ARSHI SS: Between the Lines-CHP 9-PG 133/Link 2 Th2!

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samsung04

@samsung04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Wow wow wow wounderful update dear but sinful end for us making our waitng more for the next update..

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rimu

@rimzu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

hayy..hw cn u end it here..update soon

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khushiiXOXO

@khushiiXOXO

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

wid life going crazy didn't realize there were 2 updates...

Feel bad for Arnav dat his dad feels he isn't worthy just because he isn't following in his father's footsteps.. poetic justice wen the truth is revealed?

Oh damn!the chemistry is sizzling all the way here!...wat wud we do without Rainstorms and thunders?! they shud get royalty or some sorta commission😉

d temperature went up & was raising till the update ended abruptly ..& we all know anything can happen in next update..just hoping reality dsn't hit 😈

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

God, how can you do this huh😡

Now my breath has arrested at the point you ended the story😭

For how long do we have to wait now

But that was one awesome update😳

Eagerly waiting for the next😉

Please make it soon😃

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Wow! lovely chapter...

They finally found the culprit who stole her guavas... But the whole incident triggered a whole another set of emotions for ArHi... The chemistry between them was just sizzling... And they finally gave in to their desires... Ahem! 😉 But how could you stop right there?? Not fair!

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soophie

@soophie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

Hi dear
I hv started this story yesterday only n hv gone through all parts yesterday only
i must tell u ...its a lovely story
Simple n beautiful...in short beautiful
Specially Arnav 's character is beautiful...his character has many shadez...lonliness...hurt...angst...most importantly longing for someone's love

I hope khushi will fill this void in arnav's life
So far there it was an amazing experience to read ur story

Now as far as 9 part is concerned...it was awesome
their chemistry was sizzlng hot
that moment b/w them was so pure n beautiful...loved it

Looking forward for kiss's aftermath now
update soon
waiting already

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Nimmi

@nimsnannu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Wat the...u did this to us...not fare...not at all...
U stopped at this point????
I'm cutty with u for doing this...
Pl'se update next part soon...
Can't wait...

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Aaahhh
U r such a teaseee..whyy didd u hv to end it der dammmit !! :p

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#779

You had already decided you wouldn't let us rest in peace, hadn't you? Gosh what an ending! Aar better be back soon! :p

The candle lit atmosphere just enhanced the whole setting didn't it? Two dilated souls, two wet bodies waiting to fuse into as one!

And the rain! You were serious about rain sequence last update! Hmm!

So she cares fro him so does he for her! Hmm!

Will they regret this act later? Does it stop here or moves ahead?

Cheers