AsMud SS : Opposite Attractss [Note - page 43] 1-11-2014 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: youth_showsfan


hey interesting start

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nd f possible plz give a bit longer update 😊



Thanx 😃 abt Update I M Sorryyy I m Using IF From Celll N Ths Is Maximum Space 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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seriously you are writing a ss on asad and kumud.im super happy.haven't read the part yet...will tell you once I finish reading.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Will Update Till Tonight Nurshad 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_kash

seriously you are writing a ss on asad and kumud.im super happy.haven't read the part yet...will tell you once I finish reading.



Thank U 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyy Frndsss I M Here 😆

Thank U Everyone For All Ur Support N For Encouraging Me too Write furthor :)

Sorryyy Guysss I m New Here Soo Cantt PM anyone :(

NOTE : As I M Posting FF From Cell N My Phn Supports 5000 letters Onlyy So I Divided Part 2 In 3 Installments .So Kindlyy Note It N Dnt Forget To Read Any Of Inst. Other Wise U Wont Understand In Story 😕

PART 2 : INST. - 1



At Bhopal :
One Dashinggg Smartt Young Man Was Working On His Laptop In His Luxurious Car !!
Car Stopped On Traffic Signal , One Boy Came With Flowers N Started ToReq Driver To Buy Some Roses .
BOY - Sabjii , Ye Gulab Le Lo Ekdum Taze He ...
DRIVER : Aage Jao Hame Koi Gulab Nhii Lene
BOY: Sabjii Apkii Biwi Ke Liye Le Lo vo khush Ho Jayegii
Driver(irritated n Quite Loudly) : MeriBiwi Ko Bhii Nhi Pasand Samaj Me Nhii Aata Tujhe Aage Ja Yaha Se .
Tht Voice Broke Tht Young Man's Concentration On Work . Tht Young Man to Driver : Ramesh , Window . As Per Instuctions Driver Open Glasses Of Back Side N Just After Tht Boy Came Behind N Started To Req Tht Young Man . BOY : Sabjii Ye Dekho Bhtt Acchche Gulab He Aapkii Biwi Ko Bhtt Pasand Aayenge .
THT YOUNG MAN : Merii Aab Tak Shaadii Nhii Huii He
N Boy's Face Fell He Was Abt too Go Bt Tht Young Man Stopped Him N Buy All Flowers From Him N Gave Him 1000 Rs.
BOY : Sabjii Mere Pas Chutte Nhi He .
THT YOUNG MAN : Rakh Lo Jarurt Nhi He .
Tht Car Reached To KHAN MANSION .
THT YOUNG MAN Came Out From Car N Abt To Go Bt Saw Flowers He Took Tht N Went To Home or Can Say BIG Palace !!
In Kitchen Around 45-50 Year Old Beautiful Lady Was Making Dinner . Yess Thr Were Almostt above 50 Servants Thr Bt Dinner Hamesha Vo Hii Banatii he Coz She Loves Too Cook Food For Her Family . Aur Sirf Dinner Ek Esa Time Hota Tha Jab SaraPariivaar Eksath hota Tha Except One!!
Tht Young Man Saw lady N Went To her N Said : Assalaam walekum Ammi !!
LADY : walekum assalam ASAD !! aa Gaye Tum Jao Fresh Ho Jao Tumhare Abbu Bhi Aate Hii Hoge Dinner Bus Banne Hii Wala He ...
