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Posted: 12 years ago
I really liked the story "tera hone laga hoon" because i always imagine a story like this and finally i get it 😊 from you ... ... ... i am very much happy today ... ... 😆 😆 😆 😆 and you know what i read the whole thread 1 and 2 in one day bcoze its veryy much interesting and now i m desperately waiting for the next update ... ... ... plss post it as early as you can
and a big round of aplause for your work its amazing 👏 👏 👏 👏
waiting waiting waiting ufff ye wait 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 28 : Past becomes cleared

"Sorry! Taani to call you here, but I don't have other option and you wanted to meet me urgently." Shivam says in apologizing tone

"How is your mom, Shivam?"

"She is sleeping right now, yesterday she had got her first cemo. So, she is feeling weak." Shivam exhales a deep breath, "now tell me your urgent reason of meeting me. I am worried. Is that bustard trying to hurt you again?"

Taani and Shivam are sitting in Rajpoot house's big dining room. When Shivam got the unexpected call from Taani, he became little surprised. But after that, both of them decided to meet in Shivam's place when Taani informed him that she urgently wanted to meet him and Shivam could not go anywhere for long leaving her mom alone in the house.

"Shivam, please stop it...he is my husband" Taani replies him back with firm and angry voice

"Yea, yea, I know you. Kali yug ki Sita ho tum. But, I am not your brother- in-law like Laxman and don't expect me to call you Bhabi ma, uske liye Bhai ko Ram jaisa hona parega" he gives a sarcastic smile to her.

"I know Shivam that both of you hate each other so much and I find so many reasons for it. Par naafraat itna bhi maat karo jisse do no kuch milega nahi. Both of you are more hurting people around you like me, like your mother. Enough of it now, please stop doing it for GOD's sake.."

"Why don't you do and tell your so called husband Taani? He thinks that I have snatched her mother from him, though I could not do anything. He always hates me and my parents. I am not the guilty. He started it and I will give it the end"

"What about Elakshi, Shivam? Would you like to say same thing for her also? Didn't you enjoy seeing him heartbroken? "For a fraction of moment his face becomes pale and he forgets to speak. His blank glance meets Taani's eye and he looks down. "Kyu? Bolti bandh? Look at me Shivam and tell me. Today I have come here to hear from you and meet her. I also want to know why she has left Reyaansh? Is it just because money or something else? Paisa aur payar ko ek saath tarazoo mein tola toh paisa vari par gaya"

"That was the big mistake of my life. Ela never loved me also, she only loved my money and I didn't make it out then. Jab pata chala toh bahut der ho chukka tha. She left me to marry some NRI business man when my father died and our family business condition went wrong." He pauses for a moment," Trust me Taani, I loved her very much and honestly, I was not so much great to sacrifice my love for my step brother. When she came to me, I accepted her. I never wanted to analyze her past, besides I knew that Reyaansh was her just best friend."

"Shivam, that girl dumped both of you and you are fighting with each other for her till now. Forget all your bitter past, start afresh Shivam. Your mom also want it, Reyaansh ke sath jhagra bandh karo. Don't invite more trouble, for your mother's sake. Isse kisiko kuch nahi milega sivaye pain ke"

"I can do anything for my mother. Her last wish is really important to me Taani. But at the same time I know Reyaansh Singhania, he will never ever accept us." Shivam explains

"We can't leave our hope like this.."

"Arree, Taani beti. When did you come? Why anyone has not informed me? You have come to meet me nah?" Vaishnabi has come to the place where both of them are talking. She has seen Taani and faded eyes sparks in joy. Taani goes to her and touches her feet. She holds her arms and kisses on her forehead. The last day treatment has started leaving its mark on her faces.

"How are you?" Taani asks her health, cautiously avoiding any salutation

"I am counting my last few days of my life, theek hi hoo. You come with me, I want to give you something. That day when you met me, I forgot to give you" she takes her to her room. She opens the drawer and takes out a pair of an elegant bangle from it. This seems very old and heritage piece of gold with diamond curved." This is our ancestral, I mean, Puchhteni Kangan which was given by Babuya's grand mom to me as the elder son's wife. I am not the appropriate person to hold this anymore, actually I have lost that right many days before when I left that house, but still it remains with me. And now, I am giving it to you."

"But how can I..If he comes to know.." Taani hesitates

"Koi kuch nahi bolega. I am giving you. Don't you listen to me?" she asks in a moist voice.

