AsMud SS : Opposite Attractss [Note - page 43] 1-11-2014 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
nice part.
liked Asad and Ayaan's bonding.
cont soon.
eager for Asmud's meeting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Mansi030493



Thank U Rabz Urmm Sorry I didnt Recognise U R U Rabz Mallik ?? 😳



yes :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sakshilksg

nice part.

liked Asad and Ayaan's bonding.
cont soon.
eager for Asmud's meeting.



Thnx :) Will continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44


Sorry Dear I m quite busy So Next update will be next week :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Preeti_ar_kj

i will edit it tmrw :p since i hv to give u long cmnts toh thoda wait kar :p



LOL I Dnt Wanna See Anything Nw 😊 Yaha Pe Edit Mat Kariyo aab New Cmnt hi karna Yaha Dhundhne me Problem hotii he Mujhe 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok time to comment...

after reading few cmnts i thought family part hai toh thoda boring hoga :p bt i was wrong.. it was absoulatly amazinggg . and u wrote the family scences very well👏
i loved it spcly asad-ayan-ammi scence. nw I'm curious to knw abt asad's past.
and asad gonna stay at kumud's home thats going to be intresting.😳
and i want next part to be full of asad and kumudd.so plzzz continueee sooon😎
gr8 job👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Preeti_ar_kj

ok time to comment...

after reading few cmnts i thought family part hai toh thoda boring hoga :p bt i was wrong.. it was absoulatly amazinggg . and u wrote the family scences very well👏
i loved it spcly asad-ayan-ammi scence. nw I'm curious to knw abt asad's past.
and asad gonna stay at kumud's home thats going to be intresting.😳
and i want next part to be full of asad and kumudd.so plzzz continueee sooon😎
gr8 job👍🏼

Urmmm Asad Ke Past Me Esa Kuch Khas Nhii He So Itna Curious Mat Ho :P Abt Asad-Kumud Urmmm Shayad U Will Get Some Of AsMud Nt Sure :p N Thank U For UR Honestt Reply
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3 : INST. - 3

Recape : Asad's Life Style ...Dilshaad Called Dugba Bt She Gave Phn To Asad ...N Otherside Kumud Pick Up dPhn ...

KUMUD : Hello..

ASAD : Hello Kya Main Girl Frnd ...Urmm Dugba Mausi Se Bat Kar Sakta Hun ??

KUMUD : Jee ??

ASAD : Kya Aap Dugba Mausi Ko Phn Denge Plz I Want To Talk To Her...

KUMUD : Han Ek Min... Was Abt Too Call Badi Maa Bt Stopped [Ek Min Ye Hai Kaun ??]

KUMUD : Aap Kaun Ho ?? Aur Aapko Unse Kya Kam He ??

ASAD : Main Asa...[suddenlyy Stopped N Thinking To Him Self : noWhy I M Telling My Name to ths Girll]

ASAD : Dekhiye Aapko Usse Kya Lena-Dena ?? Aap Plz Dugba Mausi Ko Bulayiye Mujhe Unse Kuch Important Bat Karnii He ...Pata Nhii Kese Naukar Rakh Liye He Girlfrnd Ne ...

KUMUD's Mouth Dropped Open Hearing Ths...

KUMUD : Hwww Kya Kaha Tumne ???

ASAD : Apko Sunayii Kam Deta He Kya ?? Mene Kaha Dugba Mausi Ko Phn Do ...

KUMUD : Aur Uske Bad ??

ASAD : Uske Bad ??

KUMUD : Urghhh

ASAD : Ohh Mene Kaha Pata Nhii kese Pagall Naukar Rakhe Hue He Dugba Mausi Ne ...

KUMUD : Tummm Na Urghhh Main Tumhe Chodungii Nhiii ...Tumharii Itniii Himmatt Ki Mujhe ...

Bt She Heard Bip Bip...Call Was Ended ...Asad Cut The Call ...N Here Kumud Was Angryy N Furiousss !!

KUMUD [to Herself] : Usne Mujhe Naukar Kaha ?? Mujheee ?? Kumud Vidhyachatur Desai Ko ?? Uskii Itnii Himmattt Agar Mere Samne Hota Na To Uska Wo Haal Kartii Kii Zindagii Bharr Yaad Rakhta ...Dobo Kahi No Huhhh...

KHAN MANSION

Asad Cut The Call N Dilshaad Came .

DILSHAAD : Kya Hua Asad ?? Tumne Dugba Se Bat Bhii kar Lii ?? Rakh Kyun Diya Mujhe Bhii Bat Karnii Thii .

ASAD : Ammi Aapne Kise Phn LagayaTha Koi Pagal Ladkii Thii Bat Hii Nhii Sun Rahii Thii ...Kese Naukar Rakhe Hue He Girl Frnd ne ...

DILSHAAD : Asad Unke Ghar Me Koi Naukar Nhii He Dugba Ko Sab Kam Khud Hii Karna Achcha Lagta He Tumne Kisse Bat Kii Naam Nhii Pucha Uska ?? Mene Number To Sahi Hii Lagaya Tha...

