meri zindagi ho tum taarey os part 10 page 13 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
hey guys I am back with
part 3
Kria hold Reys hand and said
Kria : rukiye na Rey ( ye dekhke Taani ke man me mixed feelings aa jati hai sad ,insecurity,jeaoulsy par apne emotions pe control karke vo chali jati hai)
Rey: tum achanak kaise aa gayi ?( Rey apna hath chuda leta hai)
Kria: han ana achanak hai par par iski planning achanak nahi hai bahot lambi kahani hai bad me sunati hoon pehle muze sabse milvaye to sahi abhi sab kahan honge ?let me guess RH right?
Rey: nahi Kria har bar jo hum guess karte hai vo sahi ho ye zaroori nahi
( Kria surprised hoke dekhti hai vo samajh nahi pati ki Rey kya kehna chahte hai )
Kria: kya? aap kya keh rahe ho ?
Rey: I mean abhi vo log canteen me honge tum jao mil lo muze ek important kam hai ok
Kria: (holiding his hand again) ab aap muzse nahi bhag sakte ok chaliye pls chaliye na
( In the canteen ,everybody is tensed)
Swayam: ye sab tum logonka kiya hua hai kisne kaha tha ye faltu Mazak karneko pata nahi Rey aur Taani ke bich kya hua hoga ( Swayam upset hota hai party me drink ki vajah se)
Sharon: hey chill sab kuch thik hoga hum hai na unke sath
All boys : sorry Swayam and girls hum log just fun karana chahte the hume nahi pata tha ki aisa hoga lekin ab hum sath me milke Taani ko Rey ke pas layenge
( then sab ek dusrese hat milake promise karte hai ki vo Taani aur Rey ko pas lake rahenge)
( Rey entry but alone)
Rey: hey guys
Sharon: kya hua Rey sab sort hua na Vo kahan hai ?
Kria : Yahan( loudly)
( sab log turn hoke dekhte hai aur shocked ho jate hai)
Sab: Kria
Kria: hey guys aise kyun dekh rahe ho jaise bhoot dekha ho main hi hoon Kria tumhari Kria
( sab bahot khush ho jate hai sab log Kria ka welcome karte hai except Sharon coz vo Rey ki taraf dekh rahi hoti hai)
Kria: hey Sharon mana ki hum log best buddies nahi the par ab to ban sakte hai na ( and she hugged her )
Sharon: ya I know tum achanak kaise?
Kria: vaise ek bat manani padegi do dost hamesha ek jaisahi sochte hai ye same question muze Rey ne bhi pucha main doongi iska jawab zaroor doongi kal yahin pe aap sabko par uske pehle mom aapse milna chahti hai sabse so aaj sham aap log mere ghar pe aayiye for snacks
( ye sunke Rey immediately keha hai )
Rey: no Kria not possible bahot kam hai aaj, aaj nahi hoga ok pls
Kria: no way Rey main na sunungi hi nahi ana hai matlab ana hai aap apni batcutter ki bat nahi sunenge pls thodi der
( Rey vapas na bolnevala hota hai par Sharon hold his hand aur kehti hai)
Sharon: sure Kria aayenge pakka
( itne me Taani canteen me entered hoti hai, Rey use dekhta hai aur dekhta hi rehta hai jaise aankhon se bahot kuch kehna chahta hai vo par taani uski aankhon me dekhti hi nahi )
Kria: taani hey HI acha hua tum mil gayi vo aaj sab log mere ghar aa rahe hai tum bhi aao
Taani: nahi Kria ,main nahi aa sakti vo thoda kam hai ( Taani nahi jana chahti hai Kria aur REy ke samne )
Rey: kyun Kya kam hai ( pure haq se puchta hai) jo bhi hai kal kar lena chalo hamare sath
Taani:( Kria ka dhyan nahi hai ye dekhke kehti hai) nahi Rey ,busy hoon aap sab friends jaiye na enjoy please muze mat force kijiye main nahi aa sakti
Rey: friends ke sath to tab enjoy karunga na jab mera dil mere pas hoga aur vo to tumhare pas hai to apna aadha hissa chodke kaise jaaoon tum nahi aaogi to main bhi nahi jaunga
Taani: befaltu ki zid kyun kar rahe ho aap ?
