Finally Dill mill gye -A Taarey os-Dare compl

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Dare-
, Fatima (-Fam_TaaReY-)being a dare-devil,
give a Dare to rakhiankita
on the song Maula Maula (From Singham)
which shall include TaaRey or D3 team is optional
Situation:Any situation you want but TaaRey break up and in last confession is compulsory
fatimaa di i know i m late alot but i hope u like it i have tried my level best...😳😳😳

so guyss here i m with a dare os for u all hope u all like it ...enjoy reading 😳😳😳

Dill mill Gaye-A Taarey OS

Thak chuka hun mein taani se bas abb aur nahi reh sakta mein uske saath sharon'.Tumhein pata hai mein uske saath bas isiliye tha kyunki who swayum ki behen hai'.mein kaha aur vo kahan'Mujhe toh hamesha se hi ekk diva type ki ladki chaiye thi as my girlfriend '.Taani jaise koi bechari nai'Mujhe tumhari jaise..Stylish aur confident Diva chaiye thi as my girlfriend Sharon''

Rey's these words to sharon which taani heard were constantly eating her up she was heartbroken to the zenith'and was sitting in her room .. She was in pain she could not take it anymore''

Taani immediately messaged rey to meet him at her house and rey 's phone flashed and he saw a message from taani and he read it and ran quickly to her house without thinking anything as knew his plan is working now and as always he reached to taani's room through the window'he saw taani sitting on the bed lost somewhere'.

Rey jumped through the window inside the room she saw him but now her eyes reflected anger'Taani immediately took rey to the same place yes the cupboard gate where they had their confession and rey was surprised by taani actions '

Taani-yeh jagah yaad hai aapko rey..Yahin hum dono ne ekk dusre se apni feelings share ki thin...yahin par hum dono ne ekk dusre ka saath nibahane ki promise li thi le'By this time taani's eyes were blood shot 'taani wpied her tears'.Yahin yahin par ekk hue the hum rey

Rey remembered everything for a moment was not able to see pain and tears in her angel's eyes so he closed his eyes and moved away from there...then he said'

"Taani tumhe Jo bhi Kehna hai naa directly kaho"

Taani moved to rey and faced him'and said...Mujhe yeh Kehna hai rey ki agar aap mujhse tang aagye the the toh mujhse seethe seedhe keh dete'duniya mein dhindora pitane ki jarurat nhi thi rey...

Rey again moved away from there..and said..Mujhe nahin pata taani tum kis baare mein baat kar rahi ho'

Taarey both were feeling the the same and by hearing rey taani was shocked by her words'

Taani immediately said by wiping her tears 'Actually you are right rey pata nhin mein hi kyun baat Ko ghuma ghuma ke bol rahin Jo aap samaj Nahin paa re hain rey'hai naa rey toh fine senile

Meine aapko yahan isliye bulaya hai rey kyunki mein Nahin chahati ki yeh jagah hamare achcha memories ke naam par humein hamare relationship ka jhoothe humein yaad dilate rahein'.balky hum dono ka sach yaad delayein ki aap mujhse kitna tang aagye the hain rey'.

By this time listening taani rey was heartbroken from inside and his eyes clearly reflected pain but he closed them and beared everything because this was important to happen for a good cause so that he can change his angel'.

Then finally without wasting any time further taani moved and faced rey and finally said'..

So Mr. Reyaansh Sighania'..mein abhi''.and there was silence for a min '..Isi waqt aapse breakup karti hun'..

And these words of taani echoed again and again in rey's ears and it was like rey world stopped for him..The air in him was breathing was stopped for him'..he was totally broken up but he knew he could not show that to taani'

Rey-okk cool...tumhari marzi...and he moved suddenly a lil bit a if it does'nt mean anything to him at all

Listening this taani was in a shock but soon she recovered herself'and said then

Fine aaj se aapke liye koi ni hai.. Plzz yahan se chale jaaye...

Hearing this rey's eyes was filled with tears'.and he finally let leaving behind a totally broken taani there'.

Rey was away from taani's house finally''he was tears badly he could not stop himself because he could not even think of what he had done'.he was just now broken totally ..He bent down on his knees and cried his heart out'.

And here taani was crying badly '.she could not even think of what happened minutes before that they broke up'.Nothing was left for she cried very badly her eyes were purely blood shot then and totally red'.

