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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Loved it but it left me confused a little
If you can clarify it for me via pm???
Please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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#1 Lucid Fall.

I'm so proud of Khushi.
How I wish she had been exactly like this (instead of a goofy doormat) in the show!

"Walking Contradiction, the very definition of double standards.. ". How True!

It delves deep into the psychology of both Arnav and Khushi.

Arnav's reaction was at first surprising. But then, every person has their own set of defense mechanism.

I just loved, loved the last line-
"He laughed because he knew if he stopped, he would cry..."
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Posted: 12 years ago
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# Too late, too late.

"He was like a thunderstorm. Impossible to ignore. Dazzling as he viciously destructed. She could count his fissures too."

"He had disappeared from her memories.. slowly like baby's teeth."

I want to ask only one question, how can you write such beautiful metaphors?

The cynicism of Khushi that reflects while she talked about Arnav fascinates me to no end!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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#3 Jar of Hearts.

This is the perfect thing which Khushi should have done in the show.

Funny, how Arnav, known for his mercurial temper and anger, couldn't do anything before Khushi's anger.

Khushi's retorts were too good.

".. f**king poolside."
Khushi sweared. That was fresh.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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BRILLIANT...
Beautiful portrayal of her pain n emotions...
amaxnggg writing dear...
thnxxx a lot 4 pm...
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All the best for ur exams 😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love alone isn't enough.
He might be her soul mate but who said living with soul mates is easy.
He's killing her bit by bit.
And finally she realizes that it will do no good to anyone if she continued this.

Letting go is important.
Glad to see Khushi doing it to release her pain.
Edited by IronButterfly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
beautiful...and thank you ...some time i wondered how khushi endure so much pain...it is because she cocooned herself...i am happy she came out
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was beautiful.
The way you have depicted Khushi's emotions here is heart wrenching.
But she decided to get out of it.
Good for her.

Good luck with the exams.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful...ur words depicted the pain of khushi so aptly...terrrific update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes no point in staying in cocoon
Best to break free
Oh my that was just what she needed to do
Move on or at least try to

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