my mind is literally going haywire in trying to figure out what the heck has Arna done to piss Khushi to such an extent 😆

Well I leave that up to you ... Update ASAP so that I can judge him 😉

BTW I Love the way you have potrayed Khushi in this story👏
I love her personality⭐️

Love the story and awsesome job. Keep Updating😳

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

The cave expedition shows a new side of Arnav towards Khushi...I loved it whole...
Oh no...miss kiss...Payal thodi der nahi aa sakti thi...
what happened...what news...cant wait for next part...
In the stories I read(not that I read a lot),Arnav is perfect in his job...this is the first time I'm seeing him to struggling in his job...and Khushi in other other hand managing so efficiently...I am loving it...

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verisimilitude

@verisimilitude

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

ooh. what an update.👏

Spelunking had been beneficial increasing the dhak dhak in their relationship.. Atleast both noticing each other's feeling though not acknowledging it... Her apprehensions of a cold ruthless man who would only try to sabotage her life for the past incident has turned to a kind considerate not so expressive man which is a positive turn. He is not able to keep his mind shut when she was feeling the pain something like it hurts him too ..but his jibes really worked well with her.. like an energy booster.. He earns a special appreciation for that. Payal.. Anjali di mat banao.. Now since they are back in India.. I guess his decision of taking Shyam had created a mess. time for nafrat show arguments and hatred.

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Now that is what I call a fantastic update! Once again you gave us two wonderfully written parts for Chapter 5 as well. And now I have got to say Cave Expedition you beauty, you changed the whole dynamics between our lovely couple in this tale. I just knew Arnav wouldn't abandon Khushi in her state, I just knew you wouldn't portray him as the jackass that he may come across. It was so wonderful to see his caring side, the way he rogered her on in his own way to make her fight and survive the expedition. And she realized it as well! And you know what else was wonderful, his realization of what he did for her, not being able to see her in pain, giving up his only source of food, not being able to focus on his work because of her absence and condition, checking up on her by calling her hotel room awww what can I say Me liked all these things, me liked em heaps! 👏

But what did you do in the end again Ma'am, you left another gigantic cliff hanger :( , what in the world happened to make them leave straight away, for Khushi to be angry at Arnav and sort of telling him she wished he would have stuck to his day job of spelunking and climbing rocks😆 and for him to not react the way he usually does. I can't believe I want my weekend to end Fast and bring Sunday so I can have the answer to my question! *sighs

PS. You do know that you are awesome, right?! :)

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#310

Thank you for the Pm, Juhi...

I am floored...just loved the extensive minutiae..and, the milieu had me awestruck.. those pictures are resplendent!!

You have wonderfully brought about the inner conflict of both the protagonists...each is enamored and yet wary of the other, lest their inner most feelings come to the fore..

I am glad that despite his caprice, he is solicitous. He is cognizant of her absence and rushed to her aid,...examined her foot (loved the manner in which the scene was incorporated ) albeit castigating her..

Oh! Khushi addressed him by his first name...and, now, has begun frantically searching for him..cannot wait to read the next..