ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 2 [Completed]

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jeetega

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

That was a complex maze of characters and personalities. The games each player plays is intricate and highly complex. The whole story is as good as any best selling thriller and beautifully executed. Take a bow, you deserve more!!!

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Mani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

I read this again...
At the end of the day the conclusion is i havn't read any ff or story which could match up with this masterpiece...seriously the plot n the characters are so intriguing, but i do feel the story hasn't got the limelight it deserves...keep writing

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RockBarbie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: sarun22
I read this again...
At the end of the day the conclusion is i havn't read any ff or story which could match up with this masterpiece...seriously the plot n the characters are so intriguing, but i do feel the story hasn't got the limelight it deserves...keep writing

You are reading it again and that's a fantastic prize for me :=)

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akai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Oh finally.

I became insane.

I need to study the theory of sanity and insanity.

U have pulled a great stunt in penning ur thoughts.

It's really really very difficult to penned up these concepts.

I have not read anything similar to this.

Hats off captain

Do continue your work

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dair10arshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

This is freakishly insane. How do u come up with such stories. Everytime I think I have got this figured out I am sucked back into the spiral. U have a gift. U shud really start writing professionally. The twist in the thread 2 is mindblowing.
I'm really speechless here. Everybody is being played. Although I still haven't figured out malvika's reason of interest in khushi. All I would say people like khushi n Tara r sick. Sorry I dnt mean to offend u. This is by far the most complicated story I have ever read. Hats off! 👏

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mythraye

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Mind blowing. Seriously... No words... Great mind to think...

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moonstonespirit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Just how do you manage to come up with such masterpieces??

Loved the story... The complexities of the characters had me hooked up to the story!!! Loved the way you un-wound these knots of mystery.

Going to attack the next FF on your index!!!

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

hi..read all the chappys in 1 go...loved it..actually i had read first chappy of 2nd thread some time ago..but didnt start this one cos reading arshi stories set in a totally alien AU takes me some time...but i loved it...like they say - a page turner..😊..shyam being delusional abt anjali - hard to pull this one off..but u did expertly using ryt words...

while reading this 1, i thot of casual vacancy by jk rowling..chose to read tat work of hers cos m a fan of crime fiction...reading tat buk..as ntertaining as watchng paint dry..sort of skim read till the end...i knw its not fair to compare ur work with hers..but this one is so much more complex n entertaining...usually n a story, there is 1 cat n mouse game..here it was like u had 3 characters - arnav, akash n khushi let lose in a labbyrinth...sometimes being cat and sometimes being mouse...great work...😊

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

This is brilliant!!

My mind is reeling after I finish reading this after going back & forth over who is sane or insane.. Everyone had a hidden agenda and the way you wove it together was just brilliant👏

Although I never believed Khushi killed her sister, she turned out to be more sinister than that in the end for absolutely having no remorse at all!! In that way Tara was a better human bring for having repented for her actions but I don't know what to say about her for the last game she played with Khushi!! I really feel sad for these two sisters, this cannot be just the result of their upbringing is it? There is something wrong at least with Khushi in the way she harbored ill feelings for her parents from the day her mother remarried and she never came out of it.. For sure she had an un diagnosed mental disease😕 Tara at least seemed to be normal in her childhood..

Shyam is a psycho and I could never understand how he remained in his job even after exhibiting his psychosis and the ACP suspected him of killing Akash's family.. I guess it's his turn to be incarcerated once Khushi's evidence reaches whoever.. Which means Khushi can get out but now that Shukla defeated her in her game, I wonder if she becomes more dangerous with the rest of her stay at the facility.. Now may be Arnav and Khushi destroy each other with their narcissistic tendencies and their need to have an upper hand over the other.. 🤢

The only people who deserved sympathies were Akash & Payal..

Tara's road rage and that she wouldn't let Lavanya pass her is so true in real life esp. on US highways..Couple of months ago a Houston woman got shot in the back of her head on her way to work for the same reasons.. I always wonder how people give into their anger and destroy their chance at life

I was rooting for Shukla as the story was nearing end; this Khushi and Arnav left a bitter taste in the mouth and it will take me some time to get over them :)

This was one flawlessly executed story, take a bow RB 👏 You amaze me. Really.

As many before me have recounted you need to be in the list of published authors, best selling actually..

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#210

I also wanted to say, the way you crafted Shyam's own delusions about his wife was brilliant; it reminded me of "Sixth sense" where we realize Bruce Willis was dead only at the almost end.. As I haven't read or watched Psycho, I didn't know about Norman Bates.. Saw another reader's comment and when I read wiki, gave me chills and got more chills when I read about the Wisconsin guy on whom Psycho is based..

You write about the intricacies of human mind so well, are you Psychiatrist by any chance along with being a writer? And you are Sookie on Twitter right? I see that you are always reading books.. :)

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