Be Nishaan...!! By Soha!!

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Soha

@-Soha-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello People..

I Soha for the first time presenting her poetry publicly.

I am writing poems in English and Urdu/Hindi from my childhood but never presented it publicly.

I had a poem of my very own last night in my mind so just thought to share it with you all.

I know it's not nice but please give your reviews.

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Ye jo khalish si hai..

Kuch kashish bhi hai..

Khalish meri ye mit jaye...Mujhe kashish ye teri jo mil jaye..

Mujhe teri kashish kaa nishaan mile k khalish meri ho jaye...

BE NISHAAN..

Main khud ko tujh may de doon..

Tujhe paa kar khud ko kho doon..

Mujhe tere wajood kaa nishaan jo mile...

Tou wajood mera ho jaye BE NISHAAN...

Tera naam jure jo mere saath..

Agar thaam le tu mera haath..

Apne ghamon ko main chor doon...

Teri khushi kaa mujhe mile Nishaan..

Meri zaat ho jaye BE NISHAAN..

Mujhe teri hee kasam hai..

Main dobara jee uthon gi..

Mujhe teri zindagi kaa nishaan jo mile.

Meri mout ho jaye BE NISHAAN..

Main khud ko tujh may de doon..

Tujhe paa kar khud ko kho doon..

Mujhe tere wajood kaa nishaan jo mile..

Tou wajood ho jaye mera BE NISHAAN...!!

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So how was it??

Please give your reviews so I can know if I should share it with you guys or not..

Soha!!!

Edited by Sohad3fan - 12 years ago

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prabhjot ARMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

res
main b likhti hoo but kabhi post nahi ki

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Soha

@-Soha-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aroma.arsha
res
main b likhti hoo but kabhi post nahi ki

Unres jaldi kar..

And apni bhi tou post kiya kar naa...

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

res
unres
poem di
seriously
i mean u r an aming poetess di
apna yeh talent humse kyu chupa kar rakha
but
der aaye durust aaye
i m so happy u finally ahve cum out of ur shell and postsd it
it is fantastic di
honestly just wonderful
i cant believe this
u wrote sucha wonderous poem
gr8 work di
it is truly a work that shud be appreciated
kudos to u di for it
honestly amzing
🤗
🤗
🤗
and
👏
👏
👏
di i suggets u to make it ur poem thred where u can update ur poems wenevr u want to it wud fe amazing to read them
do think abt it

Edited by jas112 - 12 years ago

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sohad3fan

Unres jaldi kar..
And apni bhi tou post kiya kar naa...

kabhi scoha nahi🤔 karti hoo yar is waqt ain comment reply kar rhi hoo then karti hoo pakka 😆

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madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res :-D. . . . . .
Unres :-D. . . . . . . . .
Wow. . .wow. . .wow. . . . . .
Soha. . . . .
M shockd. . . . .
Wow. . .u write poems 2?
OMG. .its a ful suprise yr. . . . .
And the poem. . .
Its superb. . . .
Lovd it. . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Keep writing such awsome poems. . . . . . .
And a requst. . . .
Plz,mere liye ek poem likhegi kya??plz. . .
Just. .a requst. . . .
If no interestd. .then its totaly ok. .with. .sachie. . .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago

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Soha

@-Soha-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

kabhi scoha nahi🤔 karti hoo yar is waqt ain comment reply kar rhi hoo then karti hoo pakka 😆

Ok😊

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prabhjot ARMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukumari
Res

tu ithey b pohanch gyi buwahhh🤣

@Jass yaar tuney abhi tak merey OS pey comment nahi kiya why ?😳

@soha i will jaldi abhi mahiya os pey comment replying 😆

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Soha

@-Soha-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jas112
res
unres
poem di
seriously
i mean u r an aming poetess di
apna yeh talent humse kyu chupa kar rakha
but
der aaye durust aaye
i m so happy u finally ahve cum out of ur shell and postsd it
it is fantastic di
honestly just wonderful
i cant believe this
u wrote sucha wonderous poem
gr8 work di
it is truly a work that shud be appreciated
kudos to u di for it
honestly amzing
🤗
🤗
🤗
and
👏
👏
👏
di i suggets u to make it ur poem thred where u can update ur poems wenevr u want to it wud fe amazing to read them
do think abt it