KIDNAP - Rajat-Mugdha - EPILOGUE UPDATED on 6/8/2013 on Page 67 - Page 33

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Posted: 12 years ago
how cn u do this yr aapne prithvi or nandu ko mar dia
plz ri8 a miracle sequance plzzz💔

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Posted: 12 years ago
hello richa sorry for being late again😕

but i hav read every update of urs...bas comment nhi kar payi

aaj kal is nanhi se jaan ko bhot kaam karna padhta h
so sorry gain

loved ur all three updates\\

jaise ki meine socha tha prithvi ayega...wo aya bhi n ahem ahem scenes bhi aye

😳 blush blushhh


hmm kafi problems h dono ki life me

prithvi ko lagta h nadu uske saath safe nhi h but wo sabse jyada safe ussi ke sath h

der se hi sahi dumbo ko baat samjh aa gyi n or apni nandu ko lekar bhaag gya

or uske baad jo hua

mein nhi bol sakhti

blushhh☺️☺️

very steamy n hot part tha by god

well i loved both of them a lot becoz they are cutest pair ever...n romance karte hue bhi bhot hi acche lagta h

nandu ko shaadi karni h prithvi se or lo ho bhi gyi

par end me kya kar diya dono villians ne apne hi baccho ko bomb se uda diya

waise unhe kuch hoga nhi i know becoz me chahti hun ki prithvi dono ki saari bones break kar de

or agar usne kuch nhi kiya to mein khud aa jaungi😡i hate them

huh!

last part pls update soon

lovely update as usual

love u
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice ending dear liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superbbb update 😊 loved prithvi's caring n possessive attitude towards his nandini😳 specially the way he stared at her lovingly all thrugh the night is fabulous 😃 n love the romantic scene between them 😳 😳 😳 on the other hand,nandini got feared of thinking bout d separation...so she wants 2 get married n prthvi also agreed immediately😃 😃 😃
but der criminal family didnt accept n tried 2 killed them...just hate d fathers😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
but our prithvi is a real hero n didnt allow dat stupid RP to touch his nandini👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
thank god that the collector reached at the right time⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
now all wll go 2 jail😃 😃 😃 bt I want a harsh punishment of that family
n prithvi is sooo intelligent n wisely stole d original papers of the real land owner lik his father😆😆😆😆😆
finally our love birds got married🥳🥳
but wat u have done richa????😲 😲 😲 😲 😲
der devil brother killed dem!!!!😭😭😭😭😭
dis is nt fair
plz do sumthing
waiting 4 the epilogue 😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeh kya tha,yr??last part?i didnt expectd it suddenly.aur ending v to kya?ship mein chare,usme bomb tha...blast hogaya aur dono mar geye?tujhe mein nei chorungi,richu...ayse kyse end kiya tune?
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Posted: 11 years ago
For part 13
Superb part
thank god both sneak out from nandini's house
wat a passionate moment b/w both
it was a very hot and sensuous update
at last both moved their relationship to their next level

For part 14&15
awsome part
luved the morning session
both the parents are busy in their land matter but nobody is bothered o have a look where their children are
at last both get married
wah kya jawab diya prithvi ne nandini ke dad ko
kya entry mari hai collector ne just like a hero nd sb ki bolti band kara di
wat a cruel people apne hi bacho ko marva diya
very sad ending
waiting 4 d epilogue
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Posted: 11 years ago


EPILOGUE

A beautiful shiny day. Sun rays are coming from the windows. He removed his duvet and searched for his shorts. He is still yawning but scanned whole room in her search. She was not there and he feels restlessness in his tired body. He came down to hall and looked outside through the shiny windows and yes his assumption was right.


She is in pool. He chuckled seeing her sight. His steps automaticaly moved outside.

