Dheeme Dheeme |KR Shortstory| - Page 9

Originally posted by: sanju_arsha

as always super awesome update...
Tune romance bhi add kiya,
i just love the way u write..n express their feelings..
Abhi bhi yehi doubt hai ki rey kriya ko kyun stare karta tha..
N waiting 4 d nxt update..

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

it was superb update...romance in bus aweee...sooo cute

Originally posted by: Riyaluvka2s

Aah.. Arya di this is so damn amazing.. I freaking loving this serene story

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Superb update. .:-D
realy awsome. . .
Humare KR itne close. .haiyee. . . . .
Bt,mujhe jaan na hai ki y was rey staring at kriya on 1st day. .and aage kya hua. .
wana read more. .nxt part plz jaldi update ker meri maa. .

Originally posted by: cool_star14

Awesome update
update soon

Originally posted by: crazysky

its simply awesome

n cute

loved it

Originally posted by: yogini64

Omg... its soo cute...😃

Loved it... I realllyyy like the way u present a story!!!!! 😊

Kriya is having strange feelings... justified ...

that was unexpected & intense... vo bhi stranger ke sath... 😳

Hehehe ... sharon is so cute... it looks so realistic... 😛

Loved the way-- kriyaansh gelled up with each other so easily...

1 month me itne close... nice...😉

Bus me kissing... hehe... sab kuch yahi hoga kya??? 😆

U updated it a month back??? .. & did'nt sent pm's??

*on hold* ... 😲 ... nahhiii 😡

update it soon... u made me wait alot...😛😆

Originally posted by: Abhilashaarsha

its awsum..yaar..

loved it..

Originally posted by: sumimita

aww...it is just awsome...

loved it to the core...

romancing part was really nyc..

thnks for the pm dear...

keep writing..:)