ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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arshifan91

@arshifan91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#821

Hi Juhi

Read all d chapters in one go !!! I must say u r one of d most talented writers in this forum. Not many writers will take such a heavy subject as POLITICS to express their views and u hav beautifully infused d characters of Arnav and Khushi in d game of politics.

Arnav as a health minister ?? and Khushi as his PA !!!!😃

I really think India definitely needs such young, dynamic and hot ministers !!!!!😉😛

The way d story has unfolded s really beautiful. I personally feel u hav done complete justice to d characters till now 👏 and i must say i hav a learnt a lot abt working of d ministries from ur story

U hav wonderfully described d way ministries operate in India with red tapism, corruption and how d funds hav been misused instead of using it for d welfare of ppl !!!!!!

I am looking forward for d next update and u r really bad 2 hav left this chapter at a cliffhanger !!😡

Thanks 4 d pm

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arshi21

@arshi21

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

If only SHE would accompany him...right ??

Good lord! Their attraction..their chemistry.. mind blowing! You've done such an amazing job of writing it all so beautifully!

I am loving it. I just CAN'T wait to know about their shared past AND for that prologue scene to come (yes, even when I detested it like anything) and how would Khushi react after that.

I just cannot wait for the next chapter! :)

PS: Sorry, got busy with college work and hence got a bit late to comment.

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Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

first thing is for making dis seem so real...

d way ur showing d hapennigs of indian politics is totalyy perfect!!

i guess u have done a lot of research for it!!'

i really appreciate it...

but inki ladai kab khatam hogi!!

mai toh expel ji ke dwara likhi gayi dhamekedar kiss ke intezaar mein hun!!

next will be khushi and arnav ki america trip i gues...

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#824

Excellent update Juhi !!! The story is unraveling at a wonderful pace and keeping us glued to our chairs . Anticipating the next update a soon as possible :)

Arnav is getting attracted to Khushi in spite of his strong opposition not to do so . He is strongly willing himself not to get attracted to her but it's way beyond him . Also Khushi is in the same predicament . Both Arnav and Khushi are hanging on to their past with threadbare ropes to avoid that attraction .

You have a wonderful way of bringing out the emotions of your characters . I am assuming he will demand she go to the US trip with him . If so looking forward for it .

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

Indispensable indeed... yet so much hatred due to the past... i feel they were real close to each other may be durin their childhood n dats the reason its hurtin Arnav even more ...

their gettin attracted to each other shows despite of the under lyin hatred derz still dat fondness which both of them r cravin for...

untill n unless v have many more Arnav jaise ministers in the cabinet n Khushi jaise bureaucrats , hamara desh aage tezi se aage nahi badegaa...

love the way , they r focusin on their work in developin the country settin aside their differences...

hats off to their vision of the country!!

superbly written Juhi :D

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arshifan91

@arshifan91

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

Forgot 2 wish in my comment

Belated Happy birthday Juhi 😊😊

Let all ur dreams come true and happiness stay in ur life hamesha !!!

Let ur writings continue 2 cast a spell on ur readers !!!!!!!!!