Rey: ab tum mano ya na mano zid ,badtamezzi,pyar,fight,sab kuch tumhare sath hi to kar sakta hoon
( Kria vahan aati hai )
Kria: kya hua GS apne AGS ko dant raha hai kya?
Taani: nahi nahi bas aisehi kam ki bat kar rahe the
Kria: thik hai ab ho gayi kam ki bat ab tum aa rahi ho na?
Rey: han Kria Taani aa rahi hai abhi usne muzse kaha ,not to worry use lana meri responsibility
Kria: kya bat hai Rey aap to bahot Responsible ho gaye
Rey: kya Karun sangat ka asar ( aur smile karke Taani ki tarf dekhta hai aur Taani ko kuch samajh nahi ata ki kahan dekhe )
Kria: acha hai ab aap itna samjh gaye ho to kya aap ye nahi samjhe ki main yahan kiske liye aayi hoon
(aisa bolke shy hoke Kria vahanse bahg jati hai aur jate jate kehti hai)
Kria: sham ko 6 baje guys pakka ,waiting for u
( aur Rey aur Taani shocked hoke vahan khade rehte hai ?
Sorry Guys maine kaha tha ki main Kria ka confession likhungi par kal pakka

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Hey nice update
It ok dear
But update soon
Can't wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Part 3 was really awesome ! Rey was so cute while talking to Taani !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nice story wt shocking twist of kriya's entry/...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Awesome update
eagerly waiting for next part
update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
interesting concept
I hope their is no mu between Taarey
and Kria realizes or Rey tells her that he loves Taani
please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
wow, interesting concept
and amazing 3 parts!
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Hey nyc story
plz updt soon n accept my buddy request n.pm me wenever u updt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
finaly finished all the three parts...
great start dear...
waiting 4 the nxt parts...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
hey guys I am back with another part of my story Part 4:( Kria apne ghar me sab preparation karti rehti hai aur vo bahot khush bhi hai )Kria's mom: kya bat hai aaj to koi bahot khush lag raha hai,bahot acha lag raha hai beta tumhe itna happy dekhke ,nahi to pichle ek sal se tum to jaise hasna bhool hi gayi thi ( tears in her eyes)Kria: oh mumma please don't cry ,aap rote hue bilkul ache nahi lagte aur mumma ab to rone ki bat hi nahi ab meri life me sirf happiness hoga bas and all thanks to u mummaKria's mom: I know baccha kash me us waqt hi ye samajh jati to ...Kria: jane do mumma jo hua acha hua kyun pata hai?Kria's mom: kyun ?Kria: kyunki mumma yahanse jane ke bad pata chala ki dance ke bina me adhuri hoon aur mera dance rey ke bina ,main sirf dance karne ke liye nahi mumma rey ke sath dance karnke liye is world me muze universeji ne bheja hai aur ab puri life me aur rey aur hamara dance ( she started blushing)Kria's mom:( uski tara dekhke smile karti rehti hai) sach Kria rey aur tum bane hi ek dusre ke liye ho pehle muze vo bilkul pasand nahi tha par uska asar jab tumhari life pe aur tum pe dekha to laga ladke me kuch to bat hogi jisne Kria the fighter ko apna deewana banya par ek bat bata tune Rey se kaha ki tu uske liye kya feel karti hai ?Kria: nahi mumma ,chance hi nahi mila par keh doongi bahot jald Kria: jaldi keh de kahi der na ho jaye Kria: yes mumma jaise aapka hokum( aisa kehke dono hasne lagti hai aur itne me door bell bajti hai)Kria's mom: jao tumhare friends hi honge jao( kria jake door open karti hai)Kria: hey guys come ( aur vo dhoondhti rehti hai ) Swayam: kise dhoondh rahi hai?kria: vo Rey kaha hai ?Sharon: vo aa raha hai car park karke Kria: ok aur Taani ?Swayam: vo bhi aa rahi hai ,sab aa rahe hai ok Kria: ok come come sit