[Yesss u Guessed Righttt Tht Young Man Was Ourr Hero Asad Ahmed Khan n Tht Beautiful Lady Was His Ammi Dilshaad Khan !! ]
Bt He Was Standing Thr Onlyy ...
DILSHAAD : Kya Hua Asad ?? Kuch Kam He ??
ASAD : Ammi Vo Urmm Vo...(Its Asad's Habit Whenever He is Confuseor lieing He use to Stammer )
Wo Ye Giving Her bunch of Flowers Wo Ek bachche ne kaha so i bought it for u n ...suddenlyyy Bowl Fall from Dilsaahd's Hand ...Asad Closed his Eyes In Irritation(typical asad's Style)
Dilshaad Took Flowers N Kissed His Forhead n He Went To His Room Saying He Need To Change...
Dilshaad Stood Thr With Tears Wid Smile ...Rashid Came From Outside N Saw Dilshaad N Asked Who Gave Ths??
DILSHAAD : Asad..
Rashid Was Surprised To Hear Ths N Suddenlyy Dilshaad Hugged Him N said : Hamara Asad Wapis Aa Raha He Rashid ...Hamara Purana Asad Laut Raha He ...
RASHID : Han Dilshaad ...(in His Mind :Hamara Asad Kabhii Nhii Laut Sakta Dilshaad Kabhii Nhiii ...WO JATE JATE HAMARE ASAD KO BHI LE GAYII !!! )
At Night On Dining Table Everyone Was Thr Except Two Persons Ayaan & Asad !! Asad Came Down From HisRoom Greeted Everyone N Sat On HisChair While Dinner Rashid & Asad Were Talking Abt office Project n Suddenlyy Dilshaad Frown Seeing her Asad & Rashid Asked her wat Happened ??
DILSHAAD : Office me time Kam hota he kya ?? Atleastt Ghar pe Too Kuch achchi bate Kiya karo ... Yaha aap dono he aur Waha Wo Chote Miyan Jinka Koii Pata hii nhii hota Hotel Samaj ke Rakha he Ise Ghar ko Sirf Rat Ko Sone Ke liye hii aate he yaha Sab !! Aane Do aaj Ayaan ko achchii khabar Letii hun Uskii ...
Everyone Sensed Tht Aaj Lady Hitlarr Ka mood Kuch jyada hii kharab he Everyone Started To eat Quitelyy ..
Suddenlyy Rashid Spoke To Dilshaad , Dilshaad Main Soch Raha Tha Ki Ratnagiri Me Jo School He Hame Use Aab Badhana Chahiye Agar Hum Wahii Highschool Bhii Bana Denge To Waha Ke Baccho Ko Bahar PadhneNhii Jana Padega
DILSHAAD : Rashid Ye To Bht Achchi Bat He Ye Khayal Hame Pehle Kyun Nhii Aaya ...
RASHID : Sahii Kaha Tumne Business Ke Chakkar Main School Ka Khayal HiiNhii Raha ...Mene Waha Ke Principal Se Kal Hii Bat Ki He Wo Chahti he Ki Hum Ek bar School Dekh le Aur Fir Decide kare Ki Hame Highschool Kaha Banvanii Chahiye , So Asad Kal Tumhe Ratnagiri Jana Hoga .
ASAD : Lekin Abbu Yaha par Sab Aap Akele Kese ..
RASHID : Yaha Pe Main Sab Sambhal Lunga Aur Imraan Bhii To He Na ...Wo School Dilshaad Ka Sapna He Asad...
ASAD : Thik He Main Mr.Sharma Se Keh Karr Flight Ki Ticket Book Karwa Deta Hun .
RASHID : Nhii Asad Ek Kam Karo Tum Car Le Kar Hii Jao Tumhe Waha Kuch Din Rukna Padega Aur Wo Ganv He So Aane-Jane Ke Liye Kuch Hoga Nhii So Apnii Hii Car Hogii To Tum Kahi bhii ja Sakte Ho.
ASAD : Thik He Mujhe Kab Nikalna Hoga ??
RASHID : Kal Sham Ko Nikal Jana Thk He ??
ASAD : Ok .
Everyone Went To Their Respective Rooms After Dinner .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2 : INST. - 2

