ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#831

expel; very scenic and yet very arshi. the game is on, baby :)

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Nina

@-Maggie-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#832

Wow! I am so glad I came across this...such a strong start to what promises to be an intriguing story!

Love Kushi's strong, calm and confident personality! Am hoping to see her fun loving nature come out in later chapters too. Love how Arnav is portrayed as well, and I am going to enjoy seeing how you handle his feelings/relationship with Kushi!

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#833

again awesm...theory...with brilliant practice...😉

justifying....

nafrat paas ane naa de..
muhabbat duur jaane na de...

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update sooonnn

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#834

Superb ! Fantastic! I am loving it.

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Mahnoor

@Lalaland222

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

I read the 3 chapters in a go. Really pissed at myself for being busy and not reading them!

I just love love love love the titles! Really its just amazing how you came up with them and also as they were part of the show and also.. how they match everything as to the chapters. :')

And chapter 3! Haayyee, why did you leave on such an important part. Please don't torture us poor little readers like that? Please? :(

And the amount of suspense is just too damn high man. Y U DO THIS? :O

I am EXTREMELY excited to know what was that has come to make them hate each other so much. And they are totally different from each other. Not a single common thing. ._.

Oh god, Shyam. I wonder what he is up to. I hope he isn't negative or will hang on for too long in this SS. :| Also Please disclose the past as soon as possible. Too eager to know. ^_^

Now I wonder what his condition is. O.o

The great ASR is going to put something big for sure now lets see what it is.

Really lovely! Your explanation is just excellent. You put every dot of feeling and thought in it. Beautifully written man! I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. Best of luck doll! :D

Edited by Lalaland222 - 12 years ago

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memyarshi

@memyarshi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

Story is intriguing enough...to give me sleepless night just like kkg & asr ...what is this venomous relationship???????
Do u even know that I am scratching my head and will pull my hair in some time...Hey update soon...Pls pls pls have mercy on us the poor reader...Kindly unveil the mystery soon...

Jokes apart...nicely written story as always... Love it...

Update asap...

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veil_of_roses

@veil_of_roses

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

One my fav FF 😊 I usually don't like political FF but this one is an exception⭐️

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Love the story but when u talk about the past it sounds so confusing wonder what excatly happened so basically Arnav cheated on Khushi with sheetal or is that the future and apparently Khusi did something wrong for which he hates her anyways love the update and plzzz update soon

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

I absolutely love the pace of your stories and this one is no different. What I loved most about this chapter is the little tidbits when they both self introspect how they really feel about each other. Both of them acknowledge that the other person is great at what they do, they also acknowledge their attraction for each other. But the pain and hurt from the past, gets their defences up and they go back to, 'I will hate you more than how much I like you,' kind of a thing.

So she will be visiting the US with him. I hope there will be lots of fiddling awl da tyme.

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sahada

@sahada

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#840

i FEEL AND AM loving the rushshsh tht their cute-meet brings forth n am addicted to it!!!! So superbly written this update E!!! I'm loving the way this fascinating and gripping story is unfolding E!!! SUper duper interestinnggg!! For real! L.O.V.I.N.G ITT!!!

Waaaiiting eagerlyyy for the nxt update =DDD