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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

updated my comment on page 73:)

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..SunnYaara..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

wow great chapter loved it...

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asthagarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Awesum Update...

Evn i hv tht complain 4m mst writers bt I'm glad Arnav tuk her suggestion...

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saga_twilight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

0ooo s0 Khushi actually gave him an idea f0r a n0vel which w0uld surely be a best seller, y0u sh0uld n0t leave the h0use Pike

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sincereme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Nice update...

So Mr. Pike is having difficulty manging his thoughts around Babyji... I love his monologue when ever hi is near her...

He still wants to leave the house... but is not making any effort to find another... Its says that action speaks louder than words, which means he is not going anywhere...😉

I like the idea khushi has given... Sometimes instinct works wonder...

So know he got the idea so best of luck Mr. pike for your book...

waiting for the next update..

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Amazing and wonderful updates, just read chapters 4 and 5.

Both updates were a fantastic read and written brilliantly well.

Khushi is definitely crazy, love the way she was trying find out ways to protect her tree.

Loved the conversation between Arnav and his BIL, he has advised Arnav that there must be something special about Khushi.

Hope Arnav does go out sightseeing and takes Khushi with him,

Loved the part where they were sitting by the verandah and drinking tea, Arnav could not stop staring at Khushi.

So Khushi mentioned the negatives in his book and Arnav is so excited as khushi's recommendation has given him ideas to write his next book.

Wonder when the book gets published, Khushi will be happy and she may realise that Arnav is the writer.

Loved the updates, awesome writing.

Please can you PM when you update next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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Ramani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Good... Arnav got to know wat Khushi felt lacking in his writing n now he is going to use that idea..
That's interesting.. can't wait for the next update..
So try to update as quick as possible...