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Posted: 12 years ago

The update was worth the wait dear. One thing which I have noticed in this story is there are so many realistic bits which u beautifully embed in the story through your writing style. I have felt a connection to Khushis character mainly because she too has to go through a tough choice. Her career choice which she had to make by bending her dreams for her fathers dreams. Your Khushi is strong because I absolutely loved the way how she replied to her colleague by not allowing anyone to question or probe her decision. I felt proud of her and I felt I should learn a thing or two from her. ---- Then how is it that you are studying engineering? And what about this internship? According to you youd rather be writing a story right now, isnt it? he said a little too forcefully, unable to hide his sourness, his insinuation crystal clear. This man had a tendency to see everything the way he wanted to and behave like the world owed him something (Speak about the egoistic men, I have a bunch to deal with daily and unfortunately my hands are tied since they are superior. I wish I had your Khushis grace to deal with such people). There was no way she was going to reveal her problems to him, it was between her and her family. She could fight with them all she wanted but would not tolerate anyone else judging her fathers decisions ---- The fact I want to be a published writer someday need not have everything to do with the career choices I make today. Also, what is to say I am not equally interested in both energy systems and writing? Why must I pick one? I choose to have them both and I make no apologies for it, especially because I have worked hard to be where I am. ---- clap! clap! clap! I am really proud of Khushi, her grace and dignity with which she gave her reply!

Im not sure its going to help meet the agenda of energy security. Even the PM didnt even make a mention of this in his speech on the 15thAugust. ---- Here you again display your skill at mentioning a relevant point and how much you are aware of the situations in our country. Honestly speaking I am learning all these issues from your story. The solar project, I googled later after reading the story and was surprised. Even in this update, the discussion between the colleagues was an eye-opener. The fact is this kind of situation is present in all fields. I am a bio-nano researcher in cancer field and I have seen the pathetic way our Indian system works while in abroad we can make a change within a year or two. In india due to the ways political and legal and other crisis, the problem get accumulated and we cant get anything done and at a point u become too much frustrated and loose ur hope.

We could keep waiting for others to do something. Or we could do something ourselves. Isnt that why were here in the first place? said Khushi seriously. She never did enjoy the blame game of any kind. The government is doing what it can. There is also the possibility that it isnt doing anything. That doesnt stop us. Each one of us will be working on specific projects from next week, and well have the chance to do something fruitful. One thing at a time.--- Aha! I admire this Khushi. I could feel her optimism and positive energy.

Khushi, youre being awfully nave Vighnesh looked at her pitifully. Well be working on the projects for all of three months, and that too in Phase 1. Even the smallest of projects take a minimum of 18 months before they are operational, and this is when the legal work is smooth. Youll be hugely disappointed if you think youre going to see something concrete at the end of this internship. ---- Again I see Vighnesh kind of people around me who always gives up. Its so disappointing and after certain time it rubs off on u too..

I am a patient person, Vighnesh. I am fully aware of all that one can and cannot achieve in a span of a few months, but I also know how much I can learn. I may not be able to perform a miracle when I finish here, but like I said, its one thing at a time. My contribution at this point may be little, yet I believe it counts. Whenever I put to use all my knowledge and resources and skills, I am certain it will bear more fruits than sitting around complaining about our government. ---- I applaud u for writing this part. Its truly inspirational. I had this attitude while I was doing my PhD abroad but after returning to India and working in Indian research scenario, my spirits are getting depressed. But once I read it, it reminded me of those days where I dared to hope and keep things moving even when there were difficulties. You really gave me a wonderful positive energy through your this character dear.

Where is Jaiprakash? He is the only one in this house who ever takes my side. Why did he have to leave just when I fall sick? he asked his face resembling a petulant child; --- Wow.. thats sweet of you to give the prakash brothers some space and dialogue..I always liked them.

Err wheres the fun in that? No romance. No Rabba Vey. ---- Even I happen to say this like Akashlol!

For gods sake, you scream Haye Devi Maiyya every time you bang your foot against the corner of your side table! she couldnt stop laughing. And he was speechless. Did he really do that? Haye Devi Maiyya! ---- Lol! Again same pinch..

So, whats this season two about? Two more people who Rabba Vey? God this was fun!

Theyd better not! he sounded really hurt. First they ruin the original show and end it disgracefully. And now they want to cash on its popularity so they come up with a new load of crap and say its Ek Baar Phir! What the! ---- I wholeheartedly agree!

Are you saying the original show was not a load of crap?

It was no gold, yet it was magical. he said dreamily. -----True!!!!!!!

Yeah! You should watch it sometime. The chemistry. The love. The Rabba Vey! It makes you want to fall in love. And eat jalebis. Really! he near-squealed. Now Payal was speechless. ---- You had me there..laughing out loudlybecause its exactly the same dialogue I used to say to my close friends who knows that I am an insane case . Honestly I too share Akashs same sentiments. Its after watching this serial I too fell in love with already favorite jalebis. Now a days whenever I have them, I used to think and eat them as Khushis jalebisand absolutely true that serial had that charm which makes u want to fall in love, believe in love!!! You voiced the sentiments which I couldnt put into words..

