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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Arshix144
Wow now that was quite something Missy, it left me with one thought only and that was IF ONLY, IF ONLY Khushi would have reacted the way you penned down her emotions things would have been much better. Have you thought about doing a redemption track based on IPK that is Arnav's redemption. Judging by what I have read so far I know you would do wonders with that track as well.

Absolutely Loved this OS, I wish the CV's had done this scene exactly as you described it. Khushi never got a chance to vent her anger, I have been revisiting the contract marriage scenes lately and I am even more appalled by the way her character got treated after the revisit. So thanks for this wonderfully written piece!

I did think of writing a FF on the redemption track and this, in fact, was to be a part of it. However, I don't have the time to start anything new so I just vent my frustration through One-Shots.

Edited by -Delilah- - 12 years ago

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katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Love.this song and the way you waved a tale around it. Amazing I always wanted to see khushi act like arnav and show her inner rage. This is very satisfying.

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Beautifully written D! :)

I can't help wishing that a similar scene was shown in the show. Khushi didn't get the chance to vent her anger out. She did scream at Arnav that night, but then it sunk into oblivion. It wasn't re-visited ever again.

If only..

Thank you for this piece! I loved it! :)

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soppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

This was something!...in all this time i dont think a scene quite like this has been written
You should definitely write a redemption track!...god knows we cant get enough of those!
Id love to read your version of it
Oh and please update smooth talking stanger fast!

Edited by soppy - 12 years ago

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Pavina

@Pavina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

How do u mange to convey so much emtn in a sinle piece of writin...its briiliant...
I remeber durin marrige night i felt so sry for khushi since arnav was acting as emotionless beast..i so wis khushi wont tolerat all dis n wil stnd agnst him..but then her way of geetin him was difn...this os jus made me feel so nice...if arnav nac make a scene so can khushi...y wil c stay in poolside..she gave him the way he understood...jus a lovely os...i mean its beyond words for me to say nythin...i jus loved it...

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Her anguish and turmoil came out very well.

Good job.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

wow now thats something she could have done
and this would show what it means to be in this marriage with him
man hats off to you for this

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Maheerah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

I could actually imagine all this in my head...and for a writer,this moment should be cherishing when a reader says that...i will feel proud in saying that now i am stalking ur FFs...👏 I dont have words to explain what i feel about u n ur write-ups all i could say is that they are breathtaking...

And 3 points where i felt proud of khushi were:

*She turned a sweet, artless smile upon him "You're not the only one who can make a scene."

*she picked up the small glass table and hurled it at his feet.

*"The scene will have an audience then," She said bitterly, fury twisting her gut relentlessly.

I was lyk is this really khushi😲????

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

You know there was something terribly beautiful about these three short pieces...they were heart wrenching but somehow provided vindication...they gave pain and yet satisfaction...

Beautifully written..