#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 4

Twigs,

Garima is a typical mother. The daughter has her first day of office and she is all nervous 😆

I simply love it when authors show us a friendly banter between Arnav and Payal. I just ❤️ it :D I am glad that Garima understands Khushi's plight. I know Shashi does too. But I am still angry on Shashi 😡 And it is better that I don't speak about the career choice, I will end up ranting again.


This update was focused totally on Payal and Arnav and I didn't miss ArHi at all. Now that is an achievement.


Now what I like most about this story is that it feels I am looking in to the house of two families and being a part of their daily routine 👏


I just hope when Khushi returns home, she is not very unhappy :( Warna mera gussa badh jaayega 😡


BTW, don't mind but the culture you belong to reflects in your writing and I love that :D

Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part, like this Payaal and Arnav bonding

update soon
Edited by binimoti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res😊

I so loved the update. Well, mothers will be mothers. They are the one who worry for us, when we should be the one doing that. That is their way of showing love & affection :)
I am glad payal apologized to arnav. It happens sometime that unknowingly you touch that raw nerve of a person which hurts them the most. And when you are one of the close family friend to them, it hurts more.
Loved the bond they share :)

P.S. Belated happy Birthday Vee. Wish you an awesome 17 :-)
Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved Arnav n Payal's relation
I jus hop Payal in future thinks before she speaks hehehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
Even though Khushi wasn't present there but her presence was constantly felt.

It's such a beautiful feeling to know that so many people love you and are there for you.

Could actually feel Payal's difficulty but glad she didn't let her ego come in between. One should go to extreme lengths to keep your near and dear ones happy.
Edited by IronButterfly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
For this update - my feelings

Uncommonly make an impression if and only if together (9)!

Love the Payal Arnav relationship- its so real and nice!! The Khushi Arnav relationship seems smooth in contrast!




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Posted: 12 years ago
You know i always wanted some nice light moments between Arnav and Payal in the show! it did have quite a scope but never explored or tried!
So having to read it here! was really nice!

Also liked the Garima Payal convo!!

I somehow like the whole closed circle of the Gupta's and the Raizadas.. esp Arnav!
Looking fwd to the next chap!! :)

Thanks for the update and the PM dear! :)
Edited by LeenaRocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That is how mothers are. They worry all the time for no reason. Mine does too.

Payal apologizing isn't so difficult. No rocket science actually. But it was good to see her make an honest attempt of something she is so bad at. The entire exchange was still funny.

Arnav is quiet the darling of the family, isn't he?
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Posted: 12 years ago
moms are like this only..and ME who have a STRICT TEACHER mom,,understands this very well..oh she hates my way of speaking,,!

coming to update..i really really enjoyed reading this part..well, some ppl must be complaining that there is no ARHI..but this is needed..very much needed...garima scolds payal for talking to arnav in that way..payal is jst being frank at her part..this hapeens mostly,,,we think that we are being frank and comfy but sometimes cross the lines...!

but payal make that up...she says SORRY instatntly and there, arnav is grilling her...hahah...love the bond payal-arnav share...so sweet...garima is happy,,,payal is happy...arnav is happy...but IS HAPPY HAPPY...that we will see in next part...!
till then! stay tuned to POLEMIC JACKANAPES...!!

twig! ILYD!

sorry for late unresing...!


Edited by avantisharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice update
loved it
payal arnav equation in this story is really amazing...n quite different also

today's update was quite overwhelming
plzzz continue soon
n thanq so so mch for pm

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