#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 - Page 22

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oh what an apology!! :) your writing is so simple but suoer effective. I especially liked the conversation between Payal and Garima!! it was really inspiring to read sentences like " i don't want you to apologize because I said so" . How many elders actually have the maturity to say that??

Glad you are feeling better😊

I personally find apologizing very awkward...not because it can hurt my pride to do so, but to formulate the correct words to make an apology seem genuine is difficult...so I can understand Payal's frazzled state. I still don't agree with her harsh remarks towards Arnav. Even if she feels very close to him, it was just straight up rude...I really feel like there has to be a reason for her say something like that and in that manner (maybe I'm just over thinking this).

Garima was really cute, being nervous for Khushi like that...I guess mothers are just like that😊

Really looking forward to hearing how Khushi felt after he first day...does she completely regret her decision?

Really missed Khushi/Arnav interaction and their crosswords in this chapter, but it was still a great update. I really enjoyed reading it!

I had so much fun reading this. This version of Arnav is literally a shock to me, but very adorable too. So is Payal. Actually, Garima is cute too, the way she is worrying over Khushi's day. Hopefully Khushi enjoyed her first day at her first job. Thanks for the PM!

It was all so full of Payal update and you know what I loved it to bits... Like I told in my last comment, we have a wonderful characterization of Payal here and I am glad her presence is very prominent...

Loved the mother n daughter chat... I feel so family here... The bond that these people share with each other is so awesome and all I can say here is "what a family!!! Simple n lovable!!!!"

That was a change to have someone having a difficulty to apologize and have Mr Raizada at the receiving end... Between I am so curious to know what Arnav brought along n placed in the dining table... This girl khushi is so lucky... Aloo parathas... Jelabi... N I am sure Arnav brought along something to eat only...

Loved garima [:D] payal is Awsum...loved how she apologized to Arnav... All the characters are so adorable

Great update! Garima is so sweet a mom! She actually resembles mine a bit! 😆

That was awesome! I mean, i never really read of sucha strong bonding b/w arnav and payal before!

And the way u portrayed it clearly dipicted their characters and friendship! 😃
and the kidney part was hilarious!
And i already adore arnav!
And khushis mum was being a typicalll mother!

Thanx for the happy reading moment!

Oh my god!...its soo cute to see everyone worked up just because its her first day of work.
Family is like that!
Thanks for the pm