Taani and rey both cried their hearts out badly'because it should not have happened''''

Flashback ends***

And for taani it was all over now where as for rey he just did it so that taani can change himself and he knew he would get then his taani back

It has a been a month now since taarey broke up'.But rey was happy he was proud of his taani now because'

Taani had changed a lot she was no longer the same taani who had no dreams no opinions no hopes no ambitions'she was changed totally and completely'Now she had her dreams ..her hopes..she was proving to be the best GS till date..she was proving herself as a individual at each and every stage'She was taking her each and every duty very seriously and NDC too because she knew what it means to the college..she took her stand at each and every place 'she was now confident ..and a girl with a right attitude an direction now and what she did for the college and his dance teammates after the eliminates proved that the taani is the best GS for the college..Because of her only the d3 team was able to won the NDC because otherwise it would have been left like a dream forever''

Taani had applied for MBA and was now waiting for the reply for herself because that was the last year of the college she knew...and now she was very happy with herself 'she was contented now finally she got her stand too

But now she was miles away from now rey she never wanted him back her in life...she never thought of him now for her rey was now a past she ner used to even look at him ..Taani avoided rey very badly and she recovered from her pain too which rey gave him a month before'for rey was now a past and she had moved on...but she too knew that she still loved rey because her love was pure and true'but she don't knew rey too loved him still the same way..she thought rey ditched her'that was the truth for her but the fact was she never thought about it again now'she had moved in her life forward and just after three days if she got selected she would go to US leaving everything here for a fresh start there'..

Here rey was more than happy because the least he thought taani was changed more than it...it was like as if his dream came true and he was thinking finally itwas time that I should tell taani everything all the truth and patch up with her but he knew it would be going to be a very tough task for him because the way taani avoids him somewhere hurts him a lot..he knew taani would not melt that easily 'he would need to do something really very different to get back his angel his love his taani'.But he was ready for it could to do anything to get back his life once again ready to confess that how much he love him'he thought he now would try from the next day'.

Next morning was a new one for rey'rey got up early and got ready he was adoring himself in front of the mirror...soon he finished with his looks and left for college and within no time he reached there 'Rey was so happy that finally he was going to tell taani all the truth..He was dancing and enjoying with every one outside the college basket ball court'

Here taani was really very happy because she got selected for the MBA in the institute she applied in the US 'she was so happy that her happiness had no boundaries'she was already in the college there as he wanted to inform about this news to VP sir'soon she told him and was moving in the corridor upstairs 'Rey entered in the college he saw taani smiling looking at the some letter in her'Rey was lost in his taani..her smile made rey smile 'taani was looking so cute while smiling and but suddenly he came out of trance as he saw taani was not there because she already moved for Projector room'

Rey ran upstairs he was searching for taani everywhere when suddenly he was passing by Projector room he saw taani there doing some work in her Laptop'

Rey came inside the room and he said'.

Taani VO actually mujhe tumse kuch imp baat karna hai

Haan boliye rey...taani said still doing the work in her laptop without even looking at rey'

Rey in his mind ' (abbey yaar taani toh meri taraf dekh hi nai rahi hai aise kaise bolun mein kuch kar dude kuch kar)

Rey closed taani's laptop suddenly...nd said -ops sorry galti se hath lag gya mera taani

Taani 'rey aapki problem kya hai haan aapko pat bhi hai mein kitna important kaam kar rahi thi'kya bola hai aapko jaldi belie plzz mujhe bahut kaam karna hai aapki tarah fault Nahin hun

Rey 'taani VO actually mujhe tumse Kehna tha ki'''.Taani I LOVE U mein tumhe yeh

Taani-rey bas mujhe kuch Ni sunny hai meine aapse kaha tha naa rey ki mera aapse breakup meri life ka best decision tha rey plzz rey aap yahan se chale jaaye warna mein chili jaaungi

Rey-taani par plzz ekk baar meri puri baat toh sun lo'.

Taani mein jaa ri hun ri kyunki aap toh jayega nai na'and taani left the projector leaving a sad rey behind'Taani mood was all spoilt'so she left for home'

Rey thought to himself kahin meine taani ko kho toh nai diya naa use change karne ke chadkar mein'nahi aisa nai ho sakta mein aisa nhi hone dungi mein taani se bahut pyaar karat hun and vo bhi mujhse bahut pyaar karti hai...mein jaanta hun...lekin ab mein kya karun vo meri baat sunne ko hi taiyaar nahin hai..