He came and stood near the pool. They looked each other lovingly. She swimmed to the rail of the pool. She gave her hand to him in way of invitation but he denied with a grinn. She pouts and he smile wide. He bend down and dipped his legs inside the pool. She took some water in her hand and gently poured on his face. The water desend from his forehead to his nose then lips. He opened his eyes and looked her sensuously. Now its his turn. He jumped in the pool and grabbed her. He slowly moved his hand on her back. 1 hand resting on her waist and one on her hair. By pusshing them back their closeness made them anticipated. He looked at her swallon lips,still craving to kiss. He pulled her from her waist and bend on her lips to suck their juice. He bit and suck until she respond back in a samw hugry way of him. He squezeed her sleek waist in his rough palms,pulling more to him. She moaned in his mouth. To grab some air both parted and he glance hystericaly in her eyes. marks of last passionate night was still red and shined more in sun light. She rubbed her palms on his scratches made by her only.

'Prithavi is this...?',she was abot to ask is his marks are paining or not but he again took her petals in his mouth and made her shut.

'happy 5th anniversary jaan',He wished and both lip locked one more time.


'happy anniversary darling.',she too wished him. Both came out from pool and he scooped her in his arms,made a way to their room. Prithavi took her into bathroom. She removed her inners reveaaling her naked body and laid down in bath tub. He too removed his shorts and joined her in tub. He impatiently began to kiss her soft lips. Suddenly he stopped kissing and looked at her. Nandani's heart fluffered at the sight of his dark intence eyes. Oh how much she loved these dark eyes. He slightly pushed her back into the tub,resting on the bath tub walls and proceed to kiss her bare chest. He teased her by making lazy circles around her nipples. Her bossoms were erect and begging for his attentions. Nandani let out a moan when she felt his warm lips lightly kiss her nipples. Prithavi flicked his tongue over both of them,making her moan louder and louder. She soon felt his hand grip them ever so tightly and squeez her. She gasped and threw her head back as Prithavi licked,sucked,nibbled and squezeed her bossoms and nipples almost constantly. Soon his hand slipped down from his shoulder to his inner thighs and firmly gripped his erect manhood. He stopped suddenly and pulled her hand away.

He held her soft hand and licked her fingers one by one. She feels sensation and giggled. Her giggles made him grew more demanding. After licking her fingers he took her knees and gently spread them apart. Nandani moaned from excitement and impatiently whimpered. Prithavai slowly kissed from he knee to her inner thigh as she begged for him to please her. Prithavi's kisses sent rushes of temptation throughout her hot body.

Now she could no longer take it and whimpered loudly on him. Prithavi smrked at her and spread her legs even wider. She moaned,still waiting impatiently. Her forbidden area soaked now and her c*** throbbed for him. Prithavi eyes her body greedily,feeling grateful that he was the one who able to taste that very gorgeous and soft milky skin. He looked up to glance in her eyes as he moved in her. Nandani let out a gasp and moaned loudly as Prithavi flicked his warm tongue continously over her c***. He watched her moaned her delightfuly as he massaged her bossoms roughly. Soon he raised and placed himself on the counter and slipped in her. She moaned again. As he settled in her,he began to thrusting against her. He pulled her closer to his body and kept trusting harder. Each time her bossoms rubbed against his hardened chest making the pleasure felt grow. She moaned badly. The water of tub splashing all over them and out of the tub,wetting the floor,not that they care. Both parted as sweat beads ran down their faces. flashing each other a satisfied smile as they pulled apart and get out of the tub. He wrapped her in a towel and bring her out. Both dried them selves and dressed up. Though Prithavi made it very difficult for her with his naughty acts but she manage to wear her clothes...


CONTINUE IN NEXT COMMENT...
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Posted: 11 years ago


CONTINUE...

PRITHAVI hugged her from backside and she was lost somewhere. Seeing no moment from her side,he turned her around and saw her teary eyes. Prithavi beared everything but a single drop of her tear is enough to made him restless and mad.

'what happned Jaan. I am sorry if i hurt...',she wont make him complete,by putting her palm on his mouth. Prithavi held her hand and glance his face as he is readin her mind. 'not again. Pichhle 5 saal se yai ho raha hai. Nandani for god sake bhul jao un sabko. Wo sab humare liye usi dinn mar gaye the jis dinn un sabne hume marne ki koshish ki thi.',he yelled on her. Nandani snuggled him and rested her head on his shoulder and rubbed her palm on his chest. 'Nandani pls dont spoil ur mood sply on today.',he lowered his voice and asked softly.