(apartment ke niche Rey car park karke car mehi baitha rehta hai aur sochta hai)Rey(in his mind): kyun kyun kaha Kria ne aisa ki vo yaha kyun aayi hai main samjh jaoon ? main shayad samjh bhi raha hoon lekin man nahi raha hoon,pata nahi pehli bar Kria ko dekhke khush nahi hoon ulta bahot depressed hoon feel ho raha hai ki kahin is reason ki vajah se Taani muzse door na ho jaye aur main nahi reh sakta Taani ke bina kya Karun oh god kya ho raha hai mere sath aur kyun ?( itne me car ke mirrorr me use Taani dikhti hai ,vo immediately utarke daudta hai )Rey: Taani Taani ruko Taani : are aap aur baki sab kahan hai ?Rey : vo hai Kria ke ghar me main car park kar raha tha
Taani : oh ok thik hai fir hum bhi chalet hai ( aisa bolke vo jane lagti hai aur Rey uska hat pakadta hai ,jise vo shocked ho jati hai)
Taani: kya kar rahe aap chodiye mera hat ,jane dijiye muze please( vo bhaot try karti hai hat chudane ka)
Rey: nahi Taani ,ye hat chodne ke liye pakdahi nahi tha
Taani: hum kahin aur hai Rey please behave ,chaliye (par Rey use jor se apni taraf khichta hai)
Rey: kyun Taani mera choona acha nahi lag raha hai tumhe,mera pas ana,mera tumhari taraf dekhna ,tumhe hug karna aur tumhe kiss...( aur vo ruk jata hai aur dheere dheere aage badhta hai aur Taani apni aankhen band kar leti hai )
( par wrong timing ki tara Taani ka phone bajta hai aur vo hosh me aati hai and Rey ki apne se door karti hai )
Taani: han bhai ,han me aa rahi hoon bas 5 minute ok
(vo phone rakh deti hai aur jane lagti hai par Rey piche se aake use hug karta hai aur use kiss karne lagta hai jaise ki vo apne hosh me hi nahi ho kaise bhi karke aapne aapko chudake taani bhagke upar jati hai aur door bell bajati hai)
Kria:( door open karti hai) hey Taani Hi ye kya kisisise ladai karke aayi ho kya bal bikhre hue ,itna sweat kar rahi ho aur itna haanf rahi ho are u ok?
Taani :( nervous ho jati hai) nahi vo bhag ke aayi muze laga sab log aa gaye honge to mehi der se hoon isliye baki kuch nahi sach me aur kuch bhi nahi
Kria: thik hai itna ghabra kyun rahi ho me aise hi puch rahi thi
( Taani andar aati hai use dekhke koi aur samjhe na samjhe lekin Sharon samjh jati hai kuch to hua hai )
Sharon: come Taani sit with me come here
Taani: ya
Sharon: kya hua thik ho aisi kyun lag rahi ho ,Rey kahan hai?
Taani: bad me batati hoon,vo niche hai
Kria: are Taani tum nichesehi aayi na ,Rey ko dekha kya kya pata itne der kyun kar rahe hai car park karne me
Swayam: aa jayega
Rey: aa jayega nahi aa gaya
Kria: oh Rey kahan the aap kabse wait kar rahi hoon aapka ?
Rey: Really? thanks
Kria: sit na Rey
Rey: ya sure ( vo baith jata hai lekin thodihi der me kehta hai) hey Nil muze na yahan pe uncomfy ho raha hai please tu yaha aa ja na main vaha baithta hoon
Nil:sure come
(Taani bahot uncomfortable ho jati hai kyun ki Nil ke side pe vo baithi hui hoti hai )
Rey: hey hi Sharon .hi Taani ( both said hi to him par Taani uski taraf bina dekhe bolti hai ) bas Taani ab maine soch liya ki main tumhe nahi jane de sakta ,ab hum sath hokar rahenge ( aur ye uski kan bolke uski taraf dekhke hasta hai aur Taani shy with fear se niche dekhti hai )
aur dusri taraf Kria Rey ki taraf dekhke bolti hai in her mind)
Kria: bas Rey ab main aapse dur nahi reh sakti bahot sataya hai maine aapko lekin ab bas ek din fir kal sabke samne main kahungi ke main aapse pyar karti hoon aur hum dono sath hokar rahenge ab main aapko chodke kahin nahi jaaongi ( aur ye bolke shy feel karti hai )
kya hoga ab kya Kria ko apan Rey milega jo ab Taani ka ho chuaka hai vo bhi puri taras aur jab kria karegi apne pyar ka ijhaar to kya hoga sabka hal ye sab next part me aur hoga intense romance of taarey

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