One rainy day... Kriyaansh and Swaron OS

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Anu

@Angelic.x.Chaos

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wow yaar... 😲 Kya OS tha... 👏

I loved it... Infact love all your works... ❤️

This was beautifully written... 🤗

😊

~Anu~

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

both the versions were awesome ... <3

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

sooo cute OS...loved it vey much and specially last part...bade baap ki beegdi aulad

superb

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

I loved it!!!

when i read the first chunk of the Os i thought that is different...

you never hear newly weds spending their first night playing in the rain...

well atleast it is the first time for me...

and i loved it!!!

it was really cute how she saw him and instantly she to loved rain!!

i got to say i got a little confuse the second half..

but later i got(you see im a little slow)!!!

and the ending was great!!

all they care about is being in love and nothing else!!!

Awesome OS!!!!

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Sheetal

@Little_Muffin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

First Of All..Thank You Deetha For This OS..Just Now Got Something New And Fresh Registered In My Brain..! 😃

Secondly, I Was In Love With The Concept..But You Came Between Us..Resulting To Our Break-Up..😡 Tune unhe milwaya kyu..Thoda rona dhona hota to maze ate..! Huh! Anyways..I Liked This Also!

Now Waiting For The Next Part! Update As Soon As Possible!

Acha One Question Hai.. 😆

Rey Lives With His family Or alone? I Felt ki akele rehta hai but still puch leti hu..!

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

aww kya update hai

loved it..

i love rain very much...

after reading ur os... i feel in love with rain more...

thnks a lot for the pm

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Awesum OS.. 👏

Firstly I was confused...😕

Den aftr I got dat d stranger was Rey himself...

Thnks 4 d pm...

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Very Cute deetha 😃
So nice, breakup patchup 😆 oops yaha toh divorce tak baat chli gyi 😲
but the concept was the main thing i loved! And the way you penned it, so beautiful! 👏
Rains, ah i love them! 😳