Next Morning Asad Was Coming Down From Upstairss Bt Suddenlyy He Stopped Seeing Ayaan Sitting Downstairss On Couch . He Went To Him N Said Good Morning !!
AYAAN : Good Morning Bhai Jaan .
ASAD :Kya bat He Aaj Ayaan Miyan Subah 8 baje Ready ho kr Bethe he ??
AYAAN : Wo Bhai Jaan urmm ...
Asad Sat Beside Him n asked Kya Bat He Ayaan ??
AYAAN :Wo Kal Rickey (Ayaan's Frnd) Sabko Bata raha tha kii Uske bhai ne usko nayii Bike Kharid ke Dii To Vo urmm...
ASAD : ok Main Aaj Out Of Bhopal Ja raha Hun So Main Mr.Sharma se Bat kar lunga tum Kal Ja Karr Apnii Pasand Walii Bike Le lena thk he ??
Ayaan Suddenlyy Jumped Wow BhaiiJann Aap World ke Besttt Bhai Jaan Ho I love U So Muchh After All Bhai Ka Dill DARIYA-DASH-SAMUNDAR Hai...
ASAD :Ayaan Bus Aab Maska Lagane Kii Jarurtt Nhii he Kal Ja Kar Bike Kharid Lena ...
Dilshad Came From Behind : Kya Kharidne Kii bat chal rahii he ??
AYAAN : Wo Ammii Bhai Jaan keh rahe the Kii Mujhe Aab nayii bike Le lenii Chahiyee...
Asad Glares at Him Bt he Said Sorry Holding His Earss...
Dilshaad didnt notice ths : Asad Abhii6 mahine pehle to new Bike kharidi thii Aab kharidne kii kya jarurt he ??
AYAAN : Kya Ammii Wo Bike aab Khatara ho gayii he aur hamare Pas To Paiso ka samundar he agar ek bowl kam bhii ho gaya to kya farkk pad jayegaa ...
N Dilshaad got angryy hearimgg thssshe started to scold Ayaan n Hold hisearsss n said Aurr ye bhii matt bhulo ki ye samundarr tumhare Abbu aur bhai kii mehnat se bana he ...
ASAD : rehne dijiye na ammi ye sab kuch ayaan ka hii to he na ...uske enjoy karne ke din he abhii enjoy nhii karega to kab karega ...
AYAAN : exactlyy
Dilshaad was abt to say smthng bt
Nikhat came thr : Assalaam walekumAmmi , Assalaam walekum Bhai jann, Kya Bat he Ayaan Aaj Aap itnii subah subah uth gaye...
Asad-Ammi : walekum assalam Nikhat .
AYAAN : Kya Bat He Nikhat ji Aaj aap bhii badii jaldii uth gayii Lagta He Kalrat ko Der Tak Imraan miyan se Phn Par Bat Nhii Huii He ...
Asad-Ammi-Nikhat : Ayaannn !!
Dilshaad Again holds His Ears N Giving Him Lacture Hw To behave Wid Elderss Ayaan Req To Asad Bt Asad Said He Cantt do Anythingg NwToday U R So Gone Brotherr !! Ayaan Looked At Nikhat For Help Bt She Denied Bt After Asad's Req
She asked To Dilshaad : Ammi RehneDo na Aaj Bhai Jaan ko Ratnagiri Janahe unkii Bag Bhii Packk Karnii he ...
DILSHAAD : Aree Hann Main To Bhul Hii Gayii Thii Asad Tum Waha Ratnagiri me Dugba Ke Ghar Rahoge !
ASAD : Bt Ammi Main Vaha...Main KisiHotel Me Reh Lunga Dnt Worry ..
DILSHAAD: Nhii Asad Tum Dugba Ko Jante Ho Na Agar Use Pata Chala Tum Ratnagiri me ho kar bhii Hotel me Ruke hue ho to use Bhtt Bura Lagega Aur Main jantii hun tum ye Bilkul nhii chahoge ...
ASAD : Thk He Ammi Jesa Aap Kahe .
DILSHAAD : Mainn Aaj Hii Dugba Ko Bata dungii ki tum kal waha aa rahe ho Wo bhtt khush ho jayegii .
Dilshaad N Nikhat Were Abt to Go In Kitchen Bt Ayaan Stopped Thm : Ek Min Mujhe Aapse Ek Sawal Puchna HeAmmi .
DILSHAAD : Abhi Nhii Ayaan Apne Faltu Sawal bad me Puch Lena Abhii mujhe bht kam he .
AYAAN : No Ammii Ye Faltuu Sawall nhii He Hum Yaha Bhopal Main Rehtehe Bt Aapki Bestfrnd Ratnagiri me kese ??
Dilshaad N Nikhat Suddenly Stopped ,Asad Was AlSo Confused .
NIKHAT : Han Ammii Ise Bare me To Mene Kabhii Socha Hii Nhii
AYAAN : Sochne Ke Liye Dimaag Kii Zarurtt hotii he
ASAD : Ayaann !!
AYAAN : Ok Ok Ammi Batao Na
DILSHAAD Say As If She Is Living Those Moments Again...Kyunnki Main ratnagiri Se Hun . Mera Asli Name Divya Mehta He . Bachpan Me Jab 10 Saal ki thii tab Maa Guzar gayii Me apne Bapu ke sath Ratnagirime Rehtii thii . Aur School Me Dugba Merii Bestfrnd Thii Sarii Ratnagiri me Hamari Dostii Mashhoor thi .. Aage Kipadhayiii ke liye Main aur Dugba Ahmedabad Gaye Jaha Hamarii mulakat Rashid Se huii ...kab Wo Mulakate Dostii me badlii aur kab Dostii Pyaar me Pata hii nhii chala ... Jab bapu ko ye pata chala tab wo bhtt Naraz hue magar Dugba hamesha mere sath thii ... Aur AakhirMe Usne Bapu ko bhii mana hii liya Mene Aur Rashid Ne Nikaah kar Liya Aur Main Divya Se Dilshaad Ban Gayiimagar Rashid Ke Ghar wale Nhii Mane Aur Fir Rashid Apna Ek Business Kholna Chahte the Iseliye Hum Yaha Aa Gaye ... Tab se Hum Bhopal Me He ...Pichli Baar Jab Bapu Guzar Gaye Tab Hum Ratnagiri Gaye The ...Yaad He Tumhe Asad jab wahaSe Bhopal Wapis Aana tha tab kitnaaroye the tumm Fir Dugba ke kehne Par Tumhe Aur Nikhat ko School kii chuttiya Khatm hone Tak humne Wahii Rehne Diya Tha ...Ek Mahina Tum Wahii rahe The Aur Tum Unsab Ke Kitne Kareeb Aa Gaye the Khas Karke Dugba Ke Kya Kehte the tum Use ...(Trying To Remeber) Bt Ths Time Asad Spoke : Girl Friend N Tht Smile On His Face It Was Rare ...
DILSHAAD : Hann Asad Aur Uskii Girlfriend . Kitne Chote The Tum Aur Dugba Kitnii Badii Thii ...Smilieng... Magar uske bad Tum London Chale gaye aur fir Aa kar Business sambhalne lage 12 Saal Bad Tum Waha Jaoge Asad ...Dugba Bhtt Khush Hogii Tumhe Dekh kar ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2 : INST. - 3[ LAST INST. ]

