virman ff LOVE- essence of life CHP 3 UPDATED Pg26 new 7th sep 13

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

this is beautiful ..and ofcoz amazingly written 😃
virat sudden changes seems like he is closing himself to something there are stuffs bothering him ...he want to let go but he cant ...
the jeeman scene was fab it was sweet yet mad 😃
then virat ka sudden sppearence then the beautiful song just mezmirizing with the thought of virman then virman thinking of letting it goo easy 😃
well this seems to be really interesting waiting to see how it goes further..
update next part sooon 😃

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FlowerHater

@FlowerHater

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

ok i have read this story from the beginning and its awesome!!! The way Virat is reacting hints that he is tied up with something something which is making him to resist the pull he is feeling for mannu!!!! his sudden appearnace in front of manvi came as shocker for her and really loved the teasing sessions!!! Its good to see that now they are becoming normal with each other and reducing awkwardness!!!

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Tejeswy

@kushal90

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

This is definitely awwweeesssooommee...!! *_*

Hw cm i haven't read this b4.!? 😲

Nd give me a hiii5 MAIN RANG SHARBATON KA is my latest addiction tooo ^_^

This update ws amaaazing..!! 😃

Update soon nd do pm me 🤗

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Amnuuu !!!! 🤗tat was such a beautiful update !!! ❤️
Starting from jeevikaa n manvi relationship it is reallyyy sweet !!! i really really adore tat !!!! <3 their convo n all juz bring a big smile on my face !! :D lesbo !!! lamaao🤣lovely ❤️
virat is behaving clam !!! achaa hai naaa !!!😉
awwwn !!!!! the driving part was soo cute !!! virman singing song !!!! tat's is soo sweet !!!❤️
virat is moving back !! tat's sad !! :(
wat is the suspense behind virat ???🤔 aakhir chakkar kya hai ??? n the noise n all !!!
n the last part wass soo charming !!! the index holding part !! hayyye n the cheek kisss !!! gosh !!! tat's soo delightful !!!
awesomeee update !!!! looking forward for next !!~~ will be eagerly waiting amnuu !!! ❤️

Edited by .Yamin. - 12 years ago

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

amazing update
loved it
love this maanvi a lot
wonder why was virat avoiding maanvi
happy that they have started talking again
loving this story a lot
thanks a lot for the pm

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

wow awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear
😊😊😃😃👏👏⭐️⭐️😊😊

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Athira soman

@athniamanvi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

awesome update yaar thanks for the pm

update soon

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

nice update but why he behave
so wired what going on his life
or something happen with him
in past update soon

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Luvmahuya

@Luvmahuya

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

VERY WELL WRITTEN!!1>JEEMAN BONDING JUST AWSOMEE2>VIRMAN PART WAS MINDDD BLOWING..CHUTKI ... U KNOW ONE THING??HMM ITHINK U KNOW... U R VERY TALENTED MY DOLL!! LOVE UU///GOD BLESS U.. BHAGWAN,,ALLAH,,JESUS ,,PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ ALWAYS MERI IS CHUTKI PE APNA NOOR BARSATE RAHNA ...LOVE UUU...