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Posted: 12 years ago
i know chap of Mirage is over.. two days before i was kinda missing ur updates so ended up reading epilogue of Mirage.. 😊
after reading i ended up with these 😆

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Edited by Shona.Angel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Molten lava...i loved the update😊
P.S - U have made me so addicted to the song "yun hi re" (remember your inspiration 😆) and now, I just can't get that song out of my head🤪
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh! oh! the plan in motion - La is back to make mischief now - loved Dadi's expression - I am truly weary about khushi's past experience less it is a very traumatic one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm really glad that you took time from your busy schedule and gave us an update ..
Always pleasure to read Arshi interactions ... You make them so romantic :)
So Ranvijay can be normal too apart from being happy-go-lucky guy..
It' evidently proven that Arnav is not just toying around but he is in fact serious about Khushi because otherwise he wouldn't have considered Khushi's feelings even at the weakest moment where they both are alone with plenty of chances ..
I'm badly waiting to see Khushi's reaction when she meets Lavanya's as Arnav's girl friend ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
where did my prev msg go?
anyhoo..I was saying.as usual beautifully written...
loved it.
khushiz hesitation ..totally justified.. infact it wud ve been shocking for me if dt lovemaking scene was continued...
hmm
I m guessing d person behind d whole lav trapping trapping arnav is somewhere connected to khushiz childhood incident...right???
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Posted: 12 years ago
n rach hun..no worries.. take as much time as u want..in don't mind d delays..I don't like d ends..
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Posted: 12 years ago
m gona start mirage..AGAIN..I m.missing it so much lately..I just ve to ve to read it again..just can't get enuff of it u c..
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all thank you so much for updating, even though you have been so busy and don't worry the update has exceeded your standard of writing.

A brilliant and simply Amazing update,

Awww Arnav decided to wait for her after she had been to see the vicar and Khushi was so surprised.

Loved the flashback it was awesome, Arnav sharing his bike ride with Khushi, amazing.

Awww loved the bike ride in the present it was brilliant and bless Khushi even had tears in her eyes as she was just so happy.

Khushi surprising Arnav by coming to his bedroom at night to say goodnight and was so shocked to see him just in his boxers, loved her reaction it was superb.

Awww Arnav finally gave the gift, but he could not tell Khushi the truth and he even hurt her slightly.

Love how Arnav changed the situation and wanted a thank you, which Khushi finally understood and gave him a kiss, a beautiful moment.

Wow, the need and desire was quite strong and Arnav got quite intimate and there passionate moment started off quite hot and sensual, but soon turned quite serious when Arnav realised Khushi had become stiff.

Awww it's sad how the incident still bought back horrifying memories for Khushi, glad Arnav stopped.

I can't believe Lavanya is here, Khushi will be distraught and Nani was very disappointed.

Loved the update it was a wonderful read, awesome writing.

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Continue soon please xx
Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
as always a beautiful update
i love ur story but i dont read ur update very fast
bcz i am kind of afraid from the happaning in ur story
and it happened
lavarnya is their
and then will the devil come
what is their plan
what will lav and he do to get money from his brother and arnav
god
did he raped khushi
but it would be pedofiele no
bcz she was child
and now he is with lav
or is he still pedofiel with some other childern
child abuse is very heavy stuff
and u are writing about it it seems
i hope you will give extra information with ur story
if u intend to write over this topic
bcz in indian forum their are also childeren of 12 13 years reading
so that they know its not cool or some thing
love the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice chapter..
N as long as u dont discontinue, i wud never complain abt anything..

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