Rey searched taani everywhere in the college but she was not there...Rey asked swayum and he said taani called him to say the she was not well so isiliye wo ghar chli gyi yaar'.Tune uss kuch bola ke nai yaar'

Rey nodded in a no'

Swayum 'yaar jald se jald use bta de yaar I think it's time now

Rey 'haan yaar I m trying dude '

Two days passed taani didn't came to college rey was feeling weird now because neither she was taking his calls nor she came to college and rey he was going more restless coz usne do din se taani ko ni dekha tha'.

Finally he decided to go taani's house then but he only found swayum with a letter'.he was in tears and he just hugged rey and saw him the letter'

Without wasting anytime Rey ran to the airport...it was already too late he knew'he ran inside the airport he was being stopped everywhere by the guards but he just ran explaining them everything how important was it for him to stop his life 'his love '.his soul'

Rey ran shouting taani 'her name everywhere'taani taani'.everyone can listen the word now'he was looking everywhere where he could

Taani was at the boarding counter waiting for her pass'when she heard her name loud a lot...the sound was coming from outside...and within a second she realized it was rey ..She wanted to rush but her anger overpowered her and she stood there only when rey saw taani there waiting for the pass...

He ran to her'

Taani 'I love u plzz mujhe chodke mat jao plzz taani meri baat to sun lo ekk baar plzz

Taani was shocked to see rey like this totally she had no option just to let him speak- boliye Rey kya hai'?

Rey-taani plzz for god sake mujhe chodke mat jao I can't live without you taani..Hamara breakup koi real breakup nai tha vo sab mein isiliye kiya taaki tum strong, independent ,responsible aur Successful ban sako taani just like jo tum ban chuki ho taani..tum mujhe apna sapna manene lagi thin taani jo ki sai nai tha mein tumhe iss tarah se nai dekh sakta tha taani mere paas aur koi option nai tha plzz for god sake mujhe chodke mat jao I love u taani I really love u 'mein toh bas yeh chahta tha ki tum ekk independent person bann jao..i know meine tumhe bahut hurt kiya hai taani lekin I love u a lot..plzz mujhe chodke mat jao plzz

Rey was crying badly now his eyes were bloodshot now'Taani too had tears in her eyes without saying anything she just hugged rey tightly 'rey was too shocked to respond but soon he hugged her back very tightly and everyone there at the airport had tears in their eyes..and they started clapping'

Taarey hugging each other still were crying badly...finally both came to their senses rey took taani's hands in his hands Taani love u very very much mujhe chodke mat jao mein tumhare bina sach mein nain reh sakta plz'

Taani-rey mein...kahin ni jaa ri abb aapko chodke ..i love u too'and she wiped rey's tears while rey kissed her hand and they both hugged once again😳😳❤️

At Evening the Gang and as they were really happy for Taarey threw a party at shekawath mansion'

Everybody was finally present there celebrating'boys were busy adoring girls and girls were busy chatting as always'

And our beloved swaron were lost in each other'smiling at each other

Suddenly rey went and ask for taani's hand who was talking with neha'

Taani just smiled'and and both stood up and rey started singing'

Roshan hai yeh zameen
Aasmaan sab ishq ke dum se
Dhalte hai din aur raat
Ishq ke hi dum se
Taani smiled looking at rey'.and she too started singing looking at rey'while all the girls stood up started dancing and also made taani to dance '.busy were just smiling looking at the girls like full life..

Ooo..

Khushiyon ke beshumaar
Behisab se sikke khanke
Dil ki ab har muraad
Ishq ke hi dum se

Taani was dancing with the girls singing and looking at rey'.who was too smiling'looking at him and finally both for now'

Tu hai mera khuda

Ab na hona juda
Karde karam ki
Dil yeh chain payega
Maula Maula re
Shukh tera maula re
Roobaru hua mera yaar

Here finally all the boys stood to dance with their girls'firstly rey took taani's hand and she smiled blushing too'taarey were lost in each other looking in each other's eyes'.and singing'