'Prithavi how can they do that to us. If on that day ur mom not informed us on time we must died in their trap.',her hoarse voice and trembleing hands told him her fear.

'Nandani y u remember all those things. We must leave all behind 5 years back. Jis dinn main tumhe tumhare ghar se lene aaya tha usi dinn sab decide ho gaya tha. Collector mujhe mile or unhne sab bataya. Usi time maine decide kar lia tha ki papers unhe dunga. Or dekho badle me unhone humari shadi b karwa di. Mom ne jab sab btaya to unhone hume safly underwater pehle hi nikal dia.',He too reme:bered that painful day.


'Prithavi wo humare bhai the or firr b humari daeth ka jashan mana rae the. Mom ki wajhse hum yaha aa gaye or mamaji ne yaha hume settle kia. Agr wo na hoti to aaj hum sath b na hote.'

'right. Un janwaro k beech me ek woi thi jinki wajhser main un jaisa nai hua. Dad ne gunah kiye or aaj jail me hai mere b or tumhare bhi. Der se hi sai unhe apne kie gunaho ki saza mili. Or ab agr aage Angad bhais,Dhruv or Rahul ne apni rah nahi badli to wo log b jald wai honge. Khair chhodo ye sab,ready ho jao mamaji k ghar jana hai. Aarav b humari rah dekh raha hoga.',Prithavi cupped her face and calmed her.

Both went to their uncle's house where an middle aged man is so much busy in playing with a small kid of 8 months. Both smile seeing their little angel. Both touched their Uncle's feet and he hugged and blessed both. Aarav start wriggling seeing his mother. Nandani immediately took him in his arms and kissed lovingle. He rested his head on her sholder longing for her love.



'bhai meri ek slah manoge?'Mamaji asked and both nodded.'tum dono ko to ek dusre se fursat milti nahi hai ye bechara pura time mere sath hi khelta rehta hai. Ek kaam karo iske liye ek jeeta jagta khilona le aao taki ye uske sath apna time spend kar ske.',he teased them both and they flushed furiously. 'ok ok there is one more good news for u. Prithavi jin do deals k liye tumne itni mehnat ki hi wo hume mil gai hai.',he added and told him about his business.

'i knew it mamaji,ki deal hume hi milegi.',he said confidently.

'i wish ur all dreams come true beta. So ready for tonight's party?'

both nodded. Aarav is happy with his mother only. He playing with her eyes,hairs and neck piece. In between he used to kiss her also. Prithavi adored their bond and caressed his soft head.

In evng a rand party is organised by his Uncle. All big names of South Africa was present in the party. They wished them and in this Nandani forgot her all dark memories. Aarav get tired and slept soon. As all gusts leave,both moved to their room. Nandani came in room and after change and grabbed by Prithavi soon.

'Prithavi leave me. Har waqt badmashi achhi nahi hai.',she cribbd pusing him back.

Prithavi pulled her more to him and her bossoms rubbed against his chest.'why?i think dont u remember what mamaji suggest us in mrng.',he said in a husky tone and made her flushed crimson red.

'abi nai. Aarav is very small.',she made an excuse.

'ha to kya hua? Baby to 9month k baad aayega na tab tak Aarav 1 saal se upar ho jayega. Or waise b want one cute little princess just like u.',he nuzzled on her nose and she felt shy. Prithavi scooped her and moved to their bed. Both made love until their bodies give up. Both panting heavily. Their immence love for each other complete them.

Prithavi embraced her and she too snuggled him. Their eyes gleamed,having no sign of worries. Both are happy their in the world of their true love where no one is trying to parted them. Their families killed them but their love saved them. Leaving all hurdles behind they moved on together,strengthing each other as a true friends. In past 5 years their love grew stronger and stronger and bounds them till eternity...
Edited by richadhami - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update dear
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update .. dear happy ending 👏
Edited by rsusmita - 11 years ago

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