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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#721

wow, nice updates

thanks so much for the pm

looking forward for the next hot hot update :D

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Awesome update they are real cute loving the teaser

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PARVATHY44

@PARVATHY44

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#723

beautiful update.loved it.precap was awww.eager to read esp the next update(winks)

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

👏👏👏
Rshu as usual I am speechless dear.

A perfect and mind blowing interpretation my dear.
Thank you so much..😛

*There is nothing like a dream to create the future.*

thank you for the pm dear.
take care.
love you.

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#725

They will now embark on a new journey
Cannot wait til the next update

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sphobic

@sphobic

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

wonderful interpretation di👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

it is the beginning of their new life.

all the quotes used were perfect.

best quote --

"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them"

Love!!!

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Hey smita...
I am a new reader of your ff..
I must tell you your ff is so tempting...I read all the updates in 2 days...
Just loved the way you express each and every one's feelings in the story...
Itz really a sweet and interesting story I came across...
Wonderful...

Btw I am also smita... 😊

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#728

I can;t seem to be able to wipe off the grin on my face as I come to each update, Worse this grin is getting bigger and bigger with each update.

Ha, ha! At last we have a Khushi quite stumped by what is about to happen!😃

Loved the description of the pre-wedding and wedding ceremonies, especially Khushi's response to everything.

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#729

for part 44 sec 3...

thts the wonderful varmala scene...and NK's words just added the smile tht needed...i just remember a marriage i attended sometimes ago where the friends of groom started hitting him playfully saying tht he is such guddar, change the party shaadi se pelhe...it was such a fun...

at the time of pheras...finally arnav understand the means of marriage and the seven vows...m sure he will be thankful to khushi for changing his views about marriage...

finally the wait is over...now now one could stop arnav...😉...let the family celebrate the picnic in shanti"VAAN"...the couple going honeymoon...

superb update...

thnks for the Pm rashmi di...

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#730

nice interpretation Rashmi di...

yeah...arnav-khushi...after crossing the hurdles of hate and misunderstanding with covering the the social distance of their houses a fashion-house business family to a halwaai-a traditional business family...now they hav reached the level where their action speaks...and no words needed...

loved it di...

thnks for the Pm...