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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant D!

I just finished reading Love was... and now you have given us this piece, you definitely showcased what I said earlier about your talent and versatility!
Too little too late indeed, your descriptive portrayal of Khushi's emotions was fantastic. Forget a redemption track the show didn't even cover a proper apology & groveling other than one little scene somewhere prior to the wedding with all the rituals and customs. There was no remorse and proper Wooing track and still Khushi forgave him so easily. *sighs I am rambling aren't I, well your update had a massive impact and I am floored!

PS. Loved your PM, you are adorable no wonder you manage to come up with the very witty and cute diary entries for DFS! Good luck with College, do keep your readers entertained whenever you get a chance.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
one word brilliant...
it was freaking awesome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
you have a way with words. small but amazing and effective
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
👏Ur writing is extraordinary D 👏!!!!!n yes da note in da PM was quite long bt it contained many emotions...gonna miss ur regular updates and obviously u😭.Wishing u great success⭐️.bt plz don't forget us😭 although i know u r not quitting😆...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Wonderful analogy! How d you get such ideas? Where do you get them from would be a better question!😛

Even i didnt like the whole Arnav not aologizing scenario. Power to us sister! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
that's incredible wonderful
u nailed out her emotions, her pain by distrust by him very well written
continue it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Now seriously you just summarize the whole "Nafraat" and "Mohabhaat" story of Arnav and Khushi in few paragraphs? And to top it you also include the incomplete emotions of the ipk fanatics? You are brilliant with words👏👏. What would I have not done to see Khushi become a woman and stand up to Arnav and Arnav repent for his deeds and woo Khushi?

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Superb shot
brilliantly written
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
well written.. loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Wow now that was quite something Missy, it left me with one thought only and that was IF ONLY, IF ONLY Khushi would have reacted the way you penned down her emotions things would have been much better. Have you thought about doing a redemption track based on IPK that is Arnav's redemption. Judging by what I have read so far I know you would do wonders with that track as well.

Absolutely Loved this OS, I wish the CV's had done this scene exactly as you described it. Khushi never got a chance to vent her anger, I have been revisiting the contract marriage scenes lately and I am even more appalled by the way her character got treated after the revisit. So thanks for this wonderfully written piece!

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