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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

Great update
Haha arnav doesn't like being ignored

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Just read all the parts at a go. What an amazong story, Semanti.

Lovedc it.

I love the constant bickering and the game of one upmanship these two play.

The professor asking these grown up students to write two fifty lines in detention was funny.

And I love NK. What a sweet friendship he and Khushi share.

And I love his filmy ringtones.

This is what I love about your writing.

These little bits and pieces you throw in are real gems!

Payaliya has a crush on NK who has a crush on Lavanya but Aakash who has a crush on Payal thinks that NK has a crush on Khushi.

What an amazing comedy of errors!

Love th story and waiting now for the next update.

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

Wonderful update
So Kay has finally grown up...n Arnav missing her fights
I love nk...hes Awesome

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

up to date with the story and its awesome

loving the concept and pace and characters

cant wait for more

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

Khushi being sober isnt goin well wid him :D Kitna aadat se majboor hogaya hai Arnav :)
Want to read Khushiz thoughts on it..

I love NK's band.. kool it is! :D Any name u thot fr it?

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

someone is missing their arguments already and is not at all comfortable with all the ignorance and someone is covering up of the prank he played... ohhh and someone was also considering of apologizing for that!! aiyooo rama! what this world has gotten into!! 😲 😳

ohhh the introduction of band members were cool and so were the members.. i liked them already...
Payalia is sooo cute!! i also like it when she is called that.. =))
ahahaha.. the note passing between the brothers!! just hilarious!!
waiting for this three days to fly by superfast... :D

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

again the bonus at the end was the icing on the cake for me!!! shubh shubh bolo mere bhai...lol!! that so funny...

Khushi is giving Arnav the silent treatment...and Raizada is already unhappy about it? me totally in love with it!!!

NK is such a cute blabbermouth...and his matchmaking skills...hehe...he will beat some of the delusional jodishippers we have here...

but wait! what? Payalia ko NK se feelings? nahi...akash bitwa will die a virgin...Arnav's kali zubaan will work the magic!!!

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Phoenixrises

@Phoenixrises

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

That was an AMAZING update. So Payalia has started to like NK Babu!! And NK is trying to fix Khushi with Aakash? Wow that's a love

D-I-S-A-S-T-E-R!! I wonder how this will get solved and how they'll finally find each other. Arnav doesn't like being ignored by Khushi. Well that's a new feeling. Anyway great update. Can't wait for the next..

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

A love triangle in the formation with Akash-NK-payaliya? Now now, NK is getting lot of attention. The dynamics between Khushi and arnav has changed, that's good.

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

Ohhh Lord!!! this is whole load of mix-up going on! ha ha ha ... i am all boggled up!

Ppl pairing up one another based on some assumptions! i am waiting for it all to get revealed ... Its gonna be fun!!

Its a beautiful young story here Semanti! I like the way you are focusing on not just the lead pair(if i can call so!) the conversations held are so alluring! be it between any characters in the story ... all are received with equal fervor!

Waiting to see where this all would head to!

Thanks for the update darling!