Virika FF: Written in my heart (Chp 8 pg 56)

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Krystlektacker

@Krystlektacker

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

oh no my virika! cant se them in pain..i want to kill that nira stupid girl .egarly waiting for their patch up come up with next part soon..

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Fairuz Maliha

@virikamaliha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Awesome...
Poor jeevika...wanna kill nira...
Hope viren will make jeevika happy ...
Continue soon...

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girl97

@girl97

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Wow an update

That made me happy

And this updat is awesome

But haing that Nira girl

Wanna kill her

Everything is happening because of her

I felt so sad on jeevika's measges

Waiting for viren to pacify her

Do update soon please

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Charu

@-Charu-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Wow! Wow! Wow!
This is actually my fav story now!!
No one actually can beat this!
I read the update like 6 times n I'll read the entire story again now!!
GF Jiii
You got me crazy with this
Nira, urghhh I hate her already 😡
Awww my poor Jeevika is upset 😭

You better make Viren pacify her in the next update or else you are gone..
I hate Viren for this today!!
Update real soon!!

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BloomingAway

@BloomingAway

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

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Unres

Loved the update

It was phenomenal

Hate Nira she is such a idiot

For the first ever I'm hating Viren

But I know I'm going to love him again later on

Love how the whole family stuck up for Jeevika

Especially loved Maanvi's reaction because she knew Nira was the cause of Virika fighting

Hate that Virika fought

Love how you've described Jeevika's anger and Viren's regret

Felt so sorry for Jeevika she was crying

Loved Viren's idea what a brain he has

You stopped at the worst part ever

Can't wait to see how Viren pacifies Jeevika

Can't wait for the next update

Thanks for the pm

Please continue soon

Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago

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Maryam Maqsood

@maryammaqsood92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

AWESOME UPDATE

GOSHHH DIS NIRA IS SUCH AN A B**** 😡

HOWEVER AMAZING UPDATE...CONTINUE SOON

THNX FOR DA PM 😳

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Charu

@-Charu-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Can u update already? 😛

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kryanvirika05

@kryanvirika05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

I love this update!!!
And I hate nira equally!
Viren really needs to realise that she's up to no good!!
Poor Jeevika! My heart goes out for her!

Update soon!

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..Amrita..

@..Amrita..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Awesome...!!!
hate that nira...coz of her virika had fight
the fighting part and guilty part was vry vry well written yamiii
that nira too hate jeevs bt acting innocent
viren was feeling so guilty for hurting jeevs
loved the updt
it ws superb
brilliant
eagerly waiting for the nxt updt
continue soon