FF - GIVE A LOVE A CHANCE CH 49 UPD - Page 2

Interesting begining... so I guess its over n done with shyam now..poor girl... my heart goes out to her...
Waiting eagerly for u to continue...

Gr8 start, original concept, plz continue n pm me if possible, thks

Abeer~~

nice start, cant wait to read more.

ITS GOOD TO KNOW THAT SHYAM IS STILL A FILTHY SNAKEWA
IT WAS GETTING A BIT EEW TO READ, I MEAN ALL THIS KHUSHI AND SHYAM BUSINESS.

NICE START TO THE STORY THO
IM GLAD TO SEE THAT SO FAR U HAVENT MADE KHUSHI TOTALLY CAREFREE IN THOSE INTIMATE MATTERS. I THINK LIKE IN. THE SHOW KHUSHI GENUINELY THOT THAT SNAKEWA WAS THE ONE AS SHE DID WITH HER ARNAVJI.

Would love to read more...:D

COULD YOU NOT LET HER LOSE IT TO ANY ONE BUT SNAKE SAMMRAT WAS FIND LOVED THE START WICKED SE GAVE UP TO HIM TO ONLY FIND HIM IN BED WITH ANOTHER WOMAN WICKED START LOVE HER REACTION WAY TO GO KHUSHI HOPE SHE USED PROTECTION THANKS FOR THE PM CONGRATS ON THE NEW FF

Ahaan...interesting...lovedd the concept...thats something new...

Hiya

First of THANK YOU SOOO MUCH for the great response I'm glad to see I haven't put you guys off and you guys liked the beginning 😃

I have read all your comments but as am a little short on time at the moment cannot reply to all of you, so am replying in bulk here and clarifying a question a few of you were wondering...

So many of you guys are wondering why I chose Shyam to be the one Khushi loses her virginity instead of Samrat or some xyz person. Well I have a few reasons for thar

Firstly I understand the 'egh' ness of even thinking of Shyam coming near Khushi let alone having sex with her, but like I say I have my reasons which go as this:

Firstly, why not Samrat (for those of you who did not watch Miley Jab Hum Tum (MJHT) and therefore may not know who Samrat is, MJHT was Sanaya's previous show where her love interest was Samrat who was played by her real lief beau, Mohit Sehgal) I didn't chose him one because he is from a different show and I don't like merging two shows together, I know some people do when they write FF's, they like to take characters from other shows but I don't, I may take name's from other shows but not their character'that is just my choice for I don't like to mix it up as then you have two stories playing in your mind which gets confusing and gets you to start taking sides as to which hero you like more and I don't wish to do that as each story has its' own heroes and villains and for me they should remain in their own stories not get merged. The other reason why I didn't chose Samrat, was because I love my Sammy and I would hate to have him as the villain in this story because after I accepted the challenge the way I conceived this story in order to keep it as close to the real one as possible and to make sure the characters didn't change much; it became clear that the person who Khushi would sleep with either would be the villain or would die, in order to make a love story between Arshi. And so I couldn't bear the thought of making Sammy the villain or killing him off (that episode in season 1 of MJHT finishes, where the gang have an accident still makes my heart whimper at the sight of them all covered in blood and glass) thus I chose not to go with Samrat.

Why I chose Shyam and not an xyz person:

Well once I decided that the person she will have sex with will be the villain and not someone who dies, Shyam was the obvious choice as he is the villain of the story. And lets face it he nearly did this in the show itself. The only reason he wishes to marry Khushi is because he lusts after her and knowing that Khushi won't have sex with him without marriage he puts the whole plot of their marraige in action only it fails'in this FF however, I change it slightly where his ploy to marry Khushi still fails as she catches him, but he also gets what he wants hence is not fussed about Khushi finding out his true nature or with the break-up.

And why I decided to have a betrayal rather then the death of the lover, because heart-break via betrayal is the essence of this story, I don't just mean my FF but also the show itself. One of IPKKND's main theme is heart-break due to betrayal and that too of Khushi's because that is what jolt's her out of her dream-world where she see's and believes everyone to be this great person. The betrayal shows her how she cannot trust anyone just like that esp in matters of the heart, hence she doubts and mistrusts anyone who dares to come near her heart, just the way Arnav does. They both guard their hearts feircely. This aspect of them is very similar, while he may be a hard person and she a jovial they both have trust issues when it comes to the matters of the heart. You may ask well if that is the case that Khushi will not trust anyone easily anymore then how can she trust Aakash and NK so easily, that is because she does not love them, she see's them as friends, brothers, not as potential lovers. She feels nothing but platonic love for them hence it's easier for her to trust them, however, with Arnav she feels something more, hence she first tries to deny it altogether and then quench it until she finally gives in. She is afraid to love, in the show because Arnav breaks her heart on Diwali and in this FF because Shyam breaks her heart by betrayal.

I hope my choices make more sense now. I know it's disgusting imagining that snake touch Khushi, but try to just think of the betrayal he gives her rather than the that fact that he touchs her'also just think of how she beats him up...that helps too 😉