Ho..
Maula Maula re
Shukh tera maula re
Roobaru hua mera yaar

Ho..
Finally taani hugged rey tightly and everyone was smiling looking at them'rey too hugged back taani'and then taani ran away blushing and rey smiled..looking at her.. and he ran too'to taani singing while taking her hand in his and bending on his one knee and bent his head'😳

Sajde mein tere hi
Jhuk jaon main sada
Teri hi bahoon mein
Ho jaon laapata

and then he took out the a beautiful ring and he placed it on taani's finger who was now in tears of happiness she too bent down and hugeed rey'tightly'here everyone was too happy for them and swaron sharing a side hug were smiling at them'

Chayian ho dhoop ho

Rasta bhi ho naya
Humko ab kaisa darr
Sang jo hai tu chala
Rey looking at taani singing'and taani placed her hand on rey's cheek smiling..and she sang'

Ho..ab tere sare hi
Gum hai mere
Ab meri khusiyan
Teri hai sada

Tu hai mera khuda
Ab na hona juda
Karde karam ki
Dil yeh chain payega
Maula Maula re
Shukh tera maula re
Roobaru hua mera yaar

Taani and rey together'..dancing together lost in each other singing 'hugging each other rey kissed taani's forehead and taani kissed on rey's cheek'.and everybody was dancing and celebrating their happiness they were too happy for taarey..

Ho..

Maula Maula re
Shukh tera maula re
Roobaru hua mera yaar

And finally taarey singing in each other's embrace in taani's room alone'sharing some moments together of happiness'finally sitting together on ground..holding hands..keeping their heads on each other'😳😳😳

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okk yeah i know its too long par 2-3 days mein abhi pad sakte ho mein kuch ni kahungi abb 😆😆😆meine hi likhne me 4 weeks laga diye toh tum sab se kya kahun...so jokes apart padhana jarur plus like and comment karna complusary hai.. plzz abb itna toh kar hi do mere liye..😆. plzz guss comment karna mat bhulnaa okk it takes only a min ...love u all...😳😳😳
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unitatoxo. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
res
unres
sorry for the late unres 😳
Meee first ... yeeaahhh
Coming to the os ..
superb 👏👏
Emotional in the start , sweet and cute in the end ..
It was just superb 👏👏
Loved the way you portrayed taarey's feelings ... 😳😳
The song added more beauty to this os 😳
It is indeed a beautiful os 👏
Keep writing more
(that is an ORDER
PS- love you for this superb os
Edited by .-Arpita-. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very Beautiful OS ! The first part was really emotional and nice and The confession was just amazing !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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anku yaar it was amazing...n d confession yar luvd it...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I always dreamt of tis airport confession,finaly u md it true through ur beautiful writings.Thank u.It ws wndrful.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So swt n cute
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Anki it was just awesome 👏
I just loved it 😊😊
TaaRey's airport scene was so adorable yaar
then the party scenes 😳 ufff 😳
I just loved it 😳
and u described the song perfectly 👏
each and every line of this OS touched my soul 👏
I just fell for this OS yaar 😊
bas bas ab or comment nahi karungi bcz agar or likhne bethi toh comment bohot lamba hojayega or end hi nahi hoga 😆
well jokes apart ... just loved it 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ye tune likha hai?? O.O
acha likha hai re...btw thodi jane tu ya jane na movie feel nahi aa rahi??
i love that movie...
sorry tere os post pe movie ki taarif kar rahi me..😛😆
kya karu itna mast likha h sab bol hi chuke hoge to socha kuch naya bolu..
yaar itna mast mat likha kar.. varna comment karne me problem hoti h.. i m still thinking kya bolu mai..🤔
btw.. to tell u.. u have improved... actually u r improving by every update...n thats very super fantastic. n m proud of u.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .-Arpita-.

res

unres
sorry for the late unres 😳
Meee first ... yeeaahhh
Coming to the os ..
superb 👏👏
Emotional in the start , sweet and cute in the end ..
It was just superb 👏👏
Loved the way you portrayed taarey's feelings ... 😳😳
The song added more beauty to this os 😳
It is indeed a beautiful os 👏
Keep writing more
(that is an ORDER
PS- love you for this superb os


Thanku so much arpi love u dear😳😳😳 ur comment made my day
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Very Beautiful OS ! The first part was really emotional and nice and The confession was just amazing !


Thanku dear it really means alot...😳😳😳

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