One rainy day... Kriyaansh and Swaron OS

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

awesome story deetha..
beautifully penned n emotions were great... d way u showed 1 hating rain before marriage n 1 enjoyinh it.. but after divorse d role reversal was beautiful said.. n d way u showed d love each had n s not able to b away from each other n d 2-3 weeks of separation made them let go of their ego was nice... d interaction as if they don know each other was nice followed by last line that they said they cant b changed was nice...
both versions had different feel to it...

ps: really very sorry for late comment was busy n rarely came online..

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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

woww dii...!! this was just too beautiful...!!👏 loved the way u portrayed their emotions... NICE..!!😊

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Awesome!!! Beautifully penned!!!
Pehle its arranged marriage!! Fir pyaar hua!!! Fir divorce!!!
Par ek dusre se door rehkar realize hua ki dey cnt live widout each oder!!!
D whole story...from start till end!!! Was just captivating!!!
N d end is just soo grt!!!
Aakhir mein dono saath ho jaate hain!!!
N d last lines r just so awesome!!!
Both understood n said d same thing together!!!
Lolzz!! Eyelock ho gaya hoga...par humko pata nahi chala!!!
Dono ko yaad bhi nahi ki divorce kyun liya!!!!
Dono bade baap ki bigadi hui aulad hai!!!
Awesome!!!