DILSHAAD : Chalo Aab Breakfast Kar Lete He Bht Late Ho Gaya He .
At The Time of Breakfastt
Asad Was Abt to Eat Suddenlyy He Stopped .
ASAD : Ammi ...
DILSHAAD : Isse Pehle Asad Ki Tum Puchoo Kii Nazma Kaha He Main pehle Hii Bata Deti Hun Ki Wo So Rahii He So Behtar Hoga Kii Tum Breakfast kar lo nhi to office ke Liye Der Ho jayegii ...
N Asad Started To Eat N Everyone Smiled Seeing Him . It was Dailyy Routin Of Asad-Ammi Roz Asad Ammi Se Nazma Ke Bare Me PuchegaN She will Ans Same Thing Daily ...
Asad N Rashid Went Too Office .
At Office Dilsshad Remeinded Asad almost 25 times tht He need to Go Ratnagiri Today So Sham Ko 5 baje hii wo Office se Nikal Jaye ...
At Evening .
Asad Came To Home . Dilshaad Was On Phn . Nikhat Called Dilshaad For Some Help N Dilshaad asked Asad ToTake The Phn N Talk To Dugba .
Isse Pehle Ki Asad Kuch Kahe Dilshaad was Gone .
Dilshaad Called To Dugba To Tell tht Asad Is Coming Bt Nikhat Called So She Went Nw Reciever Was Wid Asad He Put Tht On His Ear Ring Was Going On...
At Ratnagiri
Kumud heard Phone Is Ringing ...Dugba Was In Kitchen N Her Bapu Was In Factoryy...He went To Take Phn...
Kumud : Hello ...
Precape :
Kumud : Usne Mujhe Naukarr Kaha ??Uskii Itniii Himmattt ?? Mujhe ?? Kumud Vidhyachaturr Desaii Ko Naukar Kaha...
Sadu , Dobo Huhhh
Thts It Guyss :p
Plzzz Do Cmnt Hows Itt ...I Knw its Quite Boringg Bt It was Needed For The Storyy . :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di...what can i say? Superb will be an insult to this part...it's too good...first the entry of our hero asad ahmed khan...awesome...he is alway like this..love to care about others then he gaye flower to dilshad..that was so sweet,..but then rashid and dilshad convo really interesting..what happened to asad? Want to know ? Then you show their family bonding...it's so sweet..i always wanted to see that in QH..and then u explained their frndship (dukhba and dilshaad) too good...awesome storyline di...and precap is hell interesting...asmud's 1st meeting...so curious and exited .. Post soon di..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di superb part... Its nt boring at all...hehe asad called her naukar...ab toh ratnagiri ki mail usse chorne wali nhi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nurshad.kajen

Di...what can i say? Superb will be an insult to this part...it's too good...first the entry of our hero asad ahmed khan...awesome...he is alway like this..love to care about others then he gaye flower to dilshad..that was so sweet,..but then rashid and dilshad convo really interesting..what happened to asad? Want to know ? Then you show their family bonding...it's so sweet..i always wanted to see that in QH..and then u explained their frndship (dukhba and dilshaad) too good...awesome storyline di...and precap is hell interesting...asmud's 1st meeting...so curious and exited .. Post soon di..



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