Taani thinks for a moment, after that she takes it from her. It is Singhania family's thing which she needs to keep safe. That means she has to be much more responsible towards it. On the other hand, she is little apprehensive thinking about Singhania members' response of it.

***

On day before Diwali, Taani catches Simmi is crying in her room. After that incident, Simmi is keeping herself aloof from Taani, but when Taani sees her in trouble, she can't control herself except to enquire about it.

"What happened Simmi? Why are yoy crying? Please don't hide anything from me" Taani keeps her hand on Simmi's shoulder. Simmi tries to hide herself and wants to go out from the room.

"Don't run away Simmi, tell me right now. Otherwise I have to tell your brother. Kya huya? Is someone disturbing you?" Taani asks her. She intentionally doesn't take Vickey's name. She knew that unless Reyaansh's name she won't tell her the fact.

"Bhabi, you were right. Vicky is not a good guy. We, I and my friend Neil, exposed Vicky in the college. He has relationship with many other girls at a time. He is not a rich guy, he borrows his dresses and all for showing off. Thank You Bhabi. Tell Piyu to stay from him." Simmi embraces Taani with a teary eyes.

"Please stop crying Simmi. Don't worry, I will handle Piyu as well. Thank God that you were able to break his fake mask. I am happy that I can save your future" Taani helps to wipe her tears

"bhabi, aur ek baat hai. Please don't say it to Bhai, otherwise he will scold me"

"Kya baat hai Simmi? Please tell me everything. I can help you"

"Bhabi, he is black mailing me with some of our old intimate pictures and few of my personal pictures which he had taken during our courtship period. He wants me to marry him otherwise he is threatening to make it MMS."

The word MMS shakes Taani very much; she feels scared because she also know the effect of it very much. Though in her case, it was manipulated and restricted within few people. But in Simmi's case, it can be turned to a vital thing, if not properly taken care from now.

"What? Simmi, we should inform police now and the family members, at least your brother. This case can be dangerous."

"No Bhabi, no..I can't. I had a talk with Vicky. I have made him understood that everything is finished now between him and me and I have convinced him. He agreed me to handover all the evidences. He just wants me to meet for once. Tomorrow, Diwaali k raat, I will meet him and will take all of this from him. Let's see if the lights of diyas can bring happiness in my life or not.."

"I am afraid Simmi, I will go with you. I will not tell anyone now as you are saying that you have managed him. But the fact is the person like Vicky will not let you go easily. I am with you Simmi." Taani assures her.

***

***Diwali Ki Raat***

All the Singhania Mansion is looking like a newly married bride with the different types and colors of lights. The main building is decorated with the gorgeous clothes and flowers. All members including the servants are wearing the new clothes and busy with welcoming guests. This is occasion when the entire Singhania employees are being invited at Singhania mansion so that they also can be felt like part of the family. Gayetri devi and all other ladies of the house are now busy to arrange the worshipping of Mata Laxmi. Taani looks gorgeous in her Red colored Lehenga saree. Her matching bindi and sparkling jewelry has completed the new bride look. She looks elegant, she looks divine, she looks pretty. On the other hand, Mr Reyaansh Singha tries to decide when to give his gift to his wife. He finds himself confused to take a small decision to give him directly or to ask granny's help. He chooses a White colored Sherwani Kurta for wearing tonight, a simple one. His preference always revolves around black and white until Taani comes to paint the wall of his heart as well as for the room.

He feels to need a rehearsal before going in front of Taani with that chain. Because he wants to make sure that he doesn't become a subject to laughing later. He takes out the box and stares at it. His dreams go few steps more and he imagines himself to help it wearing around her soft neck. He feels that the pendant looks most beautiful in her body only. He comes back into reality when some one from down stair calls his name for attending the puja.

Pre Cap - Taani falls down on the ground sense less by calling "Rrreeeyyaaannnssshhh"

Rey takes her unconscious body on his lap, he doesn't want to waste a moment to call a doctor. His white sherwani turns red with the splashes of her blood. She is lying on his lap, the left side of the body is badly damaged. Simmi stands silently near the place.

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A/N - Sorry Guys, I am now irregular with the updates. Sorry for this short and boring update. I will update next when I get enough time as it can hamper the quality of the story which I don't want. if you want me to continue it, please leave your comments always, I of course do read it all, though it's diff to answer you individually now.Apology again for it. Please do check the VM in the first page. And yea, the next epi is the starting of climax, after that jhakkas lowe estory of TaaRey for 2-3 updates and after that happy ending!!! Thanks for loving this and me. I love you all.