ASAD : Naam To Nhii Pucha Mene...
Dilshaad Take Phn N Dialed NumberAgain...

DESAI BHAVAN :

Kumud Was Talking Wid Herself ...Dugba Saw Her N Came Too Her...

DUGBA : Aree Kumud Ye Akele Akele Kya Badbada Rahi He ?? Tune Fir Se Kavita Likhana Shuru Kar Diya Kya ?? Ketliii Vaar Kidhu che Aa Chokrii ne Ye Sab Kam Apne Kamre Me Bethkar Kiya Karr Koi Dekhega To Kahega Ye Ladkii Pagal Ho Gayii He ...

KUMUD : Badiii Maaa !!

Seeing Her Face Badima Realised Sumthing Is Wrong...

DUGBA : Shu Thayu Kumud ?? [Kya Hua He Kumud ??]

KUMUD : Pata Nhii Badii Ma Kisi Pagall Aur Saduu Ladke Ka Phn Tha Aapke Bare Me Puch Raha Tha Mene Usse Pucha Kya Kam He to Bata Hii Nhii Raha Tha N Pata he Usne Kya Kaha ?? Kehne Laga Kii aapne Kese Naukarr Rakh Liye He urghhh Usne Mujhe Naukar Kaha Badii Maa Main Use Chodungii nhiii...

DUGBA : shant Ho Ja Kumud !! Pehle Ye To Bata Wo Ladka Tha Kaun ?? Kya Naam He Uska ??

KUMUD : Naam ?? Mene Pucha Badii Maa Bt Usne Bataya Hii Nhii Bus Ek Hii Bat Bole Ja Raha Tha Kii Dugba Mausii Ko Phn Do...

Suddenlyy Phn's Ring Started Againnn...

KUMUD : Jarur Use Pagal Ka Hii Phn Hoga Badii Maa Aabhii Dekhtii Hun Usee...Was Abt To PickUp Call Bt Badii Maa Stop her

BADI MAA : Kumud Tu Ruk Main Dekhtii hun ...

She Pick Up The Call

DILSHAAD : Hello Kya Main Dugba SeBat Kar Saktii Hun Plz ??

DUGBA : Divya ??? [ i Hope U All Remembered Divya is Dilshaad's Real Name :p ]

DILSHAAD : Dugba ?? Itne Salo Bad Bhii Meri Awaz Pehchan Kese Li Tune ??

DUGBA : Kese Bhul Saktii Hun Teri Awaz Ko Sara Bachpan Yahii Awaz Ke Sath Guzara He Maine...

N Both Laughed...

Asad Smiled Seeing Dilshaad N Kumud Was Giving Weiardo Expressionss Seeing Badi Maa ...

DILSHAAD : Kesi Ho ?? Vidhya Bhai Kese he ?? Aur Sab Bachche ?? Sab Kesa Chal Raha He ??

DUGBA : Bachpan Kii Eksathhh SawalPuchne Kii Aadat Aab Tak Gayii Nhii Na Teri ?? Vidhya Bhaii Thk He Aur Bachche ?? Dilshaad Begam 12 saal Bit Gayee Sare Bacche Aab Bade Ho Gaye he...

DILSHAAD : Sahii Kaha Magar Bachche Kitne Bhii Bade Ho Jaye Hamare Liye To Bachche Hii Rahenge Na ??

DUGBA : Hann Wo Bat To He...WahaSab Kese He ?? Asad , Nikhat , Ayaan, Nazma Sab Thk He ?? Aur Rashid Miyan Kese he ??

DILSHAAD : Yaha Bhii Sab Thk He Asad London Se Wapis Aa Gaya He NRashid Ka Achcha Hath Bata Raha He... Nikhat Kii Sagayii Ho Gayii He Mene Vidhya Bhai Ko Phone Bhii Kia Tha Magar Sab Kuchh Itnii jaldii hua Kii vidhyabhaii Aa Nhii Sake ...AyaanAur Nazma College Kar Rahe he Ayaan Bahot Badmaashh He

ASAD whispered Ammii Rehne Dijiyena...

DILSHAAD : Han Han Asad Miyann Aapse To Aapke Chote Bhai Ke Khilaf Ek Shabd Bhii Suna Nhii Jata !!

DUGBA Smiled To Hear Their Convo N Said : Asad Bhii To Bachpan Me Ese Hii Badmaash Tha Na... Kitna Pareshaan Karta tha muje...

DILSHAAD : Han Dugba Use 1 MahineMe Hii Kitnaa Pareshan Kar Diya Tha Usne Sabko Aur Khas Kar Ke Vidhyabhaii Ko Aur Ek Barr To Unkii Hisab Wahii Ko Fad Kar Plane Bana Diya Tha Use Din Kitna Danta Tha Sabke Samne Unhone Asad Ko Tabse Asad Vidhya Bhai Se Bht Darta He ,,,
Edited by Mansi030493 - 12 years ago

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