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ruark_22

@ruark_22

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Beautifully written!! Always wished that Khushi fought back that night!!!

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-Catharsis

@-Catharsis

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Loved it. She threw things. So poweful. I would have loved to watch this on screen. Hats off! Gives relief to my burnt dreams of a stronger Khushi.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

This is the Khushi we all knew and loved, not the submissive one who cried at the drop of a hat and took all kinds of rubbish from Arnav.

Loved this one shot. Brilliantly written.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Just read the first one shot.

You are right.

Khushi atleast deserved one good rant.

Thanks for writing this.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Read the second one.

Khushi did forgive him too easily.

There was no redemption track.

That was the CVs biggest mistake.

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

I am loving these small doses of ranting and venting of what went wrong and what should or could have happened because they echo my own raving.

If not every occasion, on the night of their marriage or on the night when Anjali tries to harm her child and Arnav yells at Khushi, blames her for coming his life and spoiling his sister's life. End of the day she is a human and can take only so much of pushing up the wall by everybody around her so she had to react but alas she didn't.

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

wow thats a powerful one...love that

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

All the three OSs are so brilliantly written. The first one was so powerful, the dialogues and it left me teary-eyed. The second one emanated a hopelessness , excruciating sadness, sadistically so, but it was beautiful. And the last one, I loved the most I think because Khushi fought back. That is always a delight to read! :D Do PM me when you write more, if possible. Thanks! :D