. Payal Gupta ko sharmana bhi aata hai ? He smirked. And she blushed some more. She louurved him. --- cute! J

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update!!
I am glad the writers of the forum keep bringing important national issues up for discussion or point out to problems in our system.
Renewable targets are definitely difficult to achieve!! With using renewable sources as sources of energy too many limitations are there. Plus they require huge investments to set up the infrastructure!! Government has recognised this need and therefore infrastructure figures as the top priority in the twelfth five year plan!! But as said too many things go in to it. Too many bottlenecks are there!!

And i totally agree with what his mother implied, that only by talking things would not change, we all need to do something in our small capacities to do something to bring about a change

And i marvel at your ability to write two totally different parts in this chapter! The first heavily laden with heavy stuff and the other half full of fun and levity with light doses of romance!!
I broke out in to smile when i read about "ek baar fir"!! I totally share akash's sentiments on this matter!!
Loving this payal!! Totally what akash needed!! Finally akash confessed!! See akash it wasnt too hard right!!
You are a terrific writer!! Totally love this story!!

Edited by Nandz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That WAS a serious discussion indeed... one close to my heart... energy efficiency/sufficiency and alternate sources...

But Khushi does not have the time to save the world and write her book!!

IPK2- Ek Baar phir - Devi maiyya -🤣

East or west - original dhaan best!
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was an awesome update with the strong debate...loved the approach there ,
arnav's simple gesture of comforting her was adorable...
payal and akash's part was cute..ah finally he confessed...and his obsession for his favorite sow(correction my favorite show) and his cringing for the upcoming crap sequel is just like me...
I wonder why even r they bringing Ipkknd when there is no sanaya and barun...it can never have the same magic...a nice way to put out your frustation...a much awaited one.this was an amazing update...hope for a quicker update next time...plz plz plz

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was one powerful update ...

Just love this Khushi ... she is brilliant ... loved the way she can stand up for herself ...
an intelligent and popular person does become the cause of envy in offices ...
Shekhar could not hide the jealousy he felt towards Khushi's success at work and
could not keep himself from passing a jibe at her ...
"Why must I pick one? I choose to have them both and I make no apologies for it,
especially because I have worked hard to be where I am..." 👏 well said Khushi ...

The debate on the energy renewable targets of the government was very enlightening ...
but the lesser said the better ... as things are too complicated and a total mess today ...
with very few solutions in sight ... corruption has created havoc in our system ...
It's really very very sad ... but rightfully as Khushi said that if every citizen does
his or her duty it is bound to bring in some relief even though the progress may
be very gradual ...

Aakash has finally admitted his love to Payal ... 😳

Haye ... Ek Baar Phir should be totally banned ... 😡
I get hysterical every time I see a promo ... how could they ??!!!

Thanks Twiggy ... great chapter ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Res

Sorry I forgot I Res'd here. Comment updated on Page 90
Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


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While reading the updates I was making mental notes as to will I mention in my comment. Mrs. Sridhar, renewable energy sources, way Khushi handled Shekahr's question regarding her career choices, Arnav's support...BUT... Haye Devi Maiyya... you made Akash a fan-gurl and all serious thoughts flew out of the window.

Let me laugh out aloud for a second, for nth time ie 🤣🤣🤣

Ek baar Phir? Rabba vey? Jalebi? OMG..Can a guy get more cuter or more girly and yet cuter I should say than this. Payal is one lucky 'girlfriend' I say. The way he was defending his beloved show, frustrated at imitation, nostalgic about the chemistry... I LOVED IT DAMMIT !!!

I have mentioned this earlier to (in ref to motherly characters) but I would like to say this again, you have a knack to bring the side-characters to life. And this chapter is one solid proof of it.

Please update sooner next time :)
Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'll first get Payal and Akash out of my head. As juvenile as it may sound, I refuse to call anything that doesn't ave Arnav and Khushi IPK. My deepest sympathies with the cast, since they didn't know what they were getting into when they were signed for the show. And Akash is such a regular fan-girl. HDM , Rabba Ve and getting emotional when defending your TV obsession. Ah, those days are missed. I'm so glad that these two have opened up, at least we won't have any smartass replies going to and fro, beating around the bush. As for Khushi, well she had to come face to face with workplace politics sometime. And although I totally support her and Vaidehi's views, we can safely declare that not one of the governments so fa has done enough. Even with renewable resources and other developements, those in dire need will be left behind, while the rich get richer and more prosperous. Right now, we have a country that lives in different centuries, depending on the geography. On one hand you have cities like Mumbai and Delhi with their high rises, metros, and all other modern amenities, on the other, you have wide sections of the population who live in the same conditions as their ancestors did a few centuries ago. No schools, no hospitals, hell no food or clean water. Unless we don't do something about this omnipresent corruption, we can't develop as a country.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally u updated...miss this ff
lovely update
their discussion was quite intresting n payash love story was cute too
plzzz update soon
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
ah... loved how Khushi defended herself... i absolutly agree with her... why cant v have wot evr interests us the most along with carrying r profession...??
Akash is adorable guy!!
njoyed the dig on ek baar phir , Twiggy!! :D

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