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rasgulla, atlast you updated😃

par itna chotu sa update😡

anyways I understand 😊

coming to the update it was short and sweet.

atlast Vicky is exposed and Simmi knows😊

now Piyu has to know😉

the last scene where Rey practising 😆

waiting for the next update😃

PS. I'm first🥳
Edited by Jhanvi_TaaRey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waooo update was amazingg..
Waited too long for it debu
Bt its k..
Lakin the update was small this time.
Plz nxt time give a bariii wali update plz.

So coming to the update i am bit scared when rey wil find out taani went there he wil be so angry on her..bt loved the way taani tried to convinece shivam.hope the bros bond gets strong soon

Nd then i am soo gald vicky gt exposed.poor simmi nw its pihus turn to see the real face of vicky.

While rey practising to give that pendent to taani was super cute..hope he gives it to her.

Nd the precap OMGGG ...its is scaring me to mmuchhh.plz galdi se update ker do plZ as am really wanna knw wt happeend to taani ...nd rey wt wil his reaction be...nd hw come pihu was there...cnt wait plz galdi se update karoo plz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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di!!!
kya reveal kiya hai past ko!!!

"She is sleeping right now, yesterday she had got her first cemo. So, she is feeling weak." Shivam exhales a deep breath, "now tell me your urgent reason of meeting me. I am worried. Is that bustard trying to hurt you again?"


khud ko toh apne bhai k liye izzat nhi hai and how dare hi talk to taani like tht? ussne soch b kaise liya ki taani tolerate kregi?


"Shivam, please stop it...he is my husband"

ye reaction toh obvious tha! rey bhi khud ki beizzati bardaash krlega but taani nahi kr saqti... pyaar jo ho gaya!!!


"Yea, yea, I know you. Kali yug ki Sita ho tum. But, I am not your brother- in-law like Laxman and don't expect me to call you Bhabi ma, uske liye Bhai ko Ram jaisa hona parega" he gives a sarcastic smile to her.



sach me situation ko dekha jaaye toh galti donon ki hai! and yeh baat sabko pata hai! so finally he realised taani is kalyug ki sita! and who wants him to call her bhabi???


"I know Shivam that both of you hate each other so much and I find so many reasons for it. Par naafraat itna bhi maat karo jisse do no kuch milega nahi. Both of you are more hurting people around you like me, like your mother. Enough of it now, please stop doing it for GOD's sake.."



hmmm... kitni achi tarah explain ki hai!!! koi bhi itni safai se samjhaane ki koshish nahi kr saqta, but some morons wont understand, kya karey???!


"What about Elakshi, Shivam? Would you like to say same thing for her also? Didn't you enjoy seeing him heartbroken? "For a fraction of moment his face becomes pale and he forgets to speak. His blank glance meets Taani's eye and he looks down. "Kyu? Bolti bandh?


well well what a question!!! taaliyaan!!! and this way finally that bitch reality is revealed.. donon bhaiyon ko nhi choda ussne! urghhh uske wajahse dononke beech nafrat aur badh gayi!!!


"That was the big mistake of my life. Ela never loved me also, she only loved my money and I didn't make it out then. Jab pata chala toh bahut der ho chukka tha. She left me to marry some NRI business man when my father died and our family business condition went wrong." He pauses for a moment," Trust me Taani, I loved her very much and honestly, I was not so much great to sacrifice my love for my step brother. When she came to me, I accepted her. I never wanted to analyze her past, besides I knew that Reyaansh was her just best friend."



well i feel both of u brothers deserve it for whatever u both have done!!!


"I can do anything for my mother. Her last wish is really important to me Taani. But at the same time I know Reyaansh Singhania, he will never ever accept us." Shivam explains

"We can't leave our hope like this.."



exactly, tum toh taani ka saath do!!!


She opens the drawer and takes out a pair of an elegant bangle from it. This seems very old and heritage piece of gold with diamond curved." This is our ancestral, I mean, Puchhteni Kangan which was given by Babuya's grand mom to me as the elder son's wife. I am not the appropriate person to hold this anymore, actually I have lost that right many days before when I left that house, but still it remains with me. And now, I am giving it to you."

"But how can I..If he comes to know.." Taani hesitates

"Koi kuch nahi bolega. I am giving you. Don't you listen to me?" she asks in a moist voice




well yeh toh hona hi tha kisi na kisi din... i thought something like this when vaishnabi entered the story itself... finally usko uska sammaan milgaya bangles se hi sahi!!!


"Bhabi, you were right. Vicky is not a good guy. We, I and my friend Neil, exposed Vicky in the college. He has relationship with many other girls at a time. He is not a rich guy, he borrows his dresses and all for showing off. Thank You Bhabi. Tell Piyu to stay from him." Simmi embraces Taani with a teary eyes.

"Bhabi, he is black mailing me with some of our old intimate pictures and few of my personal pictures which he had taken during our courtship period. He wants me to marry him otherwise he is threatening to make it MMS."


if u ask me, jo hota hai acche ke liye hota hai, unless taani wont get into some or the other prob, rey dil se yeh nahi maanega that he loves her so much nd she is everything for him... ab vicky ke bacche... get ready!!!


"I am afraid Simmi, I will go with you. I will not tell anyone now as you are saying that you have managed him. But the fact is the person like Vicky will not let you go easily. I am with you Simmi." Taani assures her.



aakhir bhabi hoti kisliye! ab bhabhi hone ka pakka farz nibhaane waali hai taani, but finally face bhi wohi karegi na cosequences! agar rey theek se uska khayaal nahi rakha na... toh bhool jao ki main rey ki fan thi!!


Gayetri devi and all other ladies of the house are now busy to arrange the worshipping of Mata Laxmi. Taani looks gorgeous in her Red colored Lehenga saree. Her matching bindi and sparkling jewelry has completed the new bride look. She looks elegant, she looks divine, she looks pretty. On the other hand, Mr Reyaansh Singha tries to decide when to give his gift to his wife. He finds himself confused to take a small decision to give him directly or to ask granny's help. He chooses a White colored Sherwani Kurta for wearing tonight, a simple one. His preference always revolves around black and white until Taani comes to paint the wall of his heart as well as for the room.


kaash me yeh sab dekh paati, aapke muh me ghee shakkar!!!


He feels to need a rehearsal before going in front of Taani with that chain. Because he wants to make sure that he doesn't become a subject to laughing later. He takes out the box and stares at it. His dreams go few steps more and he imagines himself to help it wearing around her soft neck. He feels that the pendant looks most beautiful in her body only. He comes back into reality when some one from down stair calls his name for attending the puja.



abe gadhey, tu chahe jutna bhi koshish kre, taani ke saamne toh nervous hoga hi tu! i am damn sure... par precap kuch aur hi dikha raha... pls di, zyaada serious mat kro!!!


bohot bakwaas kr chuki hu, be4 u beat me, me bhaaging, sorry if i hurted u!
love u, miss u, take care...
bye...

Edited by hima_taarey - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: taareylover14

Waooo update was amazingg..

Waited too long for it debu
Bt its k..
Lakin the update was small this time.
Plz nxt time give a bariii wali update plz.

So coming to the update i am bit scared when rey wil find out taani went there he wil be so angry on her..bt loved the way taani tried to convinece shivam.hope the bros bond gets strong soon

Nd then i am soo gald vicky gt exposed.poor simmi nw its pihus turn to see the real face of vicky.

While rey practising to give that pendent to taani was super cute..hope he gives it to her.

Nd the precap OMGGG ...its is scaring me to mmuchhh.plz galdi se update ker do plZ as am really wanna knw wt happeend to taani ...nd rey wt wil his reaction be...nd hw come pihu was there...cnt wait plz galdi se update karoo plz.


How are you Abi?
missed u
sorry, but i made a mistake, it was Simmi not Piyu who stands there
the next update will be big and good..i promise😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update :)
Pls update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
.luvly cool update!!..shivam is too much:o...taani is a swtheart<3 precap confused...wat hapnd to her?! will wait for the update tak ur own time!!!coz i dont want short update i want a lamba one with full essence as you said:) since i luv this ff vry much:):) thnks for giving update in ur busy schedule too..take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Itna chotu sa update
update was superb
taani at shivams place
taani and reys mom part awesome
atlast vickys truth come out
vicky blackmailing simmy
rey part superb he is preparing how give gift to taani
precap is scary what happen to taani
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Short yet latleast an update...

Us
update soon...
Edited by muskituski